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I enjoy reading kingdom building novels and if I am fortunate to stumble across one I will try and give it a go and hope for something of merit. Sadly this one disappoints. It is a mishmash of tropes and ideas thrown into a basket and hopefully from that conglomerate something good is revealed. The MC is basically some ex librarian who is reborn with the title of king. He discovers he has access to technology from this mysterious book he can see with his minds eye. So begins to the story of a king trying to drag his kingdom out of the mud. So far this really reads badly, many grammar and spelling mistakes not attended to, vague reassurances of getting around to it one day, which shows less pride in the authors work. MC is rather shallow and mediocre in anything of note. I read references to his emaciated form which he hasn’t considered that he needs a new mind set to reflect a better person. His character is rather boring as he eyes off various women and is enthralled by his chief knight who I think was said to be 15 which was rather interesting to how she got that position at that age. He is betrothed or married to some younger Princess from another country and he still accepts sleeping on the floor. For one he could have taken a number of paths, one being my bed im sleeping here you can sleep where you want, two could be on the floor showing a subservient response, or finally sleep in another room. I am just not impressed with the MC at all to date. There are many glaring issues that should be addressed but after 60 odd chapters, I couldnt stomach it any more and chose to drop this. Needs far more research and perhaps reading of other similar novels to gain a better understanding. The approach seemed good but died after a while.
I don't know whether the author know about industry chain or what do you mean by tokyo Shanghai i have no idea wht do you mean by said that.
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Tbh the story itself is fine. A chapter took many part but the contain is short, it is killing me. That make me didnt want to read anymore. Just take your time man to finish your chapter. I doubt there is 5k words.
Why doesn't he care about information security,I'm tired of him just letting other kingdoms steal his stuff, he complains about it but doesn't event think of anti espionage,it's frustrating to know that there are many spies there and nobody cares
so far so good i have read read up to chapter 11 I just hope the updates keep coming because i love world building with modern technology webnovels please dont drop
I've read it for like 60 chapters and i have to say I love reading kingdom building novels and this one had a really good concept but there is no character development no system or golden finger explanation and no plot I don't know if it would have in later chapters but you have to make people interested in your novel, all in all, I am extremely disappointed. 😮💨😮💨
I enjoy reading kingdom building novels and if I am fortunate to stumble across one I will try and give it a go and hope for something of merit. Sadly this one disappoints. It is a mishmash of tropes and ideas thrown into a basket and hopefully from that conglomerate something good is revealed. The MC is basically some ex librarian who is reborn with the title of king. He discovers he has access to technology from this mysterious book he can see with his minds eye. So begins to the story of a king trying to drag his kingdom out of the mud. So far this really reads badly, many grammar and spelling mistakes not attended to, vague reassurances of getting around to it one day, which shows less pride in the authors work. MC is rather shallow and mediocre in anything of note. I read references to his emaciated form which he hasn’t considered that he needs a new mind set to reflect a better person. His character is rather boring as he eyes off various women and is enthralled by his chief knight who I think was said to be 15 which was rather interesting to how she got that position at that age. He is betrothed or married to some younger Princess from another country and he still accepts sleeping on the floor. For one he could have taken a number of paths, one being my bed im sleeping here you can sleep where you want, two could be on the floor showing a subservient response, or finally sleep in another room. I am just not impressed with the MC at all to date. There are many glaring issues that should be addressed but after 60 odd chapters, I couldnt stomach it any more and chose to drop this. Needs far more research and perhaps reading of other similar novels to gain a better understanding. The approach seemed good but died after a while.
I don't know whether the author know about industry chain or what do you mean by tokyo Shanghai i have no idea wht do you mean by said that.
Revelar spoiler Tbh the story itself is fine. A chapter took many part but the contain is short, it is killing me. That make me didnt want to read anymore. Just take your time man to finish your chapter. I doubt there is 5k words.
Why doesn't he care about information security,I'm tired of him just letting other kingdoms steal his stuff, he complains about it but doesn't event think of anti espionage,it's frustrating to know that there are many spies there and nobody cares
so far so good i have read read up to chapter 11 I just hope the updates keep coming because i love world building with modern technology webnovels please dont drop
I've read it for like 60 chapters and i have to say I love reading kingdom building novels and this one had a really good concept but there is no character development no system or golden finger explanation and no plot I don't know if it would have in later chapters but you have to make people interested in your novel, all in all, I am extremely disappointed. 😮💨😮💨