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Exceeded all the expectations I had coming in. The writing is very good with original characters being introduced that have personalities and names that actually matter and affect things. The pacing is quick enough to not feel like anything is being dragged out but not so fast that it feels like nothing is paying off correctly. Overall a very fun read so far and I look forward to see what else the author can cook.😎👍
Very good story with clear logical progression. Author isn't aftaid to let the mc suffer setbacks yet makes sure the mc can grow strong and OP from them. I cant wait to read more
Shit so good 😫😭 MC is actually really cool and well designed and the story so far is just amazing 10/10 wild recommend
Это один из немногих фанфиков заслуживающих пять звёзд. Интересный сюжет, захватывающие приключения и отличное описание персонажей. Система замечательная и я надеюсь на скорое выход глав.
I've just caught up and am absolutely loving this. This is the first Elden ring fanfic I've read and I would be happy for it to be the last, for me this is everything I would ask for in an Elden ring fanfic. With a perfect integration of the system from the game, he is a character with a unique edge in the lands between, however still forced to use his intellect and unique character traits to forge his path to the top. I sincerely recommend a read for anyone looking for a well-put-together story. Whether you're an Elden ring nerd or a serial dialogue skipper, this story is for you. 👍🔥
Let's get things out of the way. You looking for a really good elden ring story? Well look no further this one is one of the best.The writing is really good and the pacing is perfect.
Amazing work. really needed a good elden ring fanfic. thank you for your time and effort.
Великолепная история. Очень рад, что её нашел. Большое спасибо. Великолепная история. Очень рад, что её нашел. Большое спасибо. Великолепная история. Очень рад, что её нашел. Большое спасибо. Великолепная история. Очень рад, что её нашел. Большое спасибо.
Best Elden Ring Fic I've ever read, probably one of the best fics in general on WN. Characters are interesting and clearly have their own agendas, and there are plenty of twists and turns in the few chapters that are already out. I'm looking forward to seeing what Marine cooks up next. To Eternal Glory and Dominion!!
five stars without a doubt, incredible story, I'm really enjoying it, the plot is fluid and the fights are also very good. So it's really worth reading. Please add romance to the story. There are several good girls like Marika Malenia, but if you're not satisfied with these girls, you can always go to other worlds. Maybe in one of these worlds there's a girl you might like.
Godrick the Golden, the Slayer of The Night Cavalry and the Conqueror of the Frenzied Flames.
What to say other than that this fanfic is legendary!!! The way the author writes the chapters are amazing and the worldbuilding is incredible considering how it is supposed to be a short while after the shattering of the elden ring. The dialog are always carefully written and the characters have noticible details in the way they interact and talk. I dont know what else to say other rhan the fact that the writer is amazing and this fic is absolutely worth your time and powerstones!!! Keep up the great work! Hope for more chapters soon!!! [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=disgusted][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What’s gonna happen if he reaches master in spear? Is he just gonna become the god of spearmenship and understand every aspect of using a spear? Anyway great fic 👍
[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Cries][img=Good night][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=In your face][img=In a daze][img=Good night][img=Feeling it][img=Envy][img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=In a daze][img=In your face]
A complex and realistic version of the lands in between set just before the first siege of leyndell. It shocking how well adapted it. The MC Godrick the Golden is pretty realistic and it remarkable how seamless your make all the OC and other characters feel.👍
yeeeeeeaaaa finally an eldenring fanfiction , and it's freaking good , good job author
Nothing feels forced, everything makes sense. Unlike other Elden Ring FanFics. The best one I have read so far. 10/10 Only "complaint" is the lack of chapters............
Amazing work from our dear author it deserve 5 star, it's truly rare to find an Elden Ring FF and even more one of this quality. Context : The story take place few year after the shatering but before the Melenia vs Radhan fight and the conquest/attack against Lyndel capital. Note about the story : MC as been transmigrated into the body of Godrick the grafted ( here "the golden"). There is a system, and it the best type of system just the "bare bones" (show the current stat, "scan" ability, and at each lvl up the mc get 1 stat point that he can affect to one of his main stat.) Please note that the MC can train to improve his stat further. Question for Author : Will you explore the lore of the godskin and the gloam-eyed queen ?
Exceeded all the expectations I had coming in. The writing is very good with original characters being introduced that have personalities and names that actually matter and affect things. The pacing is quick enough to not feel like anything is being dragged out but not so fast that it feels like nothing is paying off correctly. Overall a very fun read so far and I look forward to see what else the author can cook.😎👍
Very good story with clear logical progression. Author isn't aftaid to let the mc suffer setbacks yet makes sure the mc can grow strong and OP from them. I cant wait to read more
Shit so good 😫😭 MC is actually really cool and well designed and the story so far is just amazing 10/10 wild recommend
Это один из немногих фанфиков заслуживающих пять звёзд. Интересный сюжет, захватывающие приключения и отличное описание персонажей. Система замечательная и я надеюсь на скорое выход глав.
I've just caught up and am absolutely loving this. This is the first Elden ring fanfic I've read and I would be happy for it to be the last, for me this is everything I would ask for in an Elden ring fanfic. With a perfect integration of the system from the game, he is a character with a unique edge in the lands between, however still forced to use his intellect and unique character traits to forge his path to the top. I sincerely recommend a read for anyone looking for a well-put-together story. Whether you're an Elden ring nerd or a serial dialogue skipper, this story is for you. 👍🔥
Let's get things out of the way. You looking for a really good elden ring story? Well look no further this one is one of the best.The writing is really good and the pacing is perfect.
Amazing work. really needed a good elden ring fanfic. thank you for your time and effort.
Великолепная история. Очень рад, что её нашел. Большое спасибо. Великолепная история. Очень рад, что её нашел. Большое спасибо. Великолепная история. Очень рад, что её нашел. Большое спасибо. Великолепная история. Очень рад, что её нашел. Большое спасибо.
Best Elden Ring Fic I've ever read, probably one of the best fics in general on WN. Characters are interesting and clearly have their own agendas, and there are plenty of twists and turns in the few chapters that are already out. I'm looking forward to seeing what Marine cooks up next. To Eternal Glory and Dominion!!
five stars without a doubt, incredible story, I'm really enjoying it, the plot is fluid and the fights are also very good. So it's really worth reading. Please add romance to the story. There are several good girls like Marika Malenia, but if you're not satisfied with these girls, you can always go to other worlds. Maybe in one of these worlds there's a girl you might like.
Godrick the Golden, the Slayer of The Night Cavalry and the Conqueror of the Frenzied Flames.
What to say other than that this fanfic is legendary!!! The way the author writes the chapters are amazing and the worldbuilding is incredible considering how it is supposed to be a short while after the shattering of the elden ring. The dialog are always carefully written and the characters have noticible details in the way they interact and talk. I dont know what else to say other rhan the fact that the writer is amazing and this fic is absolutely worth your time and powerstones!!! Keep up the great work! Hope for more chapters soon!!! [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=disgusted][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What’s gonna happen if he reaches master in spear? Is he just gonna become the god of spearmenship and understand every aspect of using a spear? Anyway great fic 👍
[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Cries][img=Good night][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=In your face][img=In a daze][img=Good night][img=Feeling it][img=Envy][img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=In a daze][img=In your face]
A complex and realistic version of the lands in between set just before the first siege of leyndell. It shocking how well adapted it. The MC Godrick the Golden is pretty realistic and it remarkable how seamless your make all the OC and other characters feel.👍
yeeeeeeaaaa finally an eldenring fanfiction , and it's freaking good , good job author
Nothing feels forced, everything makes sense. Unlike other Elden Ring FanFics. The best one I have read so far. 10/10 Only "complaint" is the lack of chapters............
Amazing work from our dear author it deserve 5 star, it's truly rare to find an Elden Ring FF and even more one of this quality. Context : The story take place few year after the shatering but before the Melenia vs Radhan fight and the conquest/attack against Lyndel capital. Note about the story : MC as been transmigrated into the body of Godrick the grafted ( here "the golden"). There is a system, and it the best type of system just the "bare bones" (show the current stat, "scan" ability, and at each lvl up the mc get 1 stat point that he can affect to one of his main stat.) Please note that the MC can train to improve his stat further. Question for Author : Will you explore the lore of the godskin and the gloam-eyed queen ?