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Haven't started reading. I just wanted to check before I start I notice that to read to the end I'd need to purchase privileged to access the last few chapters is that because you just finished it and they will be released for normal reading soon or will I have to pay a permium for the end few chapters?
reading this is painfull. there is no timeline. MC makes terrible choices. Nothing makes sense!
Hi Author! I have BIG expectations for you with the amazing synopsis you wrote. I pray you meet all your goals and finish this story with everyone (especially yourself!) being happy with it. Make sure not to let a small amount of haters get to you because everyone who does or doesn't do anything has them. Keep with the great work and update often!
This story had a lot of great ideas, but the way they were tied together just didn’t work for me. While reading, I really enjoyed things like the leveling-up system, the future kingdom-building, the whole “sent back in time with future knowledge” setup, and plenty of other cool concepts. The problem, though, was how those ideas were used. The main character is supposed to be smart, but a lot of his decisions don’t feel that way. He has all this future knowledge, but in some parts of the story, it feels like he’s either using it wrong or not using it at all. Overall, the book had a lot of potential and some really positive aspects, but it didn’t quite come together in a way that left me satisfied. That said, I think the author shows promise, and I’d definitely give his next book a try.
Nothing is explained. There is no continuity. Everything feels like a rough draft of jumbled together ideas. Overall premise has potential but the entire prologue needs a COMPLETE overhaul.
Honestly if you ignore the System or accept it as for the story to keep going on, this is great novel kind of remind me to RI although it clearly different genre. Not that the System plot is not good it just confused me
The story has potential, but it's hard to understand where it's going The plot is very confusing and the world background is even more confusing.
Too focused on building suffering and motivation, just not getting to a comfortable read fast enough for me. I don't know if it will ever stop tormenting the MC excessively, but I can't handle sitting through it past chapter 13. I am baffled this was recommended to me. It looked cool in concept but it just never lived up to my expectations.
Destroy had real potential could be awesome but the author took it down the whole anime, trope or cliché that all web novel you are authors write with unbelievably bad things always happening from situation going from bad to worse and then of course the big bad betrayal of the family so if you don’t want all that enjoy if you do, do not
the writing is done well and flows. some of the world building skips around but you get the overall picture. the MC goes from calm and calculated to insidious... kind of off putting
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I just can’t he knows all this stuff from his past life but I don’t think is using it efficiently at all. The author is trying to make him smart but I don’t think he really is he knew that they would find them in the vertical farm and could have done something to stop them but didn’t and I feel that it will be the same thing were he knows something and instead takes a longer route to solve the problem when it’s already there. The background up to whatever chapter I’m at is in shambles and doesn’t correlate well. I also feel that the writing will be continuous something will happen in a chapter where it seems like nobody was prepared for like and invasion but next chapter low and behold the mc knew about it… like really? It is making me mad reading this and will be dropping. Not saying it’s bad maybe for first time readers but I need more.
*I put 3 stars when I haven't read past chapter 1* Can someone explain what exactly happened?
overall, it's very good up to what I have read, but it's too dark for my liking . First, why wild tribe , it could be anything and it's convenient to MC rememberd everything but his Most OP Ability, he would have thought 1000 ways to use it better is last life but conveniently he forgot and mistakenly used it for wild tribe , that is only thing I do not like in this other things are fine
Hi I think the novel is pretty good so far but I’m confused about how he made a shadow core can you give more details on how the MC obtain ability and resources because I’m on how he obtained those stuff or I’m just not falling along properly and you don’t have to worry about me not reading this novel I will still read this novel and you don’t have to listen to my opinion at all and so you can just do what you are doing now dut like I say this my opinion and you don’t have to listen to it
Is the MC going to get NRT or is going to NTR and is the mother going to be controlled and r* pe by the clan I’m just curious and the novel characters I’ve read so far is good
the story is good. it needs some small improvements here and there still it's pretty decent. i like the mc he is smart , charismatic, and cunning, however there are things I don't like. first, small things like author writing number in words instead of just typing the number for example he writes three hundred -eighty four instead of just 384.also the idea of leveling everything up is good however the mc cheat require for him to do tasks often repeating an action related to the skill to level it up , the reward from each level up is a minimal increase in proficiency while the requirements for each level doubles everytime that makes the mc need to waste alot of time and effort to level a single skill so it can become useful . i read to chapter 26 where mc want to level his aim proficiency at level 1 he can hit anything in 1m at level 2 he can hit anything in 2m and so on and so forth the requirements for him is to hit an enemy from afar and if he misses he losses his progress in that level. the plot is interesting i might give it 10 more chapters to see if anything improves . this my personal intake on the nove i hope it's helpful.
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I really enjoy this and has alot of potential I really hope this does not get dropped cause I'll support this novel if needed
A woman without horns is like a bike without a handlebars. It just... doesn't exist... haha jokes on you, it exists here! PogU, let's go! Dive in for more Goat Waifu!
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Honestly, it's one of the most captivating novels I've ever read. It's written in a way that the reader never truly knows what the mc is planning, and as soon as you think you have it figured out, you emidiatly realize you weren't even close. The mc is incredibly smart and gor once the mc actually "acts his age" and isn't some incredibly old and once powerful person who now acts like a child. Another thing i like is that as the story progresses, you start to learn more and more about the mc's past and what he has been through, as well as see him come to terms with himself.
Haven't started reading. I just wanted to check before I start I notice that to read to the end I'd need to purchase privileged to access the last few chapters is that because you just finished it and they will be released for normal reading soon or will I have to pay a permium for the end few chapters?
reading this is painfull. there is no timeline. MC makes terrible choices. Nothing makes sense!
Hi Author! I have BIG expectations for you with the amazing synopsis you wrote. I pray you meet all your goals and finish this story with everyone (especially yourself!) being happy with it. Make sure not to let a small amount of haters get to you because everyone who does or doesn't do anything has them. Keep with the great work and update often!
This story had a lot of great ideas, but the way they were tied together just didn’t work for me. While reading, I really enjoyed things like the leveling-up system, the future kingdom-building, the whole “sent back in time with future knowledge” setup, and plenty of other cool concepts. The problem, though, was how those ideas were used. The main character is supposed to be smart, but a lot of his decisions don’t feel that way. He has all this future knowledge, but in some parts of the story, it feels like he’s either using it wrong or not using it at all. Overall, the book had a lot of potential and some really positive aspects, but it didn’t quite come together in a way that left me satisfied. That said, I think the author shows promise, and I’d definitely give his next book a try.
Nothing is explained. There is no continuity. Everything feels like a rough draft of jumbled together ideas. Overall premise has potential but the entire prologue needs a COMPLETE overhaul.
Honestly if you ignore the System or accept it as for the story to keep going on, this is great novel kind of remind me to RI although it clearly different genre. Not that the System plot is not good it just confused me
The story has potential, but it's hard to understand where it's going The plot is very confusing and the world background is even more confusing.
Too focused on building suffering and motivation, just not getting to a comfortable read fast enough for me. I don't know if it will ever stop tormenting the MC excessively, but I can't handle sitting through it past chapter 13. I am baffled this was recommended to me. It looked cool in concept but it just never lived up to my expectations.
Destroy had real potential could be awesome but the author took it down the whole anime, trope or cliché that all web novel you are authors write with unbelievably bad things always happening from situation going from bad to worse and then of course the big bad betrayal of the family so if you don’t want all that enjoy if you do, do not
the writing is done well and flows. some of the world building skips around but you get the overall picture. the MC goes from calm and calculated to insidious... kind of off putting
Revelar spoiler I just can’t he knows all this stuff from his past life but I don’t think is using it efficiently at all. The author is trying to make him smart but I don’t think he really is he knew that they would find them in the vertical farm and could have done something to stop them but didn’t and I feel that it will be the same thing were he knows something and instead takes a longer route to solve the problem when it’s already there. The background up to whatever chapter I’m at is in shambles and doesn’t correlate well. I also feel that the writing will be continuous something will happen in a chapter where it seems like nobody was prepared for like and invasion but next chapter low and behold the mc knew about it… like really? It is making me mad reading this and will be dropping. Not saying it’s bad maybe for first time readers but I need more.
*I put 3 stars when I haven't read past chapter 1* Can someone explain what exactly happened?
overall, it's very good up to what I have read, but it's too dark for my liking . First, why wild tribe , it could be anything and it's convenient to MC rememberd everything but his Most OP Ability, he would have thought 1000 ways to use it better is last life but conveniently he forgot and mistakenly used it for wild tribe , that is only thing I do not like in this other things are fine
Hi I think the novel is pretty good so far but I’m confused about how he made a shadow core can you give more details on how the MC obtain ability and resources because I’m on how he obtained those stuff or I’m just not falling along properly and you don’t have to worry about me not reading this novel I will still read this novel and you don’t have to listen to my opinion at all and so you can just do what you are doing now dut like I say this my opinion and you don’t have to listen to it
Is the MC going to get NRT or is going to NTR and is the mother going to be controlled and r* pe by the clan I’m just curious and the novel characters I’ve read so far is good
the story is good. it needs some small improvements here and there still it's pretty decent. i like the mc he is smart , charismatic, and cunning, however there are things I don't like. first, small things like author writing number in words instead of just typing the number for example he writes three hundred -eighty four instead of just 384.also the idea of leveling everything up is good however the mc cheat require for him to do tasks often repeating an action related to the skill to level it up , the reward from each level up is a minimal increase in proficiency while the requirements for each level doubles everytime that makes the mc need to waste alot of time and effort to level a single skill so it can become useful . i read to chapter 26 where mc want to level his aim proficiency at level 1 he can hit anything in 1m at level 2 he can hit anything in 2m and so on and so forth the requirements for him is to hit an enemy from afar and if he misses he losses his progress in that level. the plot is interesting i might give it 10 more chapters to see if anything improves . this my personal intake on the nove i hope it's helpful.
Revelar spoiler I really enjoy this and has alot of potential I really hope this does not get dropped cause I'll support this novel if needed
A woman without horns is like a bike without a handlebars. It just... doesn't exist... haha jokes on you, it exists here! PogU, let's go! Dive in for more Goat Waifu!
Revelar spoiler 
Honestly, it's one of the most captivating novels I've ever read. It's written in a way that the reader never truly knows what the mc is planning, and as soon as you think you have it figured out, you emidiatly realize you weren't even close. The mc is incredibly smart and gor once the mc actually "acts his age" and isn't some incredibly old and once powerful person who now acts like a child. Another thing i like is that as the story progresses, you start to learn more and more about the mc's past and what he has been through, as well as see him come to terms with himself.