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I tend to not get my hopes up, but I’m hoping this fic doesn’t get dropped. I have had problems with the two fics I wrote and can understand such things as writer's block and negative reviews that are just there to make you quit. Pls, don’t listen to any negative comments without constructive criticism.
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I'm really looking forward to more chapters, this fic seems pretty good and I love the idea and hope this fic doesn't stop randomly, so I believe setting goals would be great but I do wonder if your going to enter "dragon ball super" when beerus looks for the super saiyan god or when vegeta looks for more saiyans in the "saiyan saga" although I don't know if vegeta would believe if any saiyan is still alive on the planet or maybe you have your own idea ether way I look forward to what happens, also I recommend super saiyan beast because she has that wild side in her and I do hope you keep her tail ssj 4 would be fun,
Please post 1 chapter a day. it's really good. I hope it's 1 chapter a day. Keep up the good work. And have fun writing.
I really like how the story is developing and how the characters have to adapt to the planet Xarrack. I also find it interesting how Acala, despite initially coming across as cruel and lacking empathy, decides to take care of Spina, perhaps seeing a bit of herself in her. I'm also curious to learn more about Acala's childhood and how that experience has shaped the bond she now seems to have with Spina
I tend to not get my hopes up, but I’m hoping this fic doesn’t get dropped. I have had problems with the two fics I wrote and can understand such things as writer's block and negative reviews that are just there to make you quit. Pls, don’t listen to any negative comments without constructive criticism.
meiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......................................................................................................................................
I'm really looking forward to more chapters, this fic seems pretty good and I love the idea and hope this fic doesn't stop randomly, so I believe setting goals would be great but I do wonder if your going to enter "dragon ball super" when beerus looks for the super saiyan god or when vegeta looks for more saiyans in the "saiyan saga" although I don't know if vegeta would believe if any saiyan is still alive on the planet or maybe you have your own idea ether way I look forward to what happens, also I recommend super saiyan beast because she has that wild side in her and I do hope you keep her tail ssj 4 would be fun,
Please post 1 chapter a day. it's really good. I hope it's 1 chapter a day. Keep up the good work. And have fun writing.
I really like how the story is developing and how the characters have to adapt to the planet Xarrack. I also find it interesting how Acala, despite initially coming across as cruel and lacking empathy, decides to take care of Spina, perhaps seeing a bit of herself in her. I'm also curious to learn more about Acala's childhood and how that experience has shaped the bond she now seems to have with Spina