Capítulo 13: Suggestions
Okay guys we have reached the first check point of this novel and I understand that I lack at mant fronts in this novel. Which is why you will comments on the various amount of improvement I need to do and what should be added and removed, so that from next chapter i can turn this into a proper football novel.
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