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Much better after rewrite.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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I'm loving it, it's so much fun to read this story.[img=Adorei] I really want to see what his relationship with Michel will be like, will Michel still die like in real life?? So excited for the next chapter. Very fun, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Came in purely to make fun of comments and jokes about Pi DIDI and Bieber. In general, the author needs to do a mini-introlude on behalf of pi didi, where g develops a plan on how to enter Bieber’s back door
THIS SHOULD HAVE THE BABY OIL ARC! ! !! ! became the NBI, police etc etc. in p ddy Party or something else JUST THE NEEDDDD THE BABY OIL ARC!
He gon be singing baby baby baby ohh to diddy at night 🤣🤣🤣 48 hours at diddys house is crazy Boi is going to be slipping and sliding with all that baby oil 😂😂😂😂😂
I really like this ff, i just think it needs more frequent uploads. ,,,,..,,.,,..,..,,.,,m,. . ;, , ,. .? : :, . : ? : . , . .?. . , . : ! : : :? ! !?????. . , , .
:Ain't no party like a diddy party " This are the words from LeBron James ..........................................._________________..........................................._________________......................................_________________..........................................._________________
fazer ele mais Histórico como deixar ele trinando aénas sua voz a musicas para depois ele fazer um algum e ir em show para cantar ganhando dinheiro no youtube e spotfiry tudo isso e contando oque poderia comprar com a grana. fazer ele ficar mais velho hoje justin tem 30 anos acho?
Veamos, aunque es injusto, empiezo con las estrellas completas para motivar al autor...................,.,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,........,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
Please get this Justin as far away as possible from P.Diddy. They took away the joy and innocence of this child from him.
very good I like your writing (please continue) interesting ideas and good execution ..
olha eu vou ser sincero com essa história, desde o começo a sinopse me atraiu pqr achei que seria interessante ler algo do tipo ja que sou das antigas do webnovel desde seu lançamento, mas me decepcionei muito pqr parece que a história foi escrita por um robô que fala na 4 pessoa isso e muito esquisito e não da pra entender nada.
please make more chapter of this every week because this is your best work in my opinion and time skip after home alone
This was too much about a toddler or baby child. You should have skipped straight to him at 14 and not have this wired child toddler star thing. It could have been cool to see his journey after studying music and at 14 or 15 putting out covers online like in real life. Then, have him develop an album. I also think it's insane that he supposedly has amazing luck to find a million dollar penny. But can't do anything with it cause he could.... somehow be in trouble??? Then doesn't that mean he has absolutely bad luck?? It's like if i gave u 100 pounds of the most rare metal in the world, but you dont know how to sell it and can't find out. Would you call that lucky??? I just keep waiting for you to skip from this stupid baby stage to when he is older and can actually sing about stuff without it coming out really concerning that he even knows about that kind of stuff.
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
Rooting for the MC to have 2 girlfriends HEhehehehe ... ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. ...........................................
I'd like the story need more chapters continue do not discontinue [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a very rushed story, meeting Selena, then Bruno Mars, and now Taylor Swift. It’s too much, too much and too fast, he’s young, he has a lot of time to meet celebrities. I'm going to stop there (ch17), I'm sorry but I can't continue, it's too rushed. you should watch the other stories about Hollywood, they are not as fast as you, and yet generally the mc is a teenager faster. here are some good fanfictions: Tycoon Actor in Hollywood, Why Bother Being a Hero?, Snakes and Ladders, I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)
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writing was below average. story lacks details. characters were okay but don't seem real. updates are average. world bg lacks research. It's too vanilla.
Much better after rewrite.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Revelar spoiler Diddy : 🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫
I'm loving it, it's so much fun to read this story.[img=Adorei] I really want to see what his relationship with Michel will be like, will Michel still die like in real life?? So excited for the next chapter. Very fun, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Came in purely to make fun of comments and jokes about Pi DIDI and Bieber. In general, the author needs to do a mini-introlude on behalf of pi didi, where g develops a plan on how to enter Bieber’s back door
THIS SHOULD HAVE THE BABY OIL ARC! ! !! ! became the NBI, police etc etc. in p ddy Party or something else JUST THE NEEDDDD THE BABY OIL ARC!
He gon be singing baby baby baby ohh to diddy at night 🤣🤣🤣 48 hours at diddys house is crazy Boi is going to be slipping and sliding with all that baby oil 😂😂😂😂😂
I really like this ff, i just think it needs more frequent uploads. ,,,,..,,.,,..,..,,.,,m,. . ;, , ,. .? : :, . : ? : . , . .?. . , . : ! : : :? ! !?????. . , , .
:Ain't no party like a diddy party " This are the words from LeBron James ..........................................._________________..........................................._________________......................................_________________..........................................._________________
fazer ele mais Histórico como deixar ele trinando aénas sua voz a musicas para depois ele fazer um algum e ir em show para cantar ganhando dinheiro no youtube e spotfiry tudo isso e contando oque poderia comprar com a grana. fazer ele ficar mais velho hoje justin tem 30 anos acho?
Veamos, aunque es injusto, empiezo con las estrellas completas para motivar al autor...................,.,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,........,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
Please get this Justin as far away as possible from P.Diddy. They took away the joy and innocence of this child from him.
very good I like your writing (please continue) interesting ideas and good execution ..
olha eu vou ser sincero com essa história, desde o começo a sinopse me atraiu pqr achei que seria interessante ler algo do tipo ja que sou das antigas do webnovel desde seu lançamento, mas me decepcionei muito pqr parece que a história foi escrita por um robô que fala na 4 pessoa isso e muito esquisito e não da pra entender nada.
please make more chapter of this every week because this is your best work in my opinion and time skip after home alone
This was too much about a toddler or baby child. You should have skipped straight to him at 14 and not have this wired child toddler star thing. It could have been cool to see his journey after studying music and at 14 or 15 putting out covers online like in real life. Then, have him develop an album. I also think it's insane that he supposedly has amazing luck to find a million dollar penny. But can't do anything with it cause he could.... somehow be in trouble??? Then doesn't that mean he has absolutely bad luck?? It's like if i gave u 100 pounds of the most rare metal in the world, but you dont know how to sell it and can't find out. Would you call that lucky??? I just keep waiting for you to skip from this stupid baby stage to when he is older and can actually sing about stuff without it coming out really concerning that he even knows about that kind of stuff.
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
Rooting for the MC to have 2 girlfriends HEhehehehe ... ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. .............................................. ...................................... ............... ................................... .................................................. ...........................................
I'd like the story need more chapters continue do not discontinue [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a very rushed story, meeting Selena, then Bruno Mars, and now Taylor Swift. It’s too much, too much and too fast, he’s young, he has a lot of time to meet celebrities. I'm going to stop there (ch17), I'm sorry but I can't continue, it's too rushed. you should watch the other stories about Hollywood, they are not as fast as you, and yet generally the mc is a teenager faster. here are some good fanfictions: Tycoon Actor in Hollywood, Why Bother Being a Hero?, Snakes and Ladders, I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)
........Mehh... ..................................................... ..............................................................................................................................
writing was below average. story lacks details. characters were okay but don't seem real. updates are average. world bg lacks research. It's too vanilla.