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it's a good story, if you take into account most of the aspects, but be prepared for typical weird nonsense of chinese stories. The MC's childhood friend, even up until she is 18 years old, frequently pees herself and needs to wear a diaper. this wouldn't be much of an issue to me if the author didn't bring it up constantly. there was even like, 3 consecutive chapters talking about how she and the MC were making out and it excited her, so she kept peeing on him the whole time. so yeah, be aware.
This story is very good, except for the author's fetish for pee............................................................................................
good novel but always writing about women peeing, sometimes it's feels quite off .well, good read
good novel everything is great good translation ,good story development , good character designing , good updating stability, and good world background ... just to increase word count ,I had to write those things .....
Great development of characters that really makes them feel real even in an unreal world. A bunch of the progression is measured and not the ridiculous stuff you see all to often as easy outs. A great bedrock for an interesting story. However, this makes the instances where things suddenly take an unreasonable turn in the mc’s favor stand out even more. I want to recommend this but I really can’t.
why can't the author/translator reread his own works? there are so many inconsistencies that it's pathetic
It's worth binge reading. The story, character and speed of the novel is very good.
good early chapters, but I’m disappointed after chapter 80++, no action and just on the romance side and it’s going to be smut. ugh
started out great but as the story progresses, mcs story revolves too much around his childhood friend. tried giving it a chance and got to 140+ chapters but it got more on the romance side than cultivation. ive dropped this but great writing author it is just that the novel aint for me.
Too slow and boring. The romance is even more boring and not needed, half of the novel is only about romance 😢
I was interested in the power system but, this diaper wearing little girl pee stuff is just too repulsing. I let it slide the first few chapters but, the author just kept repeating the same thing. ‘Look at her crotch she pees herself’ ‘she is so old but she still wears a diaper’ like my god we understand, you don’t have to bring it up every single chapter. I stopped at chapter 10. I have read some wild stuff, but… this is just…ew.
Don’t bother reading, IYKYK. Not worth a dime to donate and unlock the chapters
Read about 200 chapters, the start was amazing from a "fantasy and reincarnation" novel point of view. But the story is starting to get boring, the author is playing for the time in development. Don't misunderstand, I have read slow paced novels before and liked them but this is not like that. Even if there is no action, the overall development is monotonous and the lewd scenes are childish and dull.
this is a very good read. ...some readers don't like grooming a childhood friend to wife...i personally liked the grooming ...the slice of life is also very good...
one of the best novels here .. calm collected reading.. stable writing.. great world building and narration.. though lacks little bit comedy and high paced action yet .. .but the slice of life elements are handled extraordinarily .. i am sure the minor complaints will be also addressed soon . after the plot actually develops more... high expectations on this.. one. gooooo!!
Average novel, you wont find anything spectacular in here. Good if you want something to read to pass time but not good enough to really get you hooked. Worth it during free read but not worth spending points for it.
5 stars. I like it. it's a story i would binge read over a week if I had the money for webnovel
Very good great transaction story is fleshed out. No nationalism Looking for raw
Based on the chapters I have read, very good start. I like how the author is steadily progressing all the school arcs. There are some translation errors, especially for the names, but nothing too major.
overall this is a good book and worth adding to my library in my opinion. more chapters to come please
Very well designed world and progression. The translation quality is good. The author uses a few weird gags in the beginning but stops soon after.
Free chapters 27. From reading the free chapters, the translation quality is good. There is no face slapping which is great. The mc does hide some of his power but don't worry. He shows enough power and talent to make him a genius. He is the top of his class in all school year.
Until Chapter 100 it was a very nice read but afterwards the Author began to split the Chapters in multiple parts and make them shorter with almost no process in between, just to milk more money from his viewers. After reading until Chapter 150 I chose to drop it because it just isn't worth reading anymore, very sad.
it's a good story, if you take into account most of the aspects, but be prepared for typical weird nonsense of chinese stories. The MC's childhood friend, even up until she is 18 years old, frequently pees herself and needs to wear a diaper. this wouldn't be much of an issue to me if the author didn't bring it up constantly. there was even like, 3 consecutive chapters talking about how she and the MC were making out and it excited her, so she kept peeing on him the whole time. so yeah, be aware.
This story is very good, except for the author's fetish for pee............................................................................................
good novel but always writing about women peeing, sometimes it's feels quite off .well, good read
good novel everything is great good translation ,good story development , good character designing , good updating stability, and good world background ... just to increase word count ,I had to write those things .....
Great development of characters that really makes them feel real even in an unreal world. A bunch of the progression is measured and not the ridiculous stuff you see all to often as easy outs. A great bedrock for an interesting story. However, this makes the instances where things suddenly take an unreasonable turn in the mc’s favor stand out even more. I want to recommend this but I really can’t.
why can't the author/translator reread his own works? there are so many inconsistencies that it's pathetic
It's worth binge reading. The story, character and speed of the novel is very good.
good early chapters, but I’m disappointed after chapter 80++, no action and just on the romance side and it’s going to be smut. ugh
started out great but as the story progresses, mcs story revolves too much around his childhood friend. tried giving it a chance and got to 140+ chapters but it got more on the romance side than cultivation. ive dropped this but great writing author it is just that the novel aint for me.
Too slow and boring. The romance is even more boring and not needed, half of the novel is only about romance 😢
I was interested in the power system but, this diaper wearing little girl pee stuff is just too repulsing. I let it slide the first few chapters but, the author just kept repeating the same thing. ‘Look at her crotch she pees herself’ ‘she is so old but she still wears a diaper’ like my god we understand, you don’t have to bring it up every single chapter. I stopped at chapter 10. I have read some wild stuff, but… this is just…ew.
Don’t bother reading, IYKYK. Not worth a dime to donate and unlock the chapters
Read about 200 chapters, the start was amazing from a "fantasy and reincarnation" novel point of view. But the story is starting to get boring, the author is playing for the time in development. Don't misunderstand, I have read slow paced novels before and liked them but this is not like that. Even if there is no action, the overall development is monotonous and the lewd scenes are childish and dull.
this is a very good read. ...some readers don't like grooming a childhood friend to wife...i personally liked the grooming ...the slice of life is also very good...
one of the best novels here .. calm collected reading.. stable writing.. great world building and narration.. though lacks little bit comedy and high paced action yet .. .but the slice of life elements are handled extraordinarily .. i am sure the minor complaints will be also addressed soon . after the plot actually develops more... high expectations on this.. one. gooooo!!
Average novel, you wont find anything spectacular in here. Good if you want something to read to pass time but not good enough to really get you hooked. Worth it during free read but not worth spending points for it.
5 stars. I like it. it's a story i would binge read over a week if I had the money for webnovel
Very good great transaction story is fleshed out. No nationalism Looking for raw
Based on the chapters I have read, very good start. I like how the author is steadily progressing all the school arcs. There are some translation errors, especially for the names, but nothing too major.
overall this is a good book and worth adding to my library in my opinion. more chapters to come please
Very well designed world and progression. The translation quality is good. The author uses a few weird gags in the beginning but stops soon after.
Free chapters 27. From reading the free chapters, the translation quality is good. There is no face slapping which is great. The mc does hide some of his power but don't worry. He shows enough power and talent to make him a genius. He is the top of his class in all school year.
Until Chapter 100 it was a very nice read but afterwards the Author began to split the Chapters in multiple parts and make them shorter with almost no process in between, just to milk more money from his viewers. After reading until Chapter 150 I chose to drop it because it just isn't worth reading anymore, very sad.