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The plot was good but the system is so unbelievably overpowered.. I also hate kid mc’s.. its not a great look when a 12 year old kid can solo a whole world.. mc gets everything so easily.. Spoiler below the plot in the beginning was great then later on the usual Chinese troupe occurs.. mc creates “dragon city” and he has to fight against everyone.. mc solos and mc is the dragon king of the world… mc defeats kaguya, zetsu, all kage’s bow down to him.. bro solo’s and dips from the universe.. all at the age of 12/13..
the translation needs improvement and grammar. the story was great until you transitioned into a different world would have preferred if you completed the first world and then ended the story. but other than that I enjoyed reading it until the one piece arc
Absolute garbage, do not read this s**t for your own sanity, the premise sounds interesting but you may as well find the original and translate it yourself with an AI Chatbot for better results.
Se ao menos o parágrafo fosse separado, podia dar uma chance, da forma que está ficou ilegível. Todas suas traduções estão assim, recomendo e espero que possa editar melhor.
Pessima historia ........................ ....... . . .. . . . -.. ..- ---.... . . .-.-. .... --..-....-.....-.-..-..-..--.-.---..-..-.-.-.-..---..-..-...-.-..-.-.-...-.-.-..-.-.-..--.-.....
The plot was good but the system is so unbelievably overpowered.. I also hate kid mc’s.. its not a great look when a 12 year old kid can solo a whole world.. mc gets everything so easily.. Spoiler below the plot in the beginning was great then later on the usual Chinese troupe occurs.. mc creates “dragon city” and he has to fight against everyone.. mc solos and mc is the dragon king of the world… mc defeats kaguya, zetsu, all kage’s bow down to him.. bro solo’s and dips from the universe.. all at the age of 12/13..
the translation needs improvement and grammar. the story was great until you transitioned into a different world would have preferred if you completed the first world and then ended the story. but other than that I enjoyed reading it until the one piece arc
Absolute garbage, do not read this s**t for your own sanity, the premise sounds interesting but you may as well find the original and translate it yourself with an AI Chatbot for better results.
Se ao menos o parágrafo fosse separado, podia dar uma chance, da forma que está ficou ilegível. Todas suas traduções estão assim, recomendo e espero que possa editar melhor.
Pessima historia ........................ ....... . . .. . . . -.. ..- ---.... . . .-.-. .... --..-....-.....-.-..-..-..--.-.---..-..-.-.-.-..---..-..-...-.-..-.-.-...-.-.-..-.-.-..--.-.....