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Please don't drop this is the 3rd time I've read this translation and both times got dropped or deleted
ive read it before but that one was on either hiatus or dropped and yes ut was just a translation then too..............................................
Good story. But if you want to translate fan fiction, then please delve into the original. It’s not your fault, because there’s also a mistake in the original. The first ring is not a spider, but a snake. There are still a couple of quibbles with the fanfic, but tolerable. I know fanfictions where they add things that break the logic of the world.
Please don't drop this is the 3rd time I've read this translation and both times got dropped or deleted
ive read it before but that one was on either hiatus or dropped and yes ut was just a translation then too..............................................
Good story. But if you want to translate fan fiction, then please delve into the original. It’s not your fault, because there’s also a mistake in the original. The first ring is not a spider, but a snake. There are still a couple of quibbles with the fanfic, but tolerable. I know fanfictions where they add things that break the logic of the world.