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Why is everyone a sociopath? It is difficult to suspend my disbelief and immerse myself in the story when behavior and emotional reactions are not stable. In the fourth chapter, I was expecting the MC to wake-up from a nightmare. The principle is a sociopath. The spectators, even a bunch of ten-year-old's going through the same thing; all sociopaths?
Can't expect much from a solo levelling fan fiction. Author denys it but read maybe 10 chapters and tell me I'm wrong (as long as you've actually read solo levelling). If you haven't read solo levelling you'll enjoy it but it's a carbon copy but with skeletons instead of shadows for those who have.
Reading Status, Chapter 77: I can say, this Novel is messed up, its goes from one Mess/Drama into the next one, a Dark bunch of Betrayal, sudden Enemies and death. In this Novel you wont find Peace or Hope, just Death, Pain and a moment to breath, only to get betrayal in the next moment. I could have a bit more details, sadly its missing quite a bit of depth & focus on the Drama/Dark ongoing and the Abilities of the MC also need more details, as like this is the Story quite Fast-Paced.
Solo leveling copier with a blunt mc ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Alright, alright, listen up, folks—lemme lay it down for ya, Ausy-style. We got ourselves a story here on WebNovel, and I’ll be real: it’s got about as much originality as a knock-off handbag in a tourist trap. The kind where every chapter reads like a sob story assembly line. You know the drill—MC’s got talent, gets shunned, something tragic happens, rinse, repeat. Like the author just took the ol’ “copy-paste tragedy” handbook, switched up a few names, and called it a day. It’s like they’re tossing these backstories out on a conveyor belt, but forgot to add any real flavor. Now don’t get me wrong, a cliché here and there? Fine. Sprinkle ‘em like seasoning, you feel me? But when the whole damn plot’s made of ’em? That’s like eating a whole bowl of salt and calling it soup. I’m sittin’ here with nothin’ but a foggy mess in my head, like, “Was this story any different from the last ten I skimmed?” Nah, not really. Coulda been epic if they just threw somethin’ wild into the mix—a freak accident leaves him blind, or, I don’t know, hit him with some good ol’ amnesia, split personalities… anything but the same ol’ “my life’s a tragedy” rerun. So take my advice: ditch those tired-ass clichés and aim for somethin’ fresh. We rebuke the unholy cycle of overdone tropes, praise originality Buddha! Monkey clichés, be gone! Take a step towards creative enlightenment, friend—you’ll thank me later.
it’s to cliche little sister plot device who adds nothing but just a piece for mc to make himself grow stronger idk i guess doing thing for yourself isn’t a thing anymore mother dies and father leaves sister can go to college but he can barely pay medical bills mc dies in a raid awakens op powers you know pretty much the classic little sister plot device why? FOR NO REASON sick mother why? TO SHOW TRAGEDY also the father walked out of them but in all honesty what is author obsession with giving the mc a little who does absolutely nothing they all have the same personality authors just forgot about little brothers as well
Nice work and great writing quality, though at times it doesn't click with me,but overall I like the work.
This book has really got me, it's painful the author locked early but still worth my fast pass.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ five stars to you
I just wanted to make a ruckus here. I like the book.....m.m.m.kfbneisnsmsojsdid..sjndjsowndiodnr
Really a good idea, like the plot and the fact that it doesn't have much errors, Author should keep it up, your mass release is really great keep it up and reach 200 chaps this month😆😆😆
It's nice at most. Really love the idea and character growth, the system is actually captivating. Can't find a reason to dislike the work. Keep going Author
This is without a doubt one of the best books I have ever read, love the lore and grit 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Awesome stuff. The way Axel and Velerium have that combo... Shit advice and wise transmigrator
Really messed up world....🤔🤔🤔☠️☠️ I never imagined system and aliens In a dungeon type world. Keep up the good work
I absolutely love your Harry especially) , (if you can). Can you spread the love by checking out my book Dove And Crow by Xolu.
My WPC entry, for lovers of System, leveling up and more genres to follow. Thank you
I just read the first couple chapters and it is very inconsistent. First off the “awakening age” goes from 10 in the book description to 13 in chapter 1 then back to 10 after the awakening scene. Then it is just confusing and feels generic. It is confusing because they never describe the awakening rank and after the awakening scene there is a year long time skip. All of a sudden he is labeled as a e-rank awakened? They give no background as to what that entails. Then it feels generic because all males and age mates abandon the main character there are at least 50-200 books that are similar if not follow the same path. I honestly have given up on trying to follow the book at this point and am dropping it. For me the beginning lacked the quality I consider necessary to put my time into reading the book.
Why is everyone a sociopath? It is difficult to suspend my disbelief and immerse myself in the story when behavior and emotional reactions are not stable. In the fourth chapter, I was expecting the MC to wake-up from a nightmare. The principle is a sociopath. The spectators, even a bunch of ten-year-old's going through the same thing; all sociopaths?
Can't expect much from a solo levelling fan fiction. Author denys it but read maybe 10 chapters and tell me I'm wrong (as long as you've actually read solo levelling). If you haven't read solo levelling you'll enjoy it but it's a carbon copy but with skeletons instead of shadows for those who have.
Reading Status, Chapter 77: I can say, this Novel is messed up, its goes from one Mess/Drama into the next one, a Dark bunch of Betrayal, sudden Enemies and death. In this Novel you wont find Peace or Hope, just Death, Pain and a moment to breath, only to get betrayal in the next moment. I could have a bit more details, sadly its missing quite a bit of depth & focus on the Drama/Dark ongoing and the Abilities of the MC also need more details, as like this is the Story quite Fast-Paced.
Solo leveling copier with a blunt mc ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Alright, alright, listen up, folks—lemme lay it down for ya, Ausy-style. We got ourselves a story here on WebNovel, and I’ll be real: it’s got about as much originality as a knock-off handbag in a tourist trap. The kind where every chapter reads like a sob story assembly line. You know the drill—MC’s got talent, gets shunned, something tragic happens, rinse, repeat. Like the author just took the ol’ “copy-paste tragedy” handbook, switched up a few names, and called it a day. It’s like they’re tossing these backstories out on a conveyor belt, but forgot to add any real flavor. Now don’t get me wrong, a cliché here and there? Fine. Sprinkle ‘em like seasoning, you feel me? But when the whole damn plot’s made of ’em? That’s like eating a whole bowl of salt and calling it soup. I’m sittin’ here with nothin’ but a foggy mess in my head, like, “Was this story any different from the last ten I skimmed?” Nah, not really. Coulda been epic if they just threw somethin’ wild into the mix—a freak accident leaves him blind, or, I don’t know, hit him with some good ol’ amnesia, split personalities… anything but the same ol’ “my life’s a tragedy” rerun. So take my advice: ditch those tired-ass clichés and aim for somethin’ fresh. We rebuke the unholy cycle of overdone tropes, praise originality Buddha! Monkey clichés, be gone! Take a step towards creative enlightenment, friend—you’ll thank me later.
it’s to cliche little sister plot device who adds nothing but just a piece for mc to make himself grow stronger idk i guess doing thing for yourself isn’t a thing anymore mother dies and father leaves sister can go to college but he can barely pay medical bills mc dies in a raid awakens op powers you know pretty much the classic little sister plot device why? FOR NO REASON sick mother why? TO SHOW TRAGEDY also the father walked out of them but in all honesty what is author obsession with giving the mc a little who does absolutely nothing they all have the same personality authors just forgot about little brothers as well
Nice work and great writing quality, though at times it doesn't click with me,but overall I like the work.
This book has really got me, it's painful the author locked early but still worth my fast pass.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ five stars to you
I just wanted to make a ruckus here. I like the book.....m.m.m.kfbneisnsmsojsdid..sjndjsowndiodnr
Really a good idea, like the plot and the fact that it doesn't have much errors, Author should keep it up, your mass release is really great keep it up and reach 200 chaps this month😆😆😆
It's nice at most. Really love the idea and character growth, the system is actually captivating. Can't find a reason to dislike the work. Keep going Author
This is without a doubt one of the best books I have ever read, love the lore and grit 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Awesome stuff. The way Axel and Velerium have that combo... Shit advice and wise transmigrator
Really messed up world....🤔🤔🤔☠️☠️ I never imagined system and aliens In a dungeon type world. Keep up the good work
I absolutely love your Harry especially) , (if you can). Can you spread the love by checking out my book Dove And Crow by Xolu.
My WPC entry, for lovers of System, leveling up and more genres to follow. Thank you
I just read the first couple chapters and it is very inconsistent. First off the “awakening age” goes from 10 in the book description to 13 in chapter 1 then back to 10 after the awakening scene. Then it is just confusing and feels generic. It is confusing because they never describe the awakening rank and after the awakening scene there is a year long time skip. All of a sudden he is labeled as a e-rank awakened? They give no background as to what that entails. Then it feels generic because all males and age mates abandon the main character there are at least 50-200 books that are similar if not follow the same path. I honestly have given up on trying to follow the book at this point and am dropping it. For me the beginning lacked the quality I consider necessary to put my time into reading the book.