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I'll be honest, many of the protagonist's actions bothered me, I was irritated, frustrated, upset and many times I just wanted to skip the chapter so as not to see that part of the protagonist's story or personality. But the truth is that this is important for his development and the story itself. I was willing to endure this discomfort while reading and so far I'm having fun, I've finished the second volume now, I hope I can endure more discomfort that will be in the story lol.
If you wish to read about an MC who is constantly nerfed, drunk, drugged or goes berserker then this fanfic is for you. As the story progressed and I read more chapters I thought the MC will grow up and learn from his mistakes, but every step he takes forward, he takes ten back. Till Chapter 100 I don't think I have read a battle he ever won. Each time he is nerfed so hard or his opponents are described as way too OP then they really are, that he loses badly and almost get killed each time. He is a complete moron that lets everyone manipulate him as he dance to there music. Also from chapter 85 the author starts making mistakes about the MC's system status numbers and impregnate rewards. My guess is that this is happening because of the long periods of time between each chapter release, making him forget what he previously wrote.
The truth is that I couldn't get past the 34 chapters, I tried but it wouldn't stop, a good novel only the MC damaged it in such a way that everything positive was lost... even what was written, everything that touches what was done was lost even the novel itself.
This story is unreasonable due to MC Treating people like objects for his personal use and leaving girls after making them pregnant. This story is awful.
It's really good. At the beginning you gonna hate the mc (trashy person) but a while after he became better. Bad things about this is that autor is wasting his potential in a fanfic and it's taking a slow development on the story (which is not bad but im anxious to know what happens next).
Peak ff. Reminds me of the mafia series mafia 1 and mafia 2 peak games. Love those games chilling driving a 1956 Pontiac Club de Mer while listening to radio touring little italy. This ff has a really trashy mc but hes not a japanese beta otacuck. Hes one of those trashy red necks gambling, drunk, have seggs with the bar waitress, go home drunk af, then beats up their wife at home that kind of trash. Hes really right up villain. Aside from his unique personality the story tho resembles very much like those mafia games where he is recruited and navigates that life of an italian mafia. Over all peak ff.
I like this fan fiction a lot since this is the first ff I have read where the mc doesn't know whole mcu timeline. I first expected it to start from 2008 but when I read it , it took me to the different times. I have read 30+ chapters and it has me hooked. but there are also some problems: first of all , the mcu doesn't use his systems powers at all. I know we have seen most of the mc relying on their system for everything but when you don't use the abilities you have been provided like he got the crow but didn't use it much expected for using it to impress maria. that crow has fudging genjutsu for god's sake.
Revelar spoiler
This probably my favorite fanfic on this site. I’m obsessed with it, the character development is supremely good, the way the author implement the system is so creative and perfect and love that he doesn’t become all powerful from the get go. Love how the real life history is implemented in this story, you can really see all the research behind the time setting. It all feel so natural.
The story has potential, but the protagonist is utterly worthless, making the entire experience unbearable. No further explanation is needed. The main character is so frustratingly useless that it ruins any enjoyment. This story is a complete waste of time and should be avoided at all costs.
Simply incredible, to be honest I started reading looking for smut, but the unfolding of the plot and the character's growth was worth every second of reading
this is by far the best marvel fan fiction I have found, also are you gonna make any other stories if so please do a game of thrones story I feel that would go great with your writing style
Author made the worst MC he could. Super toxic, annoying, unable to grow and keeps getting drunk and making same mistakes caring about no one. Also has almost nothing to do with marvel at all 35 chapters in and other than a young cap and bucky there is nothing marvel about it, all the girls are OCs
Дуже дуже дуже годно. Офіційно найкращий MVP фанфік. Від побудови світу до персонажів. Гг не лиходій, а людина, яку поламало життя. Є класний character development і герой перетворюється в true giga chad.
Wonderful story and writing! I didn't think I would love it this much as everything pointed to an OP character with a wish fulfilment narrative but boy was I wrong. It is one of the best novels in terms of character development with a relatable MC. A question for the author, are you planning to carry the novel to the modern times?
Man, it's peak! Character development is long but great, good world creation and big chapters. I like it! Mc loves women first of all, but who don't, right?
The protagonist is a kid playing at being an Italian mafia character throughout the entire fanfic. It doesn't blow up the system, it doesn't blow up the universe, and it honestly feels like watching a kid's cartoon. Sorry.
All I can say is that this is PEAK..I came here expecting some stupid smut but I was instead met with an absolute masterpiece, I have never been more thoroughly invested in a story before, I recommend this story fully.
Overall, it's a good story with good pacing, great character development, and a cohesive layout. The only issue is that the language used feels very robotic at times.
one of the greatest marvel fic I've ever read try it first before saying anything
Honestly, sometimes I kinda feel down and fanfiction is my escapism, especially, harem ones. Even if it is my escapism, I kinda cringe most of the time when I read them. This one was a great story with a scum mc in the beginning but that scum slowly transformed into a better person. I kinda binge read it after chapter 80. I really want to see more of the father-child interactions of the mc and kinda hope the author won't just forget about his children
You know, i’ve seen you get the credit that you deserve, but i don’t think you’ve ever truly been recognized in how you truly made such an amazing piece of art with this story. like the amount of research you must have put in to not only the mafia of the 1900s but the world surrounding it and you’re interweaving this story so well with so many historical figures that it’s insane. it the craziest part is that it all seems natural. it doesn’t seem out of place at all in fact it only makes me more invested to see real people from our history interacting with one of my favorite fictional franchises. i seriously have to give you the credit cuz this might actually be the best smut fic on webnovel.
You know , after everything that was said and done , what really made me turn against the protagonist was this miserable bullying against this innocent child in chapter 112 ! Would he really have been violent if the boy didn't obey him ?
I was going to wait until I fully caught up to leave a review, but as of finishing chapter 71, I have to leave one. No fanfiction has any right to be this well written, and I will forever hate the author for making me enjoy a story called "impregnation system" as much as I do.
This will be a sincere review. To start, I think this author has so much potential. The writing and structure have been clean so far. It is above average for web novel terms. Most times, I expect errors and bad sentences, especially for a novel that is fanfiction. So just that in itself wows me. The system down to the way he gets rewards I like. The bad reviews for this novel I can understand. I just think they are exaggerated. Most of them call out the character. I admit, that the MC personality can be a bit too much and takes a long time to develop. It just doesn't warrant to give the novel a two or one star. If I personally didn't see it from another review. That the MC will change in chapter 70. I maybe would have dropped it. My problems with the novel: I personally don't like how long it took for his character development. I think after the first two times of his same drunk crash out. We could tell how he is. It got a bit too dragged out by doing it a lot of times over and over again. I just think that the true story starts around chapter 70. Since then I have loved this story. I hope author if you read this, that you can go far with it. Although I understand that the novel is intended to be practice for you. Conclusion: The story is great besides mc annoying personality that takes a bit too long to change.
Esta Historia es tan buena de leer que tengo miedo de que nunca se termine, no tienen idea de lo bien que se disfruta del personaje principal, su arco de desarrollo y historia en el mundo marvel que apenas con menos de 200 capítulos se ha tocado, un digno merecedor de ser el sucesor de las novelas de los 2 milenios! solo algunos tienen este derecho, esta historia tiene para mínimo 2000 capítulos con todo el jugo y esencia que se le puede sacar, no te puedes perder de leer esta historia de marvel fics muy diferente de las que normalmente hay a montones [img=boleto dorado]
The Title is mainly to catch attention, BUT that being said in my personal opinion this is the best marvel fic i have read on this website thus far. There are a few that id say are very close to being as good if they are not equally good, one story of which is Marvel: breezing through history as an eternal. All that being said time for the actual review, i clicked on the story because i honestly got curious about how a system like the title suggests would work and honestly its exactly as i should have expected. the story does have plenty of r18 stuff for those that are into it, but im more of a story guy, i need the lore and quality writing, and this story does not disappoint, it is at a point where i think there is too much r18 because it interrupts and gets into the way of me reading more of the plot. but i cant be to mad as its expected from a fic with that title. now as for my thoughts of the characters, i honestly like them a lot, they are written very well and he has done an excellent job incorporating them in the story as well as fitting them into the world he has built excellently. Now Ricky is an amazing MC and around very well written, BUT the author did do a poor job with his character development in the middle ish (pre chapter 100 i think) of the story. Before you drop the story i suggest you push through that hurdle as the author is thankfully one that listens to his readers (though it did take a bit of time for him to fix his lack of character development) so he did fix this issue and Ricky as a character is better for it. Now I will say the implementation of marvel esc story lines, characters and other marvel universe things are lacking for the first part of the story, ignoring Bucky and Steve, I will say I credit the author for his wise choice there as it enabled him to create and build an amazing world around Ricky and a very stable foundation for when he did introduce marvel elements. I Love the fact the author made this story have a big mafia element and i love how Ricky plays into it, so once again good job author, we do not often if ever really get a good mafia in marvel fic, but that is what this is and i love it. One element i will always love when added to any fic is the High table and the continental, it always spices things up and the way the author smoothly incorporated it in this story is extraordinary, its like a subtle subplot that runs adjacent to the main story line and will pop up every once in a while, i think it will play a crucial role in the story later but i like that it has made its appearance this soon and reminds you its there. All that being said i cannot wait to see where this story goes in the future and how it all plays out. and to the author if you read this, amazing job and keep up the good work!
Revelar spoiler I'll be honest, many of the protagonist's actions bothered me, I was irritated, frustrated, upset and many times I just wanted to skip the chapter so as not to see that part of the protagonist's story or personality. But the truth is that this is important for his development and the story itself. I was willing to endure this discomfort while reading and so far I'm having fun, I've finished the second volume now, I hope I can endure more discomfort that will be in the story lol.
If you wish to read about an MC who is constantly nerfed, drunk, drugged or goes berserker then this fanfic is for you. As the story progressed and I read more chapters I thought the MC will grow up and learn from his mistakes, but every step he takes forward, he takes ten back. Till Chapter 100 I don't think I have read a battle he ever won. Each time he is nerfed so hard or his opponents are described as way too OP then they really are, that he loses badly and almost get killed each time. He is a complete moron that lets everyone manipulate him as he dance to there music. Also from chapter 85 the author starts making mistakes about the MC's system status numbers and impregnate rewards. My guess is that this is happening because of the long periods of time between each chapter release, making him forget what he previously wrote.
The truth is that I couldn't get past the 34 chapters, I tried but it wouldn't stop, a good novel only the MC damaged it in such a way that everything positive was lost... even what was written, everything that touches what was done was lost even the novel itself.
This story is unreasonable due to MC Treating people like objects for his personal use and leaving girls after making them pregnant. This story is awful.
It's really good. At the beginning you gonna hate the mc (trashy person) but a while after he became better. Bad things about this is that autor is wasting his potential in a fanfic and it's taking a slow development on the story (which is not bad but im anxious to know what happens next).
Peak ff. Reminds me of the mafia series mafia 1 and mafia 2 peak games. Love those games chilling driving a 1956 Pontiac Club de Mer while listening to radio touring little italy. This ff has a really trashy mc but hes not a japanese beta otacuck. Hes one of those trashy red necks gambling, drunk, have seggs with the bar waitress, go home drunk af, then beats up their wife at home that kind of trash. Hes really right up villain. Aside from his unique personality the story tho resembles very much like those mafia games where he is recruited and navigates that life of an italian mafia. Over all peak ff.
I like this fan fiction a lot since this is the first ff I have read where the mc doesn't know whole mcu timeline. I first expected it to start from 2008 but when I read it , it took me to the different times. I have read 30+ chapters and it has me hooked. but there are also some problems: first of all , the mcu doesn't use his systems powers at all. I know we have seen most of the mc relying on their system for everything but when you don't use the abilities you have been provided like he got the crow but didn't use it much expected for using it to impress maria. that crow has fudging genjutsu for god's sake.
Revelar spoiler This probably my favorite fanfic on this site. I’m obsessed with it, the character development is supremely good, the way the author implement the system is so creative and perfect and love that he doesn’t become all powerful from the get go. Love how the real life history is implemented in this story, you can really see all the research behind the time setting. It all feel so natural.
The story has potential, but the protagonist is utterly worthless, making the entire experience unbearable. No further explanation is needed. The main character is so frustratingly useless that it ruins any enjoyment. This story is a complete waste of time and should be avoided at all costs.
Simply incredible, to be honest I started reading looking for smut, but the unfolding of the plot and the character's growth was worth every second of reading
this is by far the best marvel fan fiction I have found, also are you gonna make any other stories if so please do a game of thrones story I feel that would go great with your writing style
Author made the worst MC he could. Super toxic, annoying, unable to grow and keeps getting drunk and making same mistakes caring about no one. Also has almost nothing to do with marvel at all 35 chapters in and other than a young cap and bucky there is nothing marvel about it, all the girls are OCs
Дуже дуже дуже годно. Офіційно найкращий MVP фанфік. Від побудови світу до персонажів. Гг не лиходій, а людина, яку поламало життя. Є класний character development і герой перетворюється в true giga chad.
Wonderful story and writing! I didn't think I would love it this much as everything pointed to an OP character with a wish fulfilment narrative but boy was I wrong. It is one of the best novels in terms of character development with a relatable MC. A question for the author, are you planning to carry the novel to the modern times?
Man, it's peak! Character development is long but great, good world creation and big chapters. I like it! Mc loves women first of all, but who don't, right?
The protagonist is a kid playing at being an Italian mafia character throughout the entire fanfic. It doesn't blow up the system, it doesn't blow up the universe, and it honestly feels like watching a kid's cartoon. Sorry.
All I can say is that this is PEAK..I came here expecting some stupid smut but I was instead met with an absolute masterpiece, I have never been more thoroughly invested in a story before, I recommend this story fully.
Overall, it's a good story with good pacing, great character development, and a cohesive layout. The only issue is that the language used feels very robotic at times.
one of the greatest marvel fic I've ever read try it first before saying anything
Honestly, sometimes I kinda feel down and fanfiction is my escapism, especially, harem ones. Even if it is my escapism, I kinda cringe most of the time when I read them. This one was a great story with a scum mc in the beginning but that scum slowly transformed into a better person. I kinda binge read it after chapter 80. I really want to see more of the father-child interactions of the mc and kinda hope the author won't just forget about his children
You know, i’ve seen you get the credit that you deserve, but i don’t think you’ve ever truly been recognized in how you truly made such an amazing piece of art with this story. like the amount of research you must have put in to not only the mafia of the 1900s but the world surrounding it and you’re interweaving this story so well with so many historical figures that it’s insane. it the craziest part is that it all seems natural. it doesn’t seem out of place at all in fact it only makes me more invested to see real people from our history interacting with one of my favorite fictional franchises. i seriously have to give you the credit cuz this might actually be the best smut fic on webnovel.
You know , after everything that was said and done , what really made me turn against the protagonist was this miserable bullying against this innocent child in chapter 112 ! Would he really have been violent if the boy didn't obey him ?
I was going to wait until I fully caught up to leave a review, but as of finishing chapter 71, I have to leave one. No fanfiction has any right to be this well written, and I will forever hate the author for making me enjoy a story called "impregnation system" as much as I do.
This will be a sincere review. To start, I think this author has so much potential. The writing and structure have been clean so far. It is above average for web novel terms. Most times, I expect errors and bad sentences, especially for a novel that is fanfiction. So just that in itself wows me. The system down to the way he gets rewards I like. The bad reviews for this novel I can understand. I just think they are exaggerated. Most of them call out the character. I admit, that the MC personality can be a bit too much and takes a long time to develop. It just doesn't warrant to give the novel a two or one star. If I personally didn't see it from another review. That the MC will change in chapter 70. I maybe would have dropped it. My problems with the novel: I personally don't like how long it took for his character development. I think after the first two times of his same drunk crash out. We could tell how he is. It got a bit too dragged out by doing it a lot of times over and over again. I just think that the true story starts around chapter 70. Since then I have loved this story. I hope author if you read this, that you can go far with it. Although I understand that the novel is intended to be practice for you. Conclusion: The story is great besides mc annoying personality that takes a bit too long to change.
Esta Historia es tan buena de leer que tengo miedo de que nunca se termine, no tienen idea de lo bien que se disfruta del personaje principal, su arco de desarrollo y historia en el mundo marvel que apenas con menos de 200 capítulos se ha tocado, un digno merecedor de ser el sucesor de las novelas de los 2 milenios! solo algunos tienen este derecho, esta historia tiene para mínimo 2000 capítulos con todo el jugo y esencia que se le puede sacar, no te puedes perder de leer esta historia de marvel fics muy diferente de las que normalmente hay a montones [img=boleto dorado]
The Title is mainly to catch attention, BUT that being said in my personal opinion this is the best marvel fic i have read on this website thus far. There are a few that id say are very close to being as good if they are not equally good, one story of which is Marvel: breezing through history as an eternal. All that being said time for the actual review, i clicked on the story because i honestly got curious about how a system like the title suggests would work and honestly its exactly as i should have expected. the story does have plenty of r18 stuff for those that are into it, but im more of a story guy, i need the lore and quality writing, and this story does not disappoint, it is at a point where i think there is too much r18 because it interrupts and gets into the way of me reading more of the plot. but i cant be to mad as its expected from a fic with that title. now as for my thoughts of the characters, i honestly like them a lot, they are written very well and he has done an excellent job incorporating them in the story as well as fitting them into the world he has built excellently. Now Ricky is an amazing MC and around very well written, BUT the author did do a poor job with his character development in the middle ish (pre chapter 100 i think) of the story. Before you drop the story i suggest you push through that hurdle as the author is thankfully one that listens to his readers (though it did take a bit of time for him to fix his lack of character development) so he did fix this issue and Ricky as a character is better for it. Now I will say the implementation of marvel esc story lines, characters and other marvel universe things are lacking for the first part of the story, ignoring Bucky and Steve, I will say I credit the author for his wise choice there as it enabled him to create and build an amazing world around Ricky and a very stable foundation for when he did introduce marvel elements. I Love the fact the author made this story have a big mafia element and i love how Ricky plays into it, so once again good job author, we do not often if ever really get a good mafia in marvel fic, but that is what this is and i love it. One element i will always love when added to any fic is the High table and the continental, it always spices things up and the way the author smoothly incorporated it in this story is extraordinary, its like a subtle subplot that runs adjacent to the main story line and will pop up every once in a while, i think it will play a crucial role in the story later but i like that it has made its appearance this soon and reminds you its there. All that being said i cannot wait to see where this story goes in the future and how it all plays out. and to the author if you read this, amazing job and keep up the good work!
Revelar spoiler