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Before reading the story, I was reading the synopsis: "... the last surviving member of the Senju clan...". I thought, what time is this story set in? Is it AU? Than as I continued reading: "... Marry Tsunade...". Ok, this already make no sense form just the synopsis, not worth it.
Just in the early chapters, and it already puts me off...I like the start where you introduced the MC but the fact that you need to make hiruzen much more evil to make your own plot is just forced, you could've went a different route in order for that plot you decided to use...no wonder the rating is lower than 4
Good, very good. This story is guite funny, and Takuya's faceslapping cringes me a lot. But I like it, though!
The first 10 chapters were good but after that the grammar just went downhill at chapter 25 I could barely understand what was happening. Translation quality 1 star Update stability 5 star Story development 3 star Character design 1 star he fights like a young Master always slapping faces World background 3 star
all the female characters are written terribly, which is excusable in a harem fic. my main issue is that instead of characters snorting by saying "*snort*" its written like they literally say the word "snort", really annoying.
1. Uzumaki. 2. Uchiha. 3. Senju. What else? Klan Kurama? Klan Iburi? Klan Kaguya? Klan Yuki? Klan Chinoike. Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
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Ggghhhhhhhhjqwhshjr de ca de ca de la casa de los famosos en el barrio de los brillaron en el eje central de San Francisco de ca en el barrio de la ciudad de ca en el barrio de la ciudad de ca en
Hasta ahora es interesante y entretenida, ojalá logré viajar a otros mundos con su nivel de poder ( claro primero tiene que tratar con el problema de los otsukis alienígenas xd.
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good fan fic .... but the lemon still mediocore :D...............please add more lemon ..........................,,..,.............................................
Me gusta que Kushina Mikoto y Tsunade estén en el harem pero sinceramente los fanfic harem que recurren al método de reclutamiento de esposas como si estuviera poniendo un cartela de se busca gente para trabajar me da asco( espero no ofender a nadie con esto es simplemente mí opinión)
I hate novels that make the protagonist give up his talent just because, that is, the protagonist is a SENJU and he left the ninja school to run a family business, what the hell does the retard have in his head, what a waste of talent, what a waste of talent. frustration.
I lke the history and for the moment is a very enjoyable read. The chapter may can be a bit short's, but the author can develop the history in this short's chapst. i waiting for more, dont droop this, author.
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this novel is good i would like to recommend it to others my only concern is its short chapter and the story is so fast its like im watching movie with 2x or 4x speed in it. author-san make the chapter long enough for us reader.
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Ceritanya benar-benar menarik, aku menyukainya. Aku berharap anda tetap konsisten untuk melanjutkan ceritanya dan memperbarui babnya terus menerus. Aku juga punya saran untukmu, tolong ambil mei terumi dan samui juga 👍
3,5,3,4,4 - It's the star rating. If you want a Harem story with a Dramatic plot, it is for you. You want first wife to be Kushina, it's for you. Writing quality? Meh, 3 star. Logic - !? First of all, Kushina won't allow him to have other wives. That's that, so let's not talk about it. I wanted to give it a try so I did, but, you know, it's a translation and what do you expect from a Chinese Fic. Overall, if you want to give a try please do so. It's not that bad actually.
I didnt read past ch. 2 so my review doesnt reflect on the entire story. Ngl I dropped real quick. MC is 20, his first target is a pre jinchuriki kushina. Yes, kushina is not yet a jinchuriki and he instantly wanted to marry her… Kushina was probably 10 maybe younger. Definitely not older. So it may be a good story, he’ll if the author waited until she was 15 I’d probably be okay with it. So instantly chasing a 10 year old girl, I’m sorry. I can’t and won’t read this.
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Before reading the story, I was reading the synopsis: "... the last surviving member of the Senju clan...". I thought, what time is this story set in? Is it AU? Than as I continued reading: "... Marry Tsunade...". Ok, this already make no sense form just the synopsis, not worth it.
Just in the early chapters, and it already puts me off...I like the start where you introduced the MC but the fact that you need to make hiruzen much more evil to make your own plot is just forced, you could've went a different route in order for that plot you decided to use...no wonder the rating is lower than 4
Good, very good. This story is guite funny, and Takuya's faceslapping cringes me a lot. But I like it, though!
The first 10 chapters were good but after that the grammar just went downhill at chapter 25 I could barely understand what was happening. Translation quality 1 star Update stability 5 star Story development 3 star Character design 1 star he fights like a young Master always slapping faces World background 3 star
all the female characters are written terribly, which is excusable in a harem fic. my main issue is that instead of characters snorting by saying "*snort*" its written like they literally say the word "snort", really annoying.
1. Uzumaki. 2. Uchiha. 3. Senju. What else? Klan Kurama? Klan Iburi? Klan Kaguya? Klan Yuki? Klan Chinoike. Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking Thinking 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Revelar spoiler Ggghhhhhhhhjqwhshjr de ca de ca de la casa de los famosos en el barrio de los brillaron en el eje central de San Francisco de ca en el barrio de la ciudad de ca en el barrio de la ciudad de ca en
Hasta ahora es interesante y entretenida, ojalá logré viajar a otros mundos con su nivel de poder ( claro primero tiene que tratar con el problema de los otsukis alienígenas xd.
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good fan fic .... but the lemon still mediocore :D...............please add more lemon ..........................,,..,.............................................
Me gusta que Kushina Mikoto y Tsunade estén en el harem pero sinceramente los fanfic harem que recurren al método de reclutamiento de esposas como si estuviera poniendo un cartela de se busca gente para trabajar me da asco( espero no ofender a nadie con esto es simplemente mí opinión)
I hate novels that make the protagonist give up his talent just because, that is, the protagonist is a SENJU and he left the ninja school to run a family business, what the hell does the retard have in his head, what a waste of talent, what a waste of talent. frustration.
I lke the history and for the moment is a very enjoyable read. The chapter may can be a bit short's, but the author can develop the history in this short's chapst. i waiting for more, dont droop this, author.
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this novel is good i would like to recommend it to others my only concern is its short chapter and the story is so fast its like im watching movie with 2x or 4x speed in it. author-san make the chapter long enough for us reader.
Revelar spoiler Ceritanya benar-benar menarik, aku menyukainya. Aku berharap anda tetap konsisten untuk melanjutkan ceritanya dan memperbarui babnya terus menerus. Aku juga punya saran untukmu, tolong ambil mei terumi dan samui juga 👍
3,5,3,4,4 - It's the star rating. If you want a Harem story with a Dramatic plot, it is for you. You want first wife to be Kushina, it's for you. Writing quality? Meh, 3 star. Logic - !? First of all, Kushina won't allow him to have other wives. That's that, so let's not talk about it. I wanted to give it a try so I did, but, you know, it's a translation and what do you expect from a Chinese Fic. Overall, if you want to give a try please do so. It's not that bad actually.
I didnt read past ch. 2 so my review doesnt reflect on the entire story. Ngl I dropped real quick. MC is 20, his first target is a pre jinchuriki kushina. Yes, kushina is not yet a jinchuriki and he instantly wanted to marry her… Kushina was probably 10 maybe younger. Definitely not older. So it may be a good story, he’ll if the author waited until she was 15 I’d probably be okay with it. So instantly chasing a 10 year old girl, I’m sorry. I can’t and won’t read this.