My Elf System

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Lucky0_0

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

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Wrathdg

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

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Valyrxa

Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

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SWORDGOD_ETERNITY

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

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Aayann_

Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

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Jordzfml_7

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

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ULTIMATE_BEING

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

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Noguenko

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

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Yueliang_Haizi

This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.

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Haruto17

can give a link to discord server

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Rishav_Yadav_8247

please mia mother is in harem I want author preeeetyy please 🙏 😢 😭 😫 😔

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Sathish_Annarapu

It's the besttttt the story is good thanks for the author xD

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Angelic_Throne80

Loving the all round story please keep up the awesome story.

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Yassine_0928

i lost braincells reading this garbage ,

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SneedandFeed

Came for the world building stayed for the elf mommies.

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Layla_Barlavento

Às vezes a história se perde no caminho.

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SHADOW_IS_LIFE

Hello, brother can you review my new book "Innkeeper Of Dead Gate" ...........................................................................................HELLO

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RagingMutant

Story is really good, so good that I bought the most expensive privilege tier both last month and at the beginning of this month. There have been 4 chapters put out since I bought privilege again. Unfortunately I can’t access any of them and only have access up to chapter 83/97. I don’t know why this is. Idk if the author is trying to stockpile more chapters for the next privilege tier so every “new” chapter is just going towards the next tier. Whatever it is if I don’t get any chapters this month because of it I probably won’t purchase privilege again. If you like the story I’d hold off on purchasing privilege until such a thing is resolved.

Até agora gostei bastante da história achei legal boa 🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰

Enjoying the novel so far but my only concern is that the MC is going to be way to powerful compared to his peers. For example, He has just joined the academy and is already talking about leaving because he is to strong. Hopefully this changes slightly because I want to see him grow during his time in the academy, not coast monotonously during the arc.