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Writing Quality top Notch Story development good enuff Charachter design is awful the person is Uhh lets just Incredibly Twisted and Unrelatable he's the type of guy you'd read about when you turn off your brain and enjoy. Udating stability is Good enuff but the update frequency is disappointing. world background is good.
The presentation of information about the hero's quirk is drawn out, in parts, although the hero received almost what he ordered. An obvious imbalance of power, moreover, everything is arranged as it is more convenient for the hero. MC, OP itself is not bad, but you need to know when to stop. I read 8 chapters.
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I am purposlely slowing down my reading speed just so that i can savor the few chapters we got.. Do with that knowledge as you will, dear fellow Fanfic Reader
The guys is stupid, he could have made a "everytime my heart beats, i gain 0.1 energy" type of quirk. Plus breathing, any other income energy quirk, he would just constanltly generating energy instead of 1 perday? that sucks. he's stupid.
Good read. The quirk is interesting and the MC is great. Characters are well written and dialog is fantastic. The grammar and writing style is also good. Lots of potential keep it up💪.
Ótima história muito criativa como você deu para o protagonista uma habilidade tão boa que não faz diferença se ele tem ou não os desejos realmente muito criativo gostei bastante da história e espero que goste mais capítulos 🤔🤔🤔😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍
Bro where'd you go i need more lemons urs are the best atleast tell me fi you will continue this story or will drop it I don't want false hope
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Writing Quality top Notch Story development good enuff Charachter design is awful the person is Uhh lets just Incredibly Twisted and Unrelatable he's the type of guy you'd read about when you turn off your brain and enjoy. Udating stability is Good enuff but the update frequency is disappointing. world background is good.
The presentation of information about the hero's quirk is drawn out, in parts, although the hero received almost what he ordered. An obvious imbalance of power, moreover, everything is arranged as it is more convenient for the hero. MC, OP itself is not bad, but you need to know when to stop. I read 8 chapters.
Revelar spoiler I am purposlely slowing down my reading speed just so that i can savor the few chapters we got.. Do with that knowledge as you will, dear fellow Fanfic Reader
The guys is stupid, he could have made a "everytime my heart beats, i gain 0.1 energy" type of quirk. Plus breathing, any other income energy quirk, he would just constanltly generating energy instead of 1 perday? that sucks. he's stupid.
Good read. The quirk is interesting and the MC is great. Characters are well written and dialog is fantastic. The grammar and writing style is also good. Lots of potential keep it up💪.
Ótima história muito criativa como você deu para o protagonista uma habilidade tão boa que não faz diferença se ele tem ou não os desejos realmente muito criativo gostei bastante da história e espero que goste mais capítulos 🤔🤔🤔😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍
Bro where'd you go i need more lemons urs are the best atleast tell me fi you will continue this story or will drop it I don't want false hope