I Become A Mob Character In A Novel

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Recipe_Brassiere

I like the characters so far and the best part is. that unlike the MANY "extra" novels out there. This is one of the rare few that's a harem! #monogamy boring as hell

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Tiovaughn_Beckford

I like everything thing about the story but you locked the chapters sir/madam because the story is good I was expecting locked chapters like from the 100th chapter or so but not so early . It is not everyone in the world willing the buy coins and it is likely mostly kids and young adults on this app now I have to watch videos and check in the get a pass to continue reading. I was talking about something similar with another author but he was moving like he does not respect his readers when it is them that are paying him . Well I hope you continue the story that's all.

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Asagrim_9

Kind of feels like it was written by ChatGPT, I can’t see a real person describing things like that.

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DaoistuK3Ovv

It’s getting annoying everyone’s getting increasingly more foolish ngl and I hate foolish mcs and characters so I’m out so many holes in the story and it’s just 32 ch dropped

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Sheyon

I was expecting an exciting story from the title but, i get dissapointed by how the story goes. First the story is a mess. There is some incosistency in the story here and there. There are some small and big incosistency. The little incosistency is like in the first chapter author forgot MC is running away and suddenly he was inside his house. MC character also a little weird. MC said he knows all the nook and cranny of the novel but he was monologuing like a clueless person. I knew author want to make him like acting so other people didn't suspect him but, as the reader we don't need that. MC said Samael dead in chapter 2, but the start of the story in which novel he transmigrated into is weird. Like if i remember it right he said story start when protagonist go with some expidition team to dungeon. but dozen of chapter later he said it was just about to start. The plot of his father kidnapping his wife is also weird. just so you know at the end of the day MC goes cronfront his own father. What the use of kidnapping someone if you just need to call them and in the end they will came. The character emotion development also a little rushed. They just suddenly has fellings, like MC who suddenly accept his new family where before he just get betrayed by his friend. and how some character suddenly love him. If author just make it a novel with reincarntion story in the fantasy world. It didn't need to be on a novel (which will fixed some confution when reading it). Just make him a guy who got a seccond chance to live a new life with some system. As far as the story go it felt that way. be didn't felt like a mob character. More like some dude who got reincarnated.

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Aayann_Gupta

I really enjoy the story till now, I hope it will get more intresting in the future. keep it bro.

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Amit_Raj_8214

it's good story till now . Can't predict about the future storyline .But I guess it will be a good one . I just hope author don't drop the novel like many other authors does .....

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Elemise

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Louis_reader_00001

kinda boring novel good Cheats but yeah boring mc i drop This i kinda Like the Cheats but i can't sadly contin with this mc

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covestar

I didn’t read yet but I’m glad mc actually got his revenge/ satisfying end before leaving to the novel world, so for that, this gets five stars.. tho I may update after reading.

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Dream_Lord14

Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass

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daoist566y9n

novel is fast paced. need to be slow paced....

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GeneralDeFartos_L

I couldn't even finish the first chapter. What's with the flowery words and use of descriptive words? I couldn't even focus on what's happening, the words just make me cringe and the problem is that some of the paragraphs make no sense. Learn to be a writer instead of a poet and then continue writing.

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Ased

This is... this is too disgusting. From the narration written by ChatGPT to his thoughts and words, which are so ridiculously childish, I question his maturity. When he sees a rat die in an alley, he feels a pang of guilt. And the funny thing is, he thinks and feels more in one chapter than I do in a day, lol. Almost everything in this world has no logic. From the royal family to his mother to his family.

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Phaeron

looks like its written by chatgpt, no human describes things like that ....... .