Naruto: The Otherworldly Cultivator

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DarienDragonheart

Honesty, it isn't bad if you just ignore the fact that the entire fic is basically the OG Naruto storyline with a calm MC who shows one or two moves from his previous world every 20 chapters later. Still, his overall strength is somehow equal to the OG Naruto even now. So, I'll just drop it instead of waiting for this to get better.

LV 4

Ole_Tessmann

Basically a complete rehash of the original with a smarter naruto. Until now there hasn’t been a difference in plot but it’s to be expected since the mc wants to run low. I’ll Be dropping it since It’ll probably keep following this trend. Good writing tho

LV 3

OmegaAuthor

This story is just straight up bad, everything is copy and pasted from the anime with slight changes and the mc is supposed to be from the murim with an unparalleled cultivation technique and yet nothings changing from the canon 73 chapters in.

LV 4

Dark_PersonJJ

Hmmm, interesting story you have here, and as for Harem, 5 to 6 waifus would be more then enough for him,unless you planing to give him few more Wifes then this number i just writed, anyway i vote for Hinata,Sakura,Ino,Tenten,Tamari,Karui.

LV 4

JRCaste

I stand corrected, its actually pretty good read, dont let this fools persuade you to not read the novel, its very much worth the read.

LV 15

Firelord

The story is very bland. We don't know anything about the main character's past life or abilities, only that he was in Murim and that the author nerfs him. The main character has overpowered tools at his disposal, but we see nothing of their impact. His personality is also quite boring. 😴

LV 3

PoopieBooty

Read up to current chapter. Its just overall pretty boring. They skip over any and all training that could show the diff between power structures. But the thing I dislike the most is that I am left expecting something more that will never come. He is supposed to ge a cultivator yet is messing around with kids his age. He has no pride that cultivators usually have and he seems like he was just kind of a random cultivator from his world. Also, idk if this is for author to keep plot aligned with OG plot or what but it is kind of annoying waiting for new chapters just to be disappointed time and time again. He just lets sasuke go and do whatever emo shit he wants under the guise of “ill mind my own business” yet he ends up dragged into his bullshit in the end anyways. He puts up with kakashe basically teaching him jack shit as well. Had so much potential but overall just a wasted opportunity. And dont even get me started on the forced bs with mc and ino cause author gotta have a harem tag.

LV 3

CRUZEN

Got mixed feeling about this story. On one hand we get a calm and mature Naruto without any future extra knowledge about this world but on the other one we still get the same story that we all know. The path that mc takes is a bit different, but it still reaches the same destination.

LV 14

Demonic_Dragon_01

Overall a good start and I liked the story concept but it is a slow pace story....

LV 5

Unmatched

I’ve made it to ch 50… it’s still the same story as the original. Genin exam with the same interactions (sand siblings, hokage grandson) only difference is the dialogue

LV 2

Krio_Genix

Author obligatory review here :). Not much else to add here, I think I put everything in the synopsis of the fic. I just hope some people will enjoy the story :)

LV 2

MasterBo

Warning! Read at your own risk. It's a masterpiece of a story. Read until chapter 170. If this story goes as it has, we will soon have another gem among the novels. I just want to thank the author for this wonderful book.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

LV 4

hunters30

I might be rating this too early but the story so far is very good. Grammar is nice and there are no repeated words like you see in AI assisted writing. The character of MC is very nice. He isn't and edgelord nor some hidden deep character. So far MC is just a really straightforward person. Pacing is slow but I am just enjoying reading a different and a sensible version of Naruto here. And the cultivator aspect is also nice so far. There has been no attempt to rename existing Naruto world techniques into something in Chinese etc. The cultivation aspect is separate and unique from the existing Ninjutsu and blending is done carefully into the setting. In short this is a fanfic worth reading. Feels like 5/5 so far to me

LV 1

Armando_Paioli

Another missed opportunity, 120 chapters and the only thing different from the anime and dialogue and some naruto techniques, it had potential but the author can't move far from the canon.

LV 4

GENJI

Nice start.

LV 3

Shadow_Lord_7904

I love this fanfic, because i love naruto and cultivation novels and this is a mix of both. Writing quality is good as well.

LV 4

philipp_thomas

Sadly a bust at chapter 76 it is a 1 to 1 rewriting of Naruto. The only real difference is that naruto has a other personality but all in all makes all the exact same decisions as in the original just far more unbelievable (half the time I think what an as pull).

LV 1

Benjamim_2023

Top muito bom 👏👏👏👏👏 parabéns essa história 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

LV 13

John_Clamble

Very very good, one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read. The story starts out slow, with a cultivator whose immortal frame of reference causes him to lack time to gain the strength necessary to change the events around him... For the start at least. It's really cool to see his interactions with the other characters, and the author has done very well at keeping all of the characters real and true to their designs. A very good read. I'm still eagerly anticipating what comes next, and I'm already 150+ chapters in!

LV 13

HiddenSwordsman

I genuinely have no complaints, Not aggressively cheesy, the right amount of action, and plot. Well done author. I recommend you give this a read.