Konoha New Era : Third Hokage Ascends

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NunuXD

I've read 32 chapters so far and I'm very tired... The heavily usage of gpt in the chapter makes is very boring and tired to read... The aí just explain the same thing over and over for 5 paragraphs... The novel is promising, I'm probably gonna try to read the raw

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MEA_24_

Ngl. This story is so well thought out, I'm surprised this hasn't gone popular yet. Especially the author opened a whole new world where the 1st hokage alive and it can seamlessly connect to naruto world to this. This fic is now my canon well except the mc. Only the world bg😆

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tedmosby2016

what a freakin bait and switch.. this is no transmigration. He just has memories of another world but he is not from the modern world. I hate tricky, lying, Manipulative authors.

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Dani

Surprisingly refreshing! well written and a good way to put forward the plot. Not rushed. Good stuff. There aren't a lot of chapters but you guys should take a look at it!

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DiabloRedfox

this had a lot of potential but ultimately the MC has minimal changes to the plot, it's like the author is afraid of properly making any good changes, the distribution of the 9 tailed beast(8 since shukaku was with land of wind) was probably the dumbest move and the author also idk why agrees to it, and the MC in itself is a very bland character and for me honestly seems like a spineless guy, these are the main reasons this story even with good quality grammer n all is still not that popular

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Doantra

decent

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Dani

It's easier to get bad reviews or comments than a good one when everything is good, When I mean good, it's about being good not extraordinarily well written. So yeah, your ff feels good to read for a hundred chapters. And that my friend is an achievement rarely seen on Webnovel nowadays. Keep up the good work !

LV 4

Haze_

Good so far

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Maybi_louisiana

Well, so far the story is going well. I really liked how it's been progressing, although I find the protagonist a bit weak. But other than that, I really enjoyed it!

LV 4

_anurag012

isn't this the kazutora one in mtl. what will be the difference.

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Owais_Khan_4634

If you want to read this novel, start from Chapter 1 to 20, then skip to Chapter 120 and continue from there to the latest chapter

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Genesis_you

Good ☺️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💪💪💪💪💪💪❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🦅🦅🦅🦅❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🌱🌱🌱🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🪨🪨🪨🪨🪨🪨

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Willie_Lombard

so far I've enjoyed this book. I'm really surprised this hasn't become popular yet. really well developed book

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Notmatter

Ty for translation ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Antonio_Mitchell_5654

Not as good as the original at all even if it does have more chapters

LV 4

Jploui93

I really want to like this story, but I can't. To me it seems like a lot of things are happening and nothing is happening at the same time. MC knows the plot and the main reasons for the conflicts and war, but refuses to speak up about it, and when he does it's already too late. He has all these plans that could change the village for the better, but every time his like "I'll do that later" or "I'll visit that place another time" the only changes to the plot are minor things that have no real weight to future events and you can pretty much predict what's going to happen because MC has been doing the same thing since the beginning. I'll keep reading because this really has a lot of potential.