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Very unique fantasy story. I'm loving how Rafel thinks the human world is new and filled with delicious possibilities. So many virgins to...uh...unvirginify. 😉 I also love that it's set in a fantasyish world instead of just plain ol' Earth.
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Before I say anything I have to make this clear. The new novel has a lot of spice 🌶️ in it which makes it a hot read. The vivid narration of the story caught my attention and the dialogue flow smoothly leading from one scene to another. If you are okay with a story full of 🍆 and 🍑 then you are sure to enjoy this novel.
A good read Stable writing, of course, it's not something I'm used to but I would be happy to give a read Good job author
The MC doesnt get NTR’ed right? his woman don’t sleep with other guys I hope Like the succubus girl in character descriptions she only sleeps with him I hope
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The story is very good, but feels like a back piece. The characters are very nicely done and the writing is great. I do think the f word is used a bit too much, other expletives would do better in some situations. The world building is also good, very show not tell. The only complaint is that the story isn't that apparent at the beginning.
Very unique fantasy story. I'm loving how Rafel thinks the human world is new and filled with delicious possibilities. So many virgins to...uh...unvirginify. 😉 I also love that it's set in a fantasyish world instead of just plain ol' Earth.
Wow, that's awesome If you don't mind, i would love to share some tips with you on how to boost your book performance, let's connect to discuss further on discord @darcymcgrath
Before I say anything I have to make this clear. The new novel has a lot of spice 🌶️ in it which makes it a hot read. The vivid narration of the story caught my attention and the dialogue flow smoothly leading from one scene to another. If you are okay with a story full of 🍆 and 🍑 then you are sure to enjoy this novel.
A good read Stable writing, of course, it's not something I'm used to but I would be happy to give a read Good job author
The MC doesnt get NTR’ed right? his woman don’t sleep with other guys I hope Like the succubus girl in character descriptions she only sleeps with him I hope
Revelar spoiler
The story is very good, but feels like a back piece. The characters are very nicely done and the writing is great. I do think the f word is used a bit too much, other expletives would do better in some situations. The world building is also good, very show not tell. The only complaint is that the story isn't that apparent at the beginning.