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3.61

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earth_19998

hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing advance chapters of this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord  Username is earth_19998   so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you

1mth
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andrew_cooper

Great the story as a great passing and character building and growth and the way time move there are not time skip a a fast forward to show you what happening and how the story move with out the mc and what she dose during this time.

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Daoistcu3ypZ

En lo personal a mi me gusta las MC femeninas, solo si están bien escritas o el trabajo en su mayoría cubre algunos defectos. Pero al hacer una historia tan trágica es un poco raro, esto me recuerda a los 2015 cuando buscabas un fanfic o un QHPS de un personaje( ponele naruto o goku) donde se traicionada al personaje o pasa por una tortura inhumana para darle una historia.

2mth
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Li_sato3708

The story is really good, it really took me by surprise and now I'm addicted to it. Even though it has several heavy moments, I cried a lot when she was made a slave or when she was abused, how I hate those bastards of the celestial dragons. But seriously, it's very different and I recommend that everyone give the story a chance.

3mth
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Kane_Estler

thank you for not making a dumb shit novel with Yuri and making an actual genderbend novel... though it is a bit extreme I'm still happy with this novel

3mth
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MuroXino

la historia es tonta , no tiene control de su destino una marioneta de su sistema , y en la historia se notan tus fetiches ocultos, apesta

3mth
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Guionista

Writing Quality: 3 stars Update Stability: 4 stars Story Development: 2 stars Character Design: 3 stars World Context: 3 stars While the design and stability deserve 4 stars, especially for the work on the original characters, the rating drops due to the way the protagonist is handled. Story development also loses points because the plot execution negatively impacts the protagonist. A large portion of events, specifically from chapters 20 to 30, revolves around the torture Maki endures. This is seen as a major trigger in the story but has also been a reason for many negative reviews. The most disappointing point is when, after all the waiting, suffering, and everything she's gone through, the protagonist finally encounters the one who started it all—the one responsible for her misfortunes—and the revenge feels unsatisfying. This event, being one of the main plot points (if not the main one), impacts the story to the extent that it makes the reader lose interest in future revenge moments, assuming they’ll be poorly executed as well. This discourages further reading, even though the story may be entertaining in other aspects. ------ Summary: If you care about a good revenge arc, it’s not worth enduring 10 chapters waiting for one that meets expectations. But if that element isn’t crucial for you, the story can still be entertaining, as the escape scenes are at least satisfying. However, when the main antagonist dies so easily, it feels as if an essential part of the story is buried along with them.

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ReactionAddiction

I read some weird shit so it doesn't really bother me but for you guys who like to scroll the review while thinking if this is worth it or not then lemme give you warnings (sorry for poor writing): Mc is male turned female with sigma system, the system is mostly a guide type of system with a bit of choice type system (don't wanna elaborate). (spoiler alert below) . . . . . . . the story itself is dark, at some point mc became a slave to Celestial Dragon and she was to be made to fight other slaves while getting a sexual torture and low amount of food (mc is a Monkey D. so low food is bad), and because of that she turned to cannibalism, not instantly but because she was tricked and did it out of spite, I haven't reach the latest chapter myself so if you manage to read past from chapter 30 then you're fine reading this, chapter 21-30 is where she lived as a slave while after that she's on a revenge arc

3mth
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The_Dark_Hydrax

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3mth
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AnimefanfictionInd

I wanted to make the MC a man. But you know just forced cannibalism wasn't enough for me. I wanted to write something really sick and twisted. So sick that it would be hard even for myself to write. And since I was not planning to write any romance related stuff, I thought why not make MC a female. Believe me I have struggled a lot to write those chapters. But all is for the sake of revenge. So if you want to read a somewhat satisfying revenge story, then this story is for you. Because in the end, Gay or not won't matter. This is my second review.

4mth
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Daemon_Sultan

the author is probably a rapist in irl thats' why he wrote this bullshit

4mth
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ChangedReviewer

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Lorf
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I love it i always wanted to see a concept like this and i sometkmes tried to write it myself but i lack the skills necessary to write good. How the character went against the system she got and eventually got rid of it is soo good, so many characters get dependent on a system and don't make anymore choices or just focus on getting stats. Overall it's really good.

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riojiyo131

I've read a lot of trash stories throughout my life. Heck, I even read a Goku story in My Little Pony! But this story is a whole new level of trash. For anyone reading this review and thinking about reading this trash, please don't, protect your sanity. And I mean it when I say it's total trash! Even Chinese stories aren't that bad, I'd rather read a story where the Earth is called the Great Celestial Globe and the protagonist is called Tang Hao than try to read this trash even just one more time.

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5mth
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DiabloRedfox

i dunno what kinda sick fker is still reading this, the author needs to be in a psych hospital for these weird asf fettish

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5mth
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BrandPatriarch

it's dark, tragic, scary and female MC, don't know why so many people gave 1 star for these reasons, try read the sinopsis next timeㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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5mth
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DaoistbTAixn

A great fanfiction tells about the world, about the dark side of one piece and, and gg is very tempting, of course, translation problems, but I think everything else is great❤️‍🔥

5mth
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Haku_Ouroboros

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5mth
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RS_1
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highly recommend,, , , , ,, ,,, , ,,,

6mth
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trollord3000

Grammar could use some improvements but otherwise this story is great. I binged it in a single sitting. Looking forward to see how the plot will progress.

6mth
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DecayedTree

Very good storywise, well thought-out, good Pacing, most of the 18+ was implied and not directly spelled-out, but it was heavy non the less. however due to the strong will of the protagonist, the horror element was reduced, because as a reader I always had a feeling that she would be able to overcome anything and there was no uncentainty (which would have been beter imo).

6mth
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TheChickenGod

absolutely beautiful story writing i can feel the writing coming inside of me with how peak it is!absolutely beautiful story writing i can feel the writing coming inside of me with how peak it is!absolutely beautiful story writing i can feel the writing coming inside of me with how peak it is!

6mth
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Mid_Midas

well the mc called Monkey D Mari train from the age of 4 and learn most of the martial arts and haki of the world before 12 them she go to and get sleved and is raped and tortured mentally and fisically ( SHE IS 12 BY THE WAY') , forced to eat humans , after she escape she became a canibal who have a body full of scars from her training when young and the torture from the Celestias Now about the grammar its bad not the bad of my god i cant read but sometimes you will need to read again the palagraph to understand what they are saying but its a ok to me who readed MTL Stability is not really good because author is writing 7 stories at same time but until now its a ok to me and i love the fanfic of sakura ( Ino is the useless one , Sakura at least gave birth to Sarada ) The world Background is Solid like a brick and good and its not bad HAVE A GOOD ONE AUTHOR 7/10

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7mth
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belesa_feminina

Why don't you leave the MC as a man since he's gay? There's no need to genderbend him in the story. It's weird as hell, I'm not going to lie

7mth
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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7mth
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Qinn_IIIIII

I just read almost all of it, and I love it so far. I need more it has potential.

7mth
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Vidhan_Bhardwaj

Its good , A gritty approach deserving of praise but writing quality pulls it down a lot !

7mth
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Metachrono_Exodus

One of the best fanfics of One Piece with good portrayal of the darkness of the World Government and again good insert of maki in the storyline. So far, I love it. Please don't drop it.

7mth
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Manjulata_Rana

story 5 stargrammar 2 staroverall 4 star👍👍👍👍👍👍

7mth
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earth_19998

hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing advance chapters of this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord  Username is earth_19998   so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you

1mth
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andrew_cooper

Great the story as a great passing and character building and growth and the way time move there are not time skip a a fast forward to show you what happening and how the story move with out the mc and what she dose during this time.

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2mth
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Daoistcu3ypZ

En lo personal a mi me gusta las MC femeninas, solo si están bien escritas o el trabajo en su mayoría cubre algunos defectos. Pero al hacer una historia tan trágica es un poco raro, esto me recuerda a los 2015 cuando buscabas un fanfic o un QHPS de un personaje( ponele naruto o goku) donde se traicionada al personaje o pasa por una tortura inhumana para darle una historia.

2mth
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Li_sato3708

The story is really good, it really took me by surprise and now I'm addicted to it. Even though it has several heavy moments, I cried a lot when she was made a slave or when she was abused, how I hate those bastards of the celestial dragons. But seriously, it's very different and I recommend that everyone give the story a chance.

3mth
Ver 0 respuestas
Kane_Estler

thank you for not making a dumb shit novel with Yuri and making an actual genderbend novel... though it is a bit extreme I'm still happy with this novel

3mth
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MuroXino

la historia es tonta , no tiene control de su destino una marioneta de su sistema , y en la historia se notan tus fetiches ocultos, apesta

3mth
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Guionista

Writing Quality: 3 stars Update Stability: 4 stars Story Development: 2 stars Character Design: 3 stars World Context: 3 stars While the design and stability deserve 4 stars, especially for the work on the original characters, the rating drops due to the way the protagonist is handled. Story development also loses points because the plot execution negatively impacts the protagonist. A large portion of events, specifically from chapters 20 to 30, revolves around the torture Maki endures. This is seen as a major trigger in the story but has also been a reason for many negative reviews. The most disappointing point is when, after all the waiting, suffering, and everything she's gone through, the protagonist finally encounters the one who started it all—the one responsible for her misfortunes—and the revenge feels unsatisfying. This event, being one of the main plot points (if not the main one), impacts the story to the extent that it makes the reader lose interest in future revenge moments, assuming they’ll be poorly executed as well. This discourages further reading, even though the story may be entertaining in other aspects. ------ Summary: If you care about a good revenge arc, it’s not worth enduring 10 chapters waiting for one that meets expectations. But if that element isn’t crucial for you, the story can still be entertaining, as the escape scenes are at least satisfying. However, when the main antagonist dies so easily, it feels as if an essential part of the story is buried along with them.

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3mth
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ReactionAddiction

I read some weird shit so it doesn't really bother me but for you guys who like to scroll the review while thinking if this is worth it or not then lemme give you warnings (sorry for poor writing): Mc is male turned female with sigma system, the system is mostly a guide type of system with a bit of choice type system (don't wanna elaborate). (spoiler alert below) . . . . . . . the story itself is dark, at some point mc became a slave to Celestial Dragon and she was to be made to fight other slaves while getting a sexual torture and low amount of food (mc is a Monkey D. so low food is bad), and because of that she turned to cannibalism, not instantly but because she was tricked and did it out of spite, I haven't reach the latest chapter myself so if you manage to read past from chapter 30 then you're fine reading this, chapter 21-30 is where she lived as a slave while after that she's on a revenge arc

3mth
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The_Dark_Hydrax

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3mth
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AnimefanfictionInd

I wanted to make the MC a man. But you know just forced cannibalism wasn't enough for me. I wanted to write something really sick and twisted. So sick that it would be hard even for myself to write. And since I was not planning to write any romance related stuff, I thought why not make MC a female. Believe me I have struggled a lot to write those chapters. But all is for the sake of revenge. So if you want to read a somewhat satisfying revenge story, then this story is for you. Because in the end, Gay or not won't matter. This is my second review.

4mth
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Daemon_Sultan

the author is probably a rapist in irl thats' why he wrote this bullshit

4mth
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ChangedReviewer

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5mth
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Lorf
LV 1 Badge

I love it i always wanted to see a concept like this and i sometkmes tried to write it myself but i lack the skills necessary to write good. How the character went against the system she got and eventually got rid of it is soo good, so many characters get dependent on a system and don't make anymore choices or just focus on getting stats. Overall it's really good.

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5mth
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riojiyo131

I've read a lot of trash stories throughout my life. Heck, I even read a Goku story in My Little Pony! But this story is a whole new level of trash. For anyone reading this review and thinking about reading this trash, please don't, protect your sanity. And I mean it when I say it's total trash! Even Chinese stories aren't that bad, I'd rather read a story where the Earth is called the Great Celestial Globe and the protagonist is called Tang Hao than try to read this trash even just one more time.

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5mth
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DiabloRedfox

i dunno what kinda sick fker is still reading this, the author needs to be in a psych hospital for these weird asf fettish

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5mth
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BrandPatriarch

it's dark, tragic, scary and female MC, don't know why so many people gave 1 star for these reasons, try read the sinopsis next timeㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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5mth
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DaoistbTAixn

A great fanfiction tells about the world, about the dark side of one piece and, and gg is very tempting, of course, translation problems, but I think everything else is great❤️‍🔥

5mth
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Haku_Ouroboros

🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

5mth
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RS_1
LV 4 Badge

highly recommend,, , , , ,, ,,, , ,,,

6mth
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trollord3000

Grammar could use some improvements but otherwise this story is great. I binged it in a single sitting. Looking forward to see how the plot will progress.

6mth
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DecayedTree

Very good storywise, well thought-out, good Pacing, most of the 18+ was implied and not directly spelled-out, but it was heavy non the less. however due to the strong will of the protagonist, the horror element was reduced, because as a reader I always had a feeling that she would be able to overcome anything and there was no uncentainty (which would have been beter imo).

6mth
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TheChickenGod

absolutely beautiful story writing i can feel the writing coming inside of me with how peak it is!absolutely beautiful story writing i can feel the writing coming inside of me with how peak it is!absolutely beautiful story writing i can feel the writing coming inside of me with how peak it is!

6mth
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Mid_Midas

well the mc called Monkey D Mari train from the age of 4 and learn most of the martial arts and haki of the world before 12 them she go to and get sleved and is raped and tortured mentally and fisically ( SHE IS 12 BY THE WAY') , forced to eat humans , after she escape she became a canibal who have a body full of scars from her training when young and the torture from the Celestias Now about the grammar its bad not the bad of my god i cant read but sometimes you will need to read again the palagraph to understand what they are saying but its a ok to me who readed MTL Stability is not really good because author is writing 7 stories at same time but until now its a ok to me and i love the fanfic of sakura ( Ino is the useless one , Sakura at least gave birth to Sarada ) The world Background is Solid like a brick and good and its not bad HAVE A GOOD ONE AUTHOR 7/10

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7mth
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belesa_feminina

Why don't you leave the MC as a man since he's gay? There's no need to genderbend him in the story. It's weird as hell, I'm not going to lie

7mth
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Gender bender . Gay [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

7mth
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Qinn_IIIIII

I just read almost all of it, and I love it so far. I need more it has potential.

7mth
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Vidhan_Bhardwaj

Its good , A gritty approach deserving of praise but writing quality pulls it down a lot !

7mth
Ver 0 respuestas
Metachrono_Exodus

One of the best fanfics of One Piece with good portrayal of the darkness of the World Government and again good insert of maki in the storyline. So far, I love it. Please don't drop it.

7mth
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Manjulata_Rana

story 5 stargrammar 2 staroverall 4 star👍👍👍👍👍👍

7mth
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