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SPOILER FOR CHAPTER 160+ and the reason I dropped it The MC (with 3 others) put a live broadcast, threat the Navy WG and made a deal, but then killed a CD and let the other 2 killing each other. WG somehow just let it go for "his threat is so scary, we have to let him go, uwee!!"
4.6 -0.40 I stopped reading after I read the words "time travel" like, you're from earth and you watched conan, thats not time travel I knew china banned the word but the translator could have edited it out as he/she posted but he/she did not! talk about a lazy translator who doesn't care about its readers.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
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Pretty enjoyable if you shut off your brain. If you're okay with a Gary Stu MC and barely any ounce of realism then give this a read.
رواية ممتازة تستحق 5 نجوم بإمتياز ارجوا ان تستمر فيها الشخصية الرءيسية جيدة و هذه المعركة جرت بشكل راءع ...............................................................................................................................
it's one of the best one piece fics that I have read so far, it is exrtremely well written and smooth , definitely a 5 star work
all in all its good read only few things i don't like first Mc,s name its strange like you are reading and their are two name Rob and Robin you can guess its feels wrong now 2nd the wording like brother Rob and finally the ship spirit name is Chinese
Muito bom. Continue, por favor 👍 ..................................................................................................................................................................................................
Мало, слишком мало текста. Жду, очень редко попадается такое прямо что бы вау, и это одно из них, особенно когда надоели постоянные драки, культивация, прокачка, фитнес, и так далее. Здесь он вроде супер сильный, но из за малого количества драк неизвестно насколько и пока это отлично.
haha Best one piece fanfic nor mc is too powerful nor is he too weak also the way of mc thinking is good plus the power given to mc are the best espeicially haki the only thing i have complain is please Release more chapters
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I really recommend this fanfic, it's a good read! There's only 1 thing I don't like about this fanfic and that is mc system. The system gives mc talents, no quest, no conditions, no nothing, it just appears from time to time and leaves after giving the price... Very convenient system for the author...
Comme il n'a pas les effet secondaire du fruit du démon tu peux avoir d'autres fruits du démon il peut se donner comme but d'être comme Superman , on comment par le fruit Jiki Jiki no Mi du magnétisme (éle ctromagnétism plus magnétisme🤯)le fruit du feu et le sublimer en fruit du soleil car comme on le sait le pouvoir de Superman viens de soleil, le fruit de la clairvoyance Giro Giro no Mi, le fruit de la force Riki Riki no Mi, le fruit du demon de la vitesse,le fruit du démon du fourneaux Gutsu Gutsu no Mi (après sublimation peut renforcer l extérieur et l intérieur du corps humain, plus Le Fruit d'Urouge est un Fruit du Démon de type Paramecia qui permet à son utilisateur d'absorber les dégâts qu'il subit afin de les convertir en puissance , Wapu Wapu no Mi fruit de la teleportation sublimer en logia contrôle de l espace parfait pour voler, contrôler les objets, se teléporter
Very good and pleasent to read story about brother and his two little sisters (so far). Mc is lovely and op brother that takes care for his new family. Story is more like 'slice of life' and 'adventure' one, which for me is a great thing. He is not annoying trope mc (like young master, edgy brat or stupid heroic guy that wants to save all) which is even better.
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Very interesting ........................................................................................................................
Shameless author here, casually giving myself 5 star review what do you expect in this novel : - legendary writing (I am the best so this is natural) - no mistakes - (no harem / harem) depends on your taste so everyone is pleased - i am actually the best author out there so yo're lucky reading this for free - this fanfic is perfect for your taste (an: this is not a transition, i did write the original in Chinese+ the synopsis is misleading don't read it + this is an alt account )
OK, THIS NOVEL IS PURE GOL.D FUN TO READ ..I LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN ROBIN AND MC ..I HAD FUN READING THIS NOVEL AND WANT MORE SO THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR THIS NOVEL AND PLEASE DO NOT QUIT HALFWAY THANK YOU
Shameless review+1 I did this project as it is a fresh story with the mc not being a pirate or a marines just enjoys the world, which related to me. I recommend you guys to read it
SPOILER FOR CHAPTER 160+ and the reason I dropped it The MC (with 3 others) put a live broadcast, threat the Navy WG and made a deal, but then killed a CD and let the other 2 killing each other. WG somehow just let it go for "his threat is so scary, we have to let him go, uwee!!"
4.6 -0.40 I stopped reading after I read the words "time travel" like, you're from earth and you watched conan, thats not time travel I knew china banned the word but the translator could have edited it out as he/she posted but he/she did not! talk about a lazy translator who doesn't care about its readers.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
MC pedophile🤢fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. . .
Pretty enjoyable if you shut off your brain. If you're okay with a Gary Stu MC and barely any ounce of realism then give this a read.
رواية ممتازة تستحق 5 نجوم بإمتياز ارجوا ان تستمر فيها الشخصية الرءيسية جيدة و هذه المعركة جرت بشكل راءع ...............................................................................................................................
it's one of the best one piece fics that I have read so far, it is exrtremely well written and smooth , definitely a 5 star work
all in all its good read only few things i don't like first Mc,s name its strange like you are reading and their are two name Rob and Robin you can guess its feels wrong now 2nd the wording like brother Rob and finally the ship spirit name is Chinese
Muito bom. Continue, por favor 👍 ..................................................................................................................................................................................................
Мало, слишком мало текста. Жду, очень редко попадается такое прямо что бы вау, и это одно из них, особенно когда надоели постоянные драки, культивация, прокачка, фитнес, и так далее. Здесь он вроде супер сильный, но из за малого количества драк неизвестно насколько и пока это отлично.
haha Best one piece fanfic nor mc is too powerful nor is he too weak also the way of mc thinking is good plus the power given to mc are the best espeicially haki the only thing i have complain is please Release more chapters
[img=Unalived][img=Envy][img=Unalived][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=Smug][img=Unalived][img=Smug][img=Unalived][img=In a daze][img=Smug][img=Unalived][img=Smug][img=Unalived][img=Smitten][img=recommend][img=In a daze][img=Unalived][img=Smitten]
I really recommend this fanfic, it's a good read! There's only 1 thing I don't like about this fanfic and that is mc system. The system gives mc talents, no quest, no conditions, no nothing, it just appears from time to time and leaves after giving the price... Very convenient system for the author...
Comme il n'a pas les effet secondaire du fruit du démon tu peux avoir d'autres fruits du démon il peut se donner comme but d'être comme Superman , on comment par le fruit Jiki Jiki no Mi du magnétisme (éle ctromagnétism plus magnétisme🤯)le fruit du feu et le sublimer en fruit du soleil car comme on le sait le pouvoir de Superman viens de soleil, le fruit de la clairvoyance Giro Giro no Mi, le fruit de la force Riki Riki no Mi, le fruit du demon de la vitesse,le fruit du démon du fourneaux Gutsu Gutsu no Mi (après sublimation peut renforcer l extérieur et l intérieur du corps humain, plus Le Fruit d'Urouge est un Fruit du Démon de type Paramecia qui permet à son utilisateur d'absorber les dégâts qu'il subit afin de les convertir en puissance , Wapu Wapu no Mi fruit de la teleportation sublimer en logia contrôle de l espace parfait pour voler, contrôler les objets, se teléporter
Very good and pleasent to read story about brother and his two little sisters (so far). Mc is lovely and op brother that takes care for his new family. Story is more like 'slice of life' and 'adventure' one, which for me is a great thing. He is not annoying trope mc (like young master, edgy brat or stupid heroic guy that wants to save all) which is even better.
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Very interesting ........................................................................................................................
Shameless author here, casually giving myself 5 star review what do you expect in this novel : - legendary writing (I am the best so this is natural) - no mistakes - (no harem / harem) depends on your taste so everyone is pleased - i am actually the best author out there so yo're lucky reading this for free - this fanfic is perfect for your taste (an: this is not a transition, i did write the original in Chinese+ the synopsis is misleading don't read it + this is an alt account )
OK, THIS NOVEL IS PURE GOL.D FUN TO READ ..I LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN ROBIN AND MC ..I HAD FUN READING THIS NOVEL AND WANT MORE SO THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR THIS NOVEL AND PLEASE DO NOT QUIT HALFWAY THANK YOU
Shameless review+1 I did this project as it is a fresh story with the mc not being a pirate or a marines just enjoys the world, which related to me. I recommend you guys to read it