Making Pokemon Games popular in New World

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Alice_chris_Noah

it's a good one. It's interesting to see people's reaction to different aspects of pokemon. I have a question though, will MC only make pokemon games or will he make other's like Assassin's creed, Legend of Zelda, Mortal Kombat, Mario etc...

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Kenai12_

Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.

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KpayH

Good job. I'm waiting for these guys to show up... I miss them...

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Blue_Raven_4992

It may be translated but it is good Definitely recommend if u are a gamer

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Frostkiller

i gave it a average score because it revise fanfic base on 开局制作精灵游戏：主播玩疯了 but i like how you did i hope you continue the work and add more of you idea in the novel cause i read the original it went bad due to some nationalism stuff so i hope you continue this cause i m immerse reading it

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TheWandaShip

Haven't read this yet, but i just wanted to ask a question. Are you by chance the author who went by "Lord_Indrath"? or a username along that line?? I remember reading this fanfic before under that translator, but the translation was basically still just MTL copy paste 😂😂 I tried to ask the author if he wanted me to help proof read but got ignored 😂😂 I still have the book saved in my Library, but it's been removed since so whenever i try to click it, it just takes me to the error page 😂😂 Just curious to know if u were the same or diff guy

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Zeref_642

I really like the concept of the story, but it could be even better if you improved on the grammar as well as using the correct terms like for example “Flash” and not “Shining Technique”. Except for the grammar and the other mistakes, the story is amazing and interesting.

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gustavo_hhhhdsd

my reviews so far (most recent chapter) It would be this system that is not well explained, first I thought he could use points (which he earns with the games he creates) to improve his skills, but then the system also gives him a certain amount of memory, which from what I understand he can create the game he wants using this system memory, with all the details of the game coming directly from his memory, but then later he can also use points to build consoles (gba)? This confused me because it came out of nowhere and wasn't even explained properly, and then the system also distributes the consoles by itself? (this was also not explained) In short - there is a lack of explanations in this work (also reactions from people playing/watching/reading his works), other than that it's good.