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Author likes ntr so much he cucked his own novel. Honestly the story was great up until the time I’m writing this at around 300 chapters. The scenes were great and I like the story, however the author basically had burnout and what I can only assume writers block. Author basically just asked what readers wanted and is now playing catch up to rewrite a revenge ending. The story now feels rushed and scenes go by fast or are mostly skipped and detailed parts feel thrown in. I have no doubt that the author had a plan for the original ending which is why parts like Carla’s scene and Leon’s backstory feel similar is quality to earlier parts but that they lost their drive and forgot most of what they were planning up until now. I hope that this doesn’t just become the author shoehorning in a bunch of women to replace the old characters but the direction seems to almost point that way with the newest introduction. Hope the author can at least deliver a satisfactory conclusion to this work or just drop it cause I don’t even want this to be just some half baked revenge story after everything that has happened in literally the whole entire book
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Good novel....................................................................................................................j'ai hâte de la vengeance
. It has illustrations of the characters. ............................................................... ............................................................
This is a really hot read, the mc is such a beta lol. I'm still hoping the Hero will get betrayed by having 'his' girls start to love Leon more.
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The character and writing quality are quite good. The world background still needs a bit. mc still needs some development and it's better to get him accepted
Dayum, i was waiting decades for the latest chapter more chapter please[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muy buena escritura e historia, es uno de los mejores ntr que he leído. Me gusta que cada personaje tiene carisma y no son simples npc sin personalidad.
to be honest, you wrote this book well. but is it possible to make the Mc the one not being ntr'd.
Really good story!!!! GOOD CHARACTERS And the updates are also on a regular basis It has some really great things about it and Hope that the author continues to update it
I absolutely hate this book I truly wish the mc wins in the end but I doubt it but I'll tell you this your writing and the book is good I just hope you use your skills to write a book without ntr
TBH it's a good book but how they do not notice how the MC is feeling even though ik he is hiding it is what made it terrible and the female characters accepted it way too easily. If you enjoy these kind of stuff it's a good book cause i read this for the corn because the quality are good but the way the author wrote it is so good that it made my heart ache for the protagaonist.
It is really good story. Storytelling is ggood The chpts are i hope uploaded more at a time instead of only 3-4 that are uploaded every alternate day
I mean it's still good but the amount of chapters uploaded keeps getting lesser and lesser and it's getting kinda boring because of that Even if you are updating less chapters atleast update them everyday so it does not get boring
I mean it’s still good but the chapters keep getting lesser and lesser It’s getting a bit boring at this point
Hope that you don’t drop this novel And release the chapters as soon as possible
Bro come on Upload the chapters a bit quicker It has already gone done to 4 chps a time atleast try to update the story everyday I just Hope the novel is updated asap
I find the book really interesting and good Hope the author updates the book as soon a possible
It is a really good novel I just hope to read the chapters as soon as possible So please update them as soon as possible And i just hope that the keep coming out on a daily basis
my fellpw brothers....if you like the "cultured genre this novel is for you. 10/10 absolutely love the scenes so far keep it up author!
Oi oi go update your other book “Only boy in family full of women”…….ya left us hanging.
MC's women are too naive and insensitive to their "beloved" at the beginning nefore the revenge arc. I'm willing to change rating after reading more if the author decides to continue this book.
Revelar spoiler Author likes ntr so much he cucked his own novel. Honestly the story was great up until the time I’m writing this at around 300 chapters. The scenes were great and I like the story, however the author basically had burnout and what I can only assume writers block. Author basically just asked what readers wanted and is now playing catch up to rewrite a revenge ending. The story now feels rushed and scenes go by fast or are mostly skipped and detailed parts feel thrown in. I have no doubt that the author had a plan for the original ending which is why parts like Carla’s scene and Leon’s backstory feel similar is quality to earlier parts but that they lost their drive and forgot most of what they were planning up until now. I hope that this doesn’t just become the author shoehorning in a bunch of women to replace the old characters but the direction seems to almost point that way with the newest introduction. Hope the author can at least deliver a satisfactory conclusion to this work or just drop it cause I don’t even want this to be just some half baked revenge story after everything that has happened in literally the whole entire book
Revelar spoiler Good novel....................................................................................................................j'ai hâte de la vengeance
. It has illustrations of the characters. ............................................................... ............................................................
This is a really hot read, the mc is such a beta lol. I'm still hoping the Hero will get betrayed by having 'his' girls start to love Leon more.
Revelar spoiler The character and writing quality are quite good. The world background still needs a bit. mc still needs some development and it's better to get him accepted
Dayum, i was waiting decades for the latest chapter more chapter please[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muy buena escritura e historia, es uno de los mejores ntr que he leído. Me gusta que cada personaje tiene carisma y no son simples npc sin personalidad.
to be honest, you wrote this book well. but is it possible to make the Mc the one not being ntr'd.
Really good story!!!! GOOD CHARACTERS And the updates are also on a regular basis It has some really great things about it and Hope that the author continues to update it
I absolutely hate this book I truly wish the mc wins in the end but I doubt it but I'll tell you this your writing and the book is good I just hope you use your skills to write a book without ntr
TBH it's a good book but how they do not notice how the MC is feeling even though ik he is hiding it is what made it terrible and the female characters accepted it way too easily. If you enjoy these kind of stuff it's a good book cause i read this for the corn because the quality are good but the way the author wrote it is so good that it made my heart ache for the protagaonist.
It is really good story. Storytelling is ggood The chpts are i hope uploaded more at a time instead of only 3-4 that are uploaded every alternate day
I mean it's still good but the amount of chapters uploaded keeps getting lesser and lesser and it's getting kinda boring because of that Even if you are updating less chapters atleast update them everyday so it does not get boring
I mean it’s still good but the chapters keep getting lesser and lesser It’s getting a bit boring at this point
Hope that you don’t drop this novel And release the chapters as soon as possible
Bro come on Upload the chapters a bit quicker It has already gone done to 4 chps a time atleast try to update the story everyday I just Hope the novel is updated asap
I find the book really interesting and good Hope the author updates the book as soon a possible
It is a really good novel I just hope to read the chapters as soon as possible So please update them as soon as possible And i just hope that the keep coming out on a daily basis
my fellpw brothers....if you like the "cultured genre this novel is for you. 10/10 absolutely love the scenes so far keep it up author!
Oi oi go update your other book “Only boy in family full of women”…….ya left us hanging.
MC's women are too naive and insensitive to their "beloved" at the beginning nefore the revenge arc. I'm willing to change rating after reading more if the author decides to continue this book.
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