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Escribe una reseñait started good with a very good character development but the last 40 chapter or so everything just crumbled the mc is way too lazy and doesn't have any ambition and not in a good way it is just utter bullshit at this point the mc became the strongest but instead of unifying the world he just got married and stayed in konoha for 3 years doing nothing . let us get to the harem it's just bullshit at first there were some character development you could see how feeling started to form between mc and the girls but then it's like they all disappeared there is no mention of any of the girls except one after chapter 160 (or so) I mean the mc spent 160 chapters building relationships with them (with the intention of marrying them) then he just forgot about them . DON'T READ IT , IT IS UTTER SHIT AT THIS POINT A MAJOR WASTE OF TIME .
well .... making danzo hokage is just ... sigh story was good until this but now im not sure i want to continue reading this story But thats a great FF overall so if you readers dont care about Danzo give it a shot its a good read
well , I liked this fanfic alot even with itz slow pacing and how author did bullshit with Naruto and all I mean mc stole sealed book from naruto just to throw it away i mean he didnt't even open that up because he is too dependant on sasuke..So naruto didnt't pass mc took spot of naruto , dude what about plot armour of naruto even with no plot Armour ninja village didnt't want jinchuriki to graduate , hiruzen let naruto graduate late was because sharingan can control 9 tails naruto and sasuke was pre determined by hiruzemn(already revealed in anime) the main reason i drop this fanfic in middle is because of summoning shit (I mean who dont' know you need to sign a contract with summoning beast for summoning or by reverse summoning yourselves even though its about luck everyone cannot resummoned to 3 holy places like sannin but only way is summoning scroll signing (official confirmed) ) i cannot watch such brainless fic ... just because i enjoyed charecter development a bit at beginning and not so boring i will give 4.2 stars
The person who translated this did a good job. My main and only complaint right now is the MC personality his is really unlikable and is killing the story for me.
Well, I really like the story. But this issue of a very extensive harem always displeases me, only the type where 2 is the maximum, but the rest of the story is very pleasant and the relationship between Mc and Sasuke is cool.
Good translation, although there are parts that are confusing, in general everything is fine. What I do hope is that you change or fix some things, like the shitty ending it had, an epilogue would be great. Well now I hope you don't leave it before finishing it.
Revelar spoilerQuite enjoyable so far, really like the way the MC becomes friends with sasuke without doing the cringe handholding some fanfics do with the protagonists. I also like the system, it’s very overpowered but the MC has to do some interesting maneuvers to get the most out of it and have a reasonable explanation for his strength. Also, the translation is excellent quality. The harem interactions are the worst part of the story, original author thinks women are objects and thinks mistreating the harem is a flex.
A good enough story to pass the time. Аn interesting fanfic that doesn't spend a lot of time on unnecessary moments. Mostly a good story. Hope you like it.
Sometimes the writing gets confusing, it also has Chinese elements and Chinese novel behaviors. I like it but there will probably be people who don't like it. The development of the story is good, it really doesn't drag on and the protagonist makes a point of taking advantage of the opportunities to be lazy. character designer is terrible, there is no good description of him or a photo.
roan is generally nice. But it has a huge flaw, there is a harem inside and there is no #harem in the novel. So I started reading the novel, and of course it was disappointing.
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Good. I liked the first 100. Chapters 140+, as expected, he became really OP and just mauled everyone. And I feel he had a bit of a personality shift but that’s to be expected when you realise you’re so strong you can wipe the ninja world clean of everyone. Anyways, anyone on the fence give this a read. Decent read.
it started good with a very good character development but the last 40 chapter or so everything just crumbled the mc is way too lazy and doesn't have any ambition and not in a good way it is just utter bullshit at this point the mc became the strongest but instead of unifying the world he just got married and stayed in konoha for 3 years doing nothing . let us get to the harem it's just bullshit at first there were some character development you could see how feeling started to form between mc and the girls but then it's like they all disappeared there is no mention of any of the girls except one after chapter 160 (or so) I mean the mc spent 160 chapters building relationships with them (with the intention of marrying them) then he just forgot about them . DON'T READ IT , IT IS UTTER SHIT AT THIS POINT A MAJOR WASTE OF TIME .
well .... making danzo hokage is just ... sigh story was good until this but now im not sure i want to continue reading this story But thats a great FF overall so if you readers dont care about Danzo give it a shot its a good read
well , I liked this fanfic alot even with itz slow pacing and how author did bullshit with Naruto and all I mean mc stole sealed book from naruto just to throw it away i mean he didnt't even open that up because he is too dependant on sasuke..So naruto didnt't pass mc took spot of naruto , dude what about plot armour of naruto even with no plot Armour ninja village didnt't want jinchuriki to graduate , hiruzen let naruto graduate late was because sharingan can control 9 tails naruto and sasuke was pre determined by hiruzemn(already revealed in anime) the main reason i drop this fanfic in middle is because of summoning shit (I mean who dont' know you need to sign a contract with summoning beast for summoning or by reverse summoning yourselves even though its about luck everyone cannot resummoned to 3 holy places like sannin but only way is summoning scroll signing (official confirmed) ) i cannot watch such brainless fic ... just because i enjoyed charecter development a bit at beginning and not so boring i will give 4.2 stars
The person who translated this did a good job. My main and only complaint right now is the MC personality his is really unlikable and is killing the story for me.
Well, I really like the story. But this issue of a very extensive harem always displeases me, only the type where 2 is the maximum, but the rest of the story is very pleasant and the relationship between Mc and Sasuke is cool.
Good translation, although there are parts that are confusing, in general everything is fine. What I do hope is that you change or fix some things, like the shitty ending it had, an epilogue would be great. Well now I hope you don't leave it before finishing it.
Revelar spoilerQuite enjoyable so far, really like the way the MC becomes friends with sasuke without doing the cringe handholding some fanfics do with the protagonists. I also like the system, it’s very overpowered but the MC has to do some interesting maneuvers to get the most out of it and have a reasonable explanation for his strength. Also, the translation is excellent quality. The harem interactions are the worst part of the story, original author thinks women are objects and thinks mistreating the harem is a flex.
A good enough story to pass the time. Аn interesting fanfic that doesn't spend a lot of time on unnecessary moments. Mostly a good story. Hope you like it.
Sometimes the writing gets confusing, it also has Chinese elements and Chinese novel behaviors. I like it but there will probably be people who don't like it. The development of the story is good, it really doesn't drag on and the protagonist makes a point of taking advantage of the opportunities to be lazy. character designer is terrible, there is no good description of him or a photo.
roan is generally nice. But it has a huge flaw, there is a harem inside and there is no #harem in the novel. So I started reading the novel, and of course it was disappointing.
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Good. I liked the first 100. Chapters 140+, as expected, he became really OP and just mauled everyone. And I feel he had a bit of a personality shift but that’s to be expected when you realise you’re so strong you can wipe the ninja world clean of everyone. Anyways, anyone on the fence give this a read. Decent read.