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Uma ótima fanfic, um desenvolvimento de personagens são ótimos, vc sabe muito bem como adicionar cenários na obra eles ficar tão natural, gostou como vc faz pra nós ficar até final do capítulo pra querer mais
I love the story, it may be one of the best I've ever read, the truth is I never imagined that a story in this universe was possible, but damn I did it. The only complaint I would have is that it has not yet been decided if it is going to be poly love or not.
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loving it one of the greatest story's I have read [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The Best Wednesday Fanfic Eva 🔥 I like the way the author doesn't conform or change the vision he got for the plot just for the satisfaction of a few people. Honestly mad respect for sticking to writing them based on their personalities. That's all UPDATE MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZ
Impresive, i did not know that that world can be so much more interesting that the tv show.
ffffffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaa que bueno es lo mejor que e leído en todo mi tiempo que estado leyendo fanfic que son 2 años
One of the best novels with enough of all elements without overwhelming or undermining the plot________________________________________4____________________
Before chapter 35ish the mc is so unlikable but after the writing quality goes up. My only issue is that the mc occasionally underestimates his opponents like he let the hyde go cause he didn't think he'd be a threat, as if he didn't make the same mistake with sabrina. I hope there are more interactions with Enid, as her final "conversation" with the mc didn't go so well. Other than that, it's a great novel and keep up the good work👍
increíble el principio un poco pesado y largo pero es de admitir que mientras mas pasa la historia mejor es de admitir que me gustaría que pasara algo mas entre merlina Enid y Luke pero yo siento que arruinaría la historia así que esta bien
A full 5 stars. The shows and the movies never really delved into the outcast communities, so outcasts just felt like normal humans with pretty lame powers. I was always annoyed at how normies could put up a fight to outcasts in the show Wednesday. It made no sense. They're practically the same if a single human was able to kill hundreds of them. This fanfic though fixed all of these problems and more that I never noticed before. The author really dove deep into the outcast world. Gave it a proper society and made it work perfectly while still being separate from normie society. In this story an untrained normie wouldn't stand a chance against any outcast while a trained one most likely wouldn't be able to beat the weakest untrained outcast. There are unique threats to the outcasts that aren't normie weapons, the powers and types of outcasts are much better explained in a way that makes perfect sense, most outcast types are even and aren't more obviously powerful than another and heritage and mixing of outcast types is well explained. The MC is also pretty cool. He isn't boring or a pushover. He can defend himself and gets more powerful pretty quickly. The relationships are also well thought out and nothing about them annoys me for once. I'm eager to see where the story will go and how and when it will end. If you feel like the world of Wednesday could have been so much more then this is 100% the fanfics for you. By reading this you'll be satisfied from the world building and have a lot of questions answered. Personally I'm gonna take the world of this fanfic as cannon because I'm extremely unsatisfied by the show and movies. You've done an amazing job author. Feel proud. I also hope that you never have to drop this for whatever reason. Sorry for the rant. It's over now. It's seriously over, you can stop scrolling. Okay, okay, now it's over. Have a cookie for being persistent *Gives a cookie the size of 2 adult male hands*
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I'm really enjoying reading it. Keep up the excellent work and please don't leave this work of art halfway.
Me gusta que no sea un copiar y pegar de la serie de wednesday el sistema de poder y el protagonista por muy molesto que pueda ser aveces y las malas decisiones la historia se disfruta de todos modos
Just so yall know after like chapter 120, he stops being with Enid, so don't get your hope's up.In my opinion, he shoud have stayed with Enid or both although it's understandable why he stays with Wednesday. I personally gave it some time to digest him braking up with Enid, and at the time of this post, I am going to continue reading.
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(Reader Up to chapter 124 here!) I'm SO, SO angry right now. To make it clear it's absolutely not the author's fault in fact I'm angry against myself to not feeling able to continue reading this story. First and foremost I want it to be clear: I LOVE this fanfiction! I didn't see "Wednesday" (the serie) yet the author succeeded to make me deeply enjoy his/her work and to make me love his characters. Sadly I don't think I can continue reading it for the simple reason that the story is not a Harem, for many people this point is probably a plus rather than a minus but as a fan of Harem to me at least it's a tiny minus. Obviously seeing how I sing praise to this fanfiction so strongly it's clearly not a sufficent reason to stop reading, unfortunately the author made me LOVE his characters more so the love interests of Luke: Enid and Wednesday. Truthfully despite favoring Harem works I've no problem to read a mono-romance but the fact is that I hyped myself far too much about it. At first when Luke started to date Enid I was unsure about how to feel about it as said earlier I never watched the serie so I could base my opinion of the characters solely on the Trailers and the first episode (that I watched specifically to get a vague idea of the settings without getting spoiled) and I really thought that I would strongly disliked Enid based on it yet chapter after chapter seeing her take a place in the Luke's heart I started to like her more and more all the more since I felt the possibility of Harem relatively early (in a Flashback about the death of Edgard Poe he mentioned his brother's WIVES despite him never getting married at any point of his real life) allowing me to await the arrival of Wednesday with a light heart even when Enid and Luke broke up for her safety I was still very clear that they would "without a doubt" be back together. Unfortunately for me in the 122nd chapter the author announced that the Harem I awaited with so much hope would not come to be morever with help of the so convenient "Ctrl+F" I searched "Enid" up to the most recent chapter (Chapter 137) with sadly no indication of a possible change. Now after so much whining let me reveal why I didn't give this story 5 stars since my previous point is to me far too subjective to be a true minus: the power system. Honestly what I will write here is purely my impression, but I think that in trying to "clarify" his/her power system author put themselves in a corner. Originaly the system of Aura where a color=a powerset is interesting but I personnaly find it far too constraining starting a certain point, for instance the author recently gave Luke a "teleportation-like" technique that, to me at least doesn't make sense given the current colors and the strengh of Luke the technique "Shambles" based on the one of the same name in One Piece is described as a combination of his White Aura (Clairvoyance) and his Blue Aura (Telekinesis) where he create a "Room" with his White and exchange the place of his targets with his Blue and while I could accept teleportation by Telekinesis I think that it would require a "comic-tier" mastery where he would use his power to literaly bend space between two points, capacity from which Luke seems still be far at his current level making the explanation of "Shambles" seems a bit too far-fetched where a power system less "rigid" would have likely allowed a more "beliveable" explanation to Luke's capabilities. Finally as said earlier I truly loved this fanfiction and strongly recommend it to you readers but to my Harem-loving friends don't go in expecting it. P.S: Author I BEG you, should you one day decide to make it a Harem send me a D.M no matter if it's in 5, 10 or 100 chapters I'll gladly be back to it.
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It's a great story my friend, it's the first time I've read a Wednesday fanfic and I loved it, I hope you continue until I finish it. I also hope you don't pay too much attention to the dissatisfaction with the topic Ernid, you have done a great job so far, keep up the good work, I am sorry if some words are not understood, I am using a translator and the basic English I have.
I've enjoyed this novel up untill chap 121, when I first read this it most likely seemed be a SINGLE female lead not a harem novel. I love harem novels but also love Wednesday so decided to read this. I found out later it might be harem so I was even more pumped to read it but now where I stopped reading he's making decisions about which one to take, that disappointed me sadly. so I would like to know if anyone has read further then 121 if the author keep the two girls or just a single female lead ?
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Thank you for writing this fic! I like it a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty good, actually. I admit I didn't have faith in it because of the first few chapters, since I thought it would be an Adams world where the protagonist wouldn't interact with the characters in that world, But in the end I was wrong, before the protagonist met the characters of Wednesday, there was a rather interesting introduction, not at all boring, well written and not long I give this fic a 10/10
There are spoilers but that's why I stopped reading the story. I put up with first 50 ch unlikable mc's character and finally the author gave up on writing Harem and sent Enid away. It was hypocritical to hint at Enid and Wednesday's relationship for so long and abandon the girl who was FL throughout the series. I regret reading it. Writing Quality: 3s Stability of Updates: 4s Story Development: 1s for Enid Character Design: 1s World Background: 4s
Whenever the topic is about telekinesis in this novel it's something I really get bugged about, since the power scaling just felt off to me. Other than that this novel is soooo goood. The fight scenes are okay, and the MC doesn't come off as too overpowered but he's not weak either, just that his telekinesis is a bit nerfed. The drama is what I freaking love so muchh, thank you authorrr, you did really well. At the start of the drama some parts were a bit redundant, but how you handled it with Enid and Wednesday was very nice. It felt very realistic and not that farfetched. It reminded me of my past a bit, maybe that was why I found it really well done. I really fell in love with this book coz of how well you handled the romance, superrr natural, especially the later partsHere's my objective rating:Drama 9/10Fight Scenes 8/10World Building 8/10Power Scaling 7/10 Romance 10/10 Wednesday 10/10Overall: 8.5/10Personal Rating: 9/10This is definitely a good book, keep up the good work Author. I hope you continue to improve and do well 😚
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Good fanfic bro!!! Love Wednesday!!! Sad for Enid but mehhh. Oh and the story is just 👌
Wicked! Truly a great read and masterfully well written! I hope to read more and can't wait to see what you come up with next. P.s will fester make a appearance?
To be honest I was reluctant to read this fanfic, I'm not a fan of the Wednesday universe although I saw the series, I think I felt betrayed more than anything by the abrupt ending of your previous work, but I must admit that once again you managed to write something incredible. I like what you do with your OC, you can feel the evolution of the character, like a real teenager changes and grows,I hope you continue writing more works because you have a guaranteed reader here!
really enjoying this book. have read over 100 chapters in a day. best Wednesday fanfic I have read.please keep up the good work.
Uma ótima fanfic, um desenvolvimento de personagens são ótimos, vc sabe muito bem como adicionar cenários na obra eles ficar tão natural, gostou como vc faz pra nós ficar até final do capítulo pra querer mais
I love the story, it may be one of the best I've ever read, the truth is I never imagined that a story in this universe was possible, but damn I did it. The only complaint I would have is that it has not yet been decided if it is going to be poly love or not.
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Revelar spoiler loving it one of the greatest story's I have read [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The Best Wednesday Fanfic Eva 🔥 I like the way the author doesn't conform or change the vision he got for the plot just for the satisfaction of a few people. Honestly mad respect for sticking to writing them based on their personalities. That's all UPDATE MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZ
Impresive, i did not know that that world can be so much more interesting that the tv show.
ffffffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaa que bueno es lo mejor que e leído en todo mi tiempo que estado leyendo fanfic que son 2 años
One of the best novels with enough of all elements without overwhelming or undermining the plot________________________________________4____________________
Before chapter 35ish the mc is so unlikable but after the writing quality goes up. My only issue is that the mc occasionally underestimates his opponents like he let the hyde go cause he didn't think he'd be a threat, as if he didn't make the same mistake with sabrina. I hope there are more interactions with Enid, as her final "conversation" with the mc didn't go so well. Other than that, it's a great novel and keep up the good work👍
increíble el principio un poco pesado y largo pero es de admitir que mientras mas pasa la historia mejor es de admitir que me gustaría que pasara algo mas entre merlina Enid y Luke pero yo siento que arruinaría la historia así que esta bien
A full 5 stars. The shows and the movies never really delved into the outcast communities, so outcasts just felt like normal humans with pretty lame powers. I was always annoyed at how normies could put up a fight to outcasts in the show Wednesday. It made no sense. They're practically the same if a single human was able to kill hundreds of them. This fanfic though fixed all of these problems and more that I never noticed before. The author really dove deep into the outcast world. Gave it a proper society and made it work perfectly while still being separate from normie society. In this story an untrained normie wouldn't stand a chance against any outcast while a trained one most likely wouldn't be able to beat the weakest untrained outcast. There are unique threats to the outcasts that aren't normie weapons, the powers and types of outcasts are much better explained in a way that makes perfect sense, most outcast types are even and aren't more obviously powerful than another and heritage and mixing of outcast types is well explained. The MC is also pretty cool. He isn't boring or a pushover. He can defend himself and gets more powerful pretty quickly. The relationships are also well thought out and nothing about them annoys me for once. I'm eager to see where the story will go and how and when it will end. If you feel like the world of Wednesday could have been so much more then this is 100% the fanfics for you. By reading this you'll be satisfied from the world building and have a lot of questions answered. Personally I'm gonna take the world of this fanfic as cannon because I'm extremely unsatisfied by the show and movies. You've done an amazing job author. Feel proud. I also hope that you never have to drop this for whatever reason. Sorry for the rant. It's over now. It's seriously over, you can stop scrolling. Okay, okay, now it's over. Have a cookie for being persistent *Gives a cookie the size of 2 adult male hands*
Revelar spoiler I'm really enjoying reading it. Keep up the excellent work and please don't leave this work of art halfway.
Me gusta que no sea un copiar y pegar de la serie de wednesday el sistema de poder y el protagonista por muy molesto que pueda ser aveces y las malas decisiones la historia se disfruta de todos modos
Just so yall know after like chapter 120, he stops being with Enid, so don't get your hope's up.In my opinion, he shoud have stayed with Enid or both although it's understandable why he stays with Wednesday. I personally gave it some time to digest him braking up with Enid, and at the time of this post, I am going to continue reading.
Revelar spoiler (Reader Up to chapter 124 here!) I'm SO, SO angry right now. To make it clear it's absolutely not the author's fault in fact I'm angry against myself to not feeling able to continue reading this story. First and foremost I want it to be clear: I LOVE this fanfiction! I didn't see "Wednesday" (the serie) yet the author succeeded to make me deeply enjoy his/her work and to make me love his characters. Sadly I don't think I can continue reading it for the simple reason that the story is not a Harem, for many people this point is probably a plus rather than a minus but as a fan of Harem to me at least it's a tiny minus. Obviously seeing how I sing praise to this fanfiction so strongly it's clearly not a sufficent reason to stop reading, unfortunately the author made me LOVE his characters more so the love interests of Luke: Enid and Wednesday. Truthfully despite favoring Harem works I've no problem to read a mono-romance but the fact is that I hyped myself far too much about it. At first when Luke started to date Enid I was unsure about how to feel about it as said earlier I never watched the serie so I could base my opinion of the characters solely on the Trailers and the first episode (that I watched specifically to get a vague idea of the settings without getting spoiled) and I really thought that I would strongly disliked Enid based on it yet chapter after chapter seeing her take a place in the Luke's heart I started to like her more and more all the more since I felt the possibility of Harem relatively early (in a Flashback about the death of Edgard Poe he mentioned his brother's WIVES despite him never getting married at any point of his real life) allowing me to await the arrival of Wednesday with a light heart even when Enid and Luke broke up for her safety I was still very clear that they would "without a doubt" be back together. Unfortunately for me in the 122nd chapter the author announced that the Harem I awaited with so much hope would not come to be morever with help of the so convenient "Ctrl+F" I searched "Enid" up to the most recent chapter (Chapter 137) with sadly no indication of a possible change. Now after so much whining let me reveal why I didn't give this story 5 stars since my previous point is to me far too subjective to be a true minus: the power system. Honestly what I will write here is purely my impression, but I think that in trying to "clarify" his/her power system author put themselves in a corner. Originaly the system of Aura where a color=a powerset is interesting but I personnaly find it far too constraining starting a certain point, for instance the author recently gave Luke a "teleportation-like" technique that, to me at least doesn't make sense given the current colors and the strengh of Luke the technique "Shambles" based on the one of the same name in One Piece is described as a combination of his White Aura (Clairvoyance) and his Blue Aura (Telekinesis) where he create a "Room" with his White and exchange the place of his targets with his Blue and while I could accept teleportation by Telekinesis I think that it would require a "comic-tier" mastery where he would use his power to literaly bend space between two points, capacity from which Luke seems still be far at his current level making the explanation of "Shambles" seems a bit too far-fetched where a power system less "rigid" would have likely allowed a more "beliveable" explanation to Luke's capabilities. Finally as said earlier I truly loved this fanfiction and strongly recommend it to you readers but to my Harem-loving friends don't go in expecting it. P.S: Author I BEG you, should you one day decide to make it a Harem send me a D.M no matter if it's in 5, 10 or 100 chapters I'll gladly be back to it.
Revelar spoiler It's a great story my friend, it's the first time I've read a Wednesday fanfic and I loved it, I hope you continue until I finish it. I also hope you don't pay too much attention to the dissatisfaction with the topic Ernid, you have done a great job so far, keep up the good work, I am sorry if some words are not understood, I am using a translator and the basic English I have.
I've enjoyed this novel up untill chap 121, when I first read this it most likely seemed be a SINGLE female lead not a harem novel. I love harem novels but also love Wednesday so decided to read this. I found out later it might be harem so I was even more pumped to read it but now where I stopped reading he's making decisions about which one to take, that disappointed me sadly. so I would like to know if anyone has read further then 121 if the author keep the two girls or just a single female lead ?
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Thank you for writing this fic! I like it a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty good, actually. I admit I didn't have faith in it because of the first few chapters, since I thought it would be an Adams world where the protagonist wouldn't interact with the characters in that world, But in the end I was wrong, before the protagonist met the characters of Wednesday, there was a rather interesting introduction, not at all boring, well written and not long I give this fic a 10/10
There are spoilers but that's why I stopped reading the story. I put up with first 50 ch unlikable mc's character and finally the author gave up on writing Harem and sent Enid away. It was hypocritical to hint at Enid and Wednesday's relationship for so long and abandon the girl who was FL throughout the series. I regret reading it. Writing Quality: 3s Stability of Updates: 4s Story Development: 1s for Enid Character Design: 1s World Background: 4s
Whenever the topic is about telekinesis in this novel it's something I really get bugged about, since the power scaling just felt off to me. Other than that this novel is soooo goood. The fight scenes are okay, and the MC doesn't come off as too overpowered but he's not weak either, just that his telekinesis is a bit nerfed. The drama is what I freaking love so muchh, thank you authorrr, you did really well. At the start of the drama some parts were a bit redundant, but how you handled it with Enid and Wednesday was very nice. It felt very realistic and not that farfetched. It reminded me of my past a bit, maybe that was why I found it really well done. I really fell in love with this book coz of how well you handled the romance, superrr natural, especially the later partsHere's my objective rating:Drama 9/10Fight Scenes 8/10World Building 8/10Power Scaling 7/10 Romance 10/10 Wednesday 10/10Overall: 8.5/10Personal Rating: 9/10This is definitely a good book, keep up the good work Author. I hope you continue to improve and do well 😚
Revelar spoiler Good fanfic bro!!! Love Wednesday!!! Sad for Enid but mehhh. Oh and the story is just 👌
Wicked! Truly a great read and masterfully well written! I hope to read more and can't wait to see what you come up with next. P.s will fester make a appearance?
To be honest I was reluctant to read this fanfic, I'm not a fan of the Wednesday universe although I saw the series, I think I felt betrayed more than anything by the abrupt ending of your previous work, but I must admit that once again you managed to write something incredible. I like what you do with your OC, you can feel the evolution of the character, like a real teenager changes and grows,I hope you continue writing more works because you have a guaranteed reader here!
really enjoying this book. have read over 100 chapters in a day. best Wednesday fanfic I have read.please keep up the good work.