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okay im not gonna read anymore as the mc is reborn into yang family and thats hella annoying we already seen the manga people read to not see the previous mc and thats how it seems, only reason people will continue will be because its the only martial peak fic no other reason pops to my head
Good fanfic. Martial peak is one of my favorite cultivation novel and having a fanfic for it is like a dream comihg trur. Reviewing at ch.75. It is doing well and the mc is getting appropriate power up and I like it. The mc intervens in the plot when needed and let's the plot develop when it suits his interest which is my kind of mc. The character flow is smooth and not one-dimensional and no forced plot sticking out. I look forward to the hurricane the mc causes to the plot due to his butterfly effect. I also like to see how the author will link it together with the ploy without disrupting the story's flow.
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Good novel... ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Does anyone know any fantasy stories about this (Peak Combat. Martial Arts Master. Unparalleled Martial Arts God) This story is great but the update is slow
bro aren't you streching story for to long, like literally this and some of the privious chapter completely filled with unnecessary things. I was waiting for the chapter for almost 2 days and when I read it, it was completely filled with fillers, while you literally skipped his other talents like alchemy, array, and artifacts. I request you to stop doing it please because after waiting for two or three days I wish for some good and progressive chapters.
Very well written! The character development is excellent, and the way he interacts with the other characters while supporting the main heroine is fantastic. I also appreciate how he takes all the opportunities that Yank Kai had while still supporting him. I hope for more chapters!
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La historia está muy interesante y me agrada mucho como integra diferentes conceptos de otras novelas a ese mundo, aunque me parece que el personaje ahora mismo está muy OP y espero que sufra un poco en las batallas de más alto rango, por ahora tiene muy buen desarrollo y espero con ansias su continuación.
Don't drop pleaseeeee! We need at least 1 complete martial peak fanfic.
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Author's shameless review.🙂🙂 The story will be an AU, but will not be too far apart from the original. As i still want some events to happen as they did in the original,e.g. the opening of the inheritance cave,e.t.c. the characters except the OCs do not belong to me so their characteristics(not personality) will remain the same. I will try to update one chapter everyday, unless there is a problem or something urgent comes up I will keep up with the updates. I do not plan on dropping the fic. {Note: If you like the fic please send me some power stones, it helps keep me motivated🥺. Also if you have any suggestions for the fic, you just have to message in the comment section.}
it's good but annoying how u made the mc heal for so long but others can heal in just days and breakthrough at the same time, if you think you are making the mc too strong too quick, don't worry atley for me that's what I want to see and u can just make him act weak if it's required to achieve his goal, but only if the situation is suitable, also he has the best constitution I don't think just anyone should be able to perceive his realm, it should always come with some passive buffs, which can also give him a pass to any secret realm restrictions . Also don't stop I am giving u stones daily for the last 2 days👍, so keep up the good work. And last don't make his dao companions so close to his cultivation he has so much hax and if they can still keep up with him it's just frustrating honestly, i don't care how much more time and energy he needs for his solid foundation bs, keep them 2-3 small realms back now that the realms will have 3 stages. Well it's your fic at the end of the day so just take the one's u see fit if any at all. I will support this work nonetheless 👍
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okay im not gonna read anymore as the mc is reborn into yang family and thats hella annoying we already seen the manga people read to not see the previous mc and thats how it seems, only reason people will continue will be because its the only martial peak fic no other reason pops to my head
Good fanfic. Martial peak is one of my favorite cultivation novel and having a fanfic for it is like a dream comihg trur. Reviewing at ch.75. It is doing well and the mc is getting appropriate power up and I like it. The mc intervens in the plot when needed and let's the plot develop when it suits his interest which is my kind of mc. The character flow is smooth and not one-dimensional and no forced plot sticking out. I look forward to the hurricane the mc causes to the plot due to his butterfly effect. I also like to see how the author will link it together with the ploy without disrupting the story's flow.
Revelar spoiler Good novel... ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Does anyone know any fantasy stories about this (Peak Combat. Martial Arts Master. Unparalleled Martial Arts God) This story is great but the update is slow
bro aren't you streching story for to long, like literally this and some of the privious chapter completely filled with unnecessary things. I was waiting for the chapter for almost 2 days and when I read it, it was completely filled with fillers, while you literally skipped his other talents like alchemy, array, and artifacts. I request you to stop doing it please because after waiting for two or three days I wish for some good and progressive chapters.
Very well written! The character development is excellent, and the way he interacts with the other characters while supporting the main heroine is fantastic. I also appreciate how he takes all the opportunities that Yank Kai had while still supporting him. I hope for more chapters!
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Revelar spoiler La historia está muy interesante y me agrada mucho como integra diferentes conceptos de otras novelas a ese mundo, aunque me parece que el personaje ahora mismo está muy OP y espero que sufra un poco en las batallas de más alto rango, por ahora tiene muy buen desarrollo y espero con ansias su continuación.
Don't drop pleaseeeee! We need at least 1 complete martial peak fanfic.
Good........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Author's shameless review.🙂🙂 The story will be an AU, but will not be too far apart from the original. As i still want some events to happen as they did in the original,e.g. the opening of the inheritance cave,e.t.c. the characters except the OCs do not belong to me so their characteristics(not personality) will remain the same. I will try to update one chapter everyday, unless there is a problem or something urgent comes up I will keep up with the updates. I do not plan on dropping the fic. {Note: If you like the fic please send me some power stones, it helps keep me motivated🥺. Also if you have any suggestions for the fic, you just have to message in the comment section.}
it's good but annoying how u made the mc heal for so long but others can heal in just days and breakthrough at the same time, if you think you are making the mc too strong too quick, don't worry atley for me that's what I want to see and u can just make him act weak if it's required to achieve his goal, but only if the situation is suitable, also he has the best constitution I don't think just anyone should be able to perceive his realm, it should always come with some passive buffs, which can also give him a pass to any secret realm restrictions . Also don't stop I am giving u stones daily for the last 2 days👍, so keep up the good work. And last don't make his dao companions so close to his cultivation he has so much hax and if they can still keep up with him it's just frustrating honestly, i don't care how much more time and energy he needs for his solid foundation bs, keep them 2-3 small realms back now that the realms will have 3 stages. Well it's your fic at the end of the day so just take the one's u see fit if any at all. I will support this work nonetheless 👍