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It is rough to get through the first 20-25 chapters where the MC is growing up. The 20 chapters I got through could have been made into 5 and you get the same amount of info. It feels like maybe only 1 new thing is introduced per chapter (or nothing new at all) and the rest of it is about says he is responsible for a legacy ever other word.
l'histoire est vraiment bonne j'espère que tu va la continuer car c très bien parti et d'après ce que j'ai vu je n'est pas vu d'autre ff sur un peverell je l'aime beaucoup continue comme ca
Haven’t read much of it but after the first few paragraphs it’s already quite obvious that it is ai written. Too many over top descriptions and it feels unnatural
at first you will be enticed to keep reading the work, telling your self that this book is a unique one. but as you keep reading you will feel that something is amiss. it is like that every words is repeating, that every paragraph is too wordy to read and the book is becoming bothersome to read. i don't know, is it wordy or the idea/words are being repeated that this book starts to become boring. though if that all changes, it is quite a read actually
from the description, I don't like the idea that death is his teacher death has no friend I will give a go if it's good I will change my review
Creating this fanfic thus far has been a journey of bringing to life a character who embodies both the power and the vulnerability of someone destined for greatness. Damian's story is not just about mastering magic but about navigating the complexities of legacy, identity, and the weight of expectations. It's a tale of growth, of facing the unknown with courage, and of discovering the strength that lies within. I hope that you as readers will find yourselves immersed in his world, rooting for him as he steps into a destiny that is as daunting as it is extraordinary.
It is rough to get through the first 20-25 chapters where the MC is growing up. The 20 chapters I got through could have been made into 5 and you get the same amount of info. It feels like maybe only 1 new thing is introduced per chapter (or nothing new at all) and the rest of it is about says he is responsible for a legacy ever other word.
l'histoire est vraiment bonne j'espère que tu va la continuer car c très bien parti et d'après ce que j'ai vu je n'est pas vu d'autre ff sur un peverell je l'aime beaucoup continue comme ca
Haven’t read much of it but after the first few paragraphs it’s already quite obvious that it is ai written. Too many over top descriptions and it feels unnatural
at first you will be enticed to keep reading the work, telling your self that this book is a unique one. but as you keep reading you will feel that something is amiss. it is like that every words is repeating, that every paragraph is too wordy to read and the book is becoming bothersome to read. i don't know, is it wordy or the idea/words are being repeated that this book starts to become boring. though if that all changes, it is quite a read actually
from the description, I don't like the idea that death is his teacher death has no friend I will give a go if it's good I will change my review
Creating this fanfic thus far has been a journey of bringing to life a character who embodies both the power and the vulnerability of someone destined for greatness. Damian's story is not just about mastering magic but about navigating the complexities of legacy, identity, and the weight of expectations. It's a tale of growth, of facing the unknown with courage, and of discovering the strength that lies within. I hope that you as readers will find yourselves immersed in his world, rooting for him as he steps into a destiny that is as daunting as it is extraordinary.