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First of great idea for a story. But it feels written by AI lot of repeated elements about grand destiny's, purposes and such without making much sense. I once tried using AI to write a story and these same elements popped out. I recommend to lessen them to an extend and maybe only use it as an guideline to then change to what you want or refining sentence structures.
definitly written through or with ai. Good premise and writing style, but that was it. Kind of inconsistant and not thinking about its own background, It repeadetly speaks about great destiny but does basicly nothing while making the mc already a known figure in the world. To the author: Write yourself or just send people the info what ai you use.
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First of great idea for a story. But it feels written by AI lot of repeated elements about grand destiny's, purposes and such without making much sense. I once tried using AI to write a story and these same elements popped out. I recommend to lessen them to an extend and maybe only use it as an guideline to then change to what you want or refining sentence structures.
definitly written through or with ai. Good premise and writing style, but that was it. Kind of inconsistant and not thinking about its own background, It repeadetly speaks about great destiny but does basicly nothing while making the mc already a known figure in the world. To the author: Write yourself or just send people the info what ai you use.