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Excellent novel tbh. Unfortunately, can’t support financially atm, but spiritually supporting you, author
A good novel, nothing new but well written I like these type of novels, so this one is right up my ally...
My only complaint about this novel is the main character. The story is engaging, the grammar is fine, and it is significantly better than most stories in this genre. But the MC just ruins it for me, he's reckless, immature, and plain idiotic at certain points. The first thing he does after quitting his low-paying job is take 3 females out for a night where he spent half a million, yet when they ask how he got his money, he doesn't even think to make up an excuse, needing the system to save him. And I just don't like the fact that he keeps bringing up his poor past to everyone, WHO TF ASKED ?!?!? It's so unnecessary and just annoying. "I'm just a bottom-dwelling loser"- who made 10 million 2 days, drives a Bentley, and has 2-3 successful love interests actively seeking him out. What is the point of constantly writing about him trying to put himself down? It's not being humble, it's being downright dense and annoying
Excellent novel tbh. Unfortunately, can’t support financially atm, but spiritually supporting you, author
A good novel, nothing new but well written I like these type of novels, so this one is right up my ally...
My only complaint about this novel is the main character. The story is engaging, the grammar is fine, and it is significantly better than most stories in this genre. But the MC just ruins it for me, he's reckless, immature, and plain idiotic at certain points. The first thing he does after quitting his low-paying job is take 3 females out for a night where he spent half a million, yet when they ask how he got his money, he doesn't even think to make up an excuse, needing the system to save him. And I just don't like the fact that he keeps bringing up his poor past to everyone, WHO TF ASKED ?!?!? It's so unnecessary and just annoying. "I'm just a bottom-dwelling loser"- who made 10 million 2 days, drives a Bentley, and has 2-3 successful love interests actively seeking him out. What is the point of constantly writing about him trying to put himself down? It's not being humble, it's being downright dense and annoying