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later on chapters are out in wrong location mc defeats the troll troll then it jumps back to start of year for multiple chapters of him putting on the hat to be assigned to griffindor when that has all happened already
it was a great story but it spiralled out of control when he got sorted into "obviously" gryffindor [img=faceslap][img=gift]
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From chapter 123 they are dublicated chapters 🥲 Story so far is really good so I will wait for author to correct wrong chapters and continue 😁
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I like it so far and just hope Lisa will be the LI and the only one taken seriously, I‘ve been disappointed by HP fanfics again and again
progression is slow and chapters very short, abrupt plot occurances and changes
Becomes more and more generic as the story progresses. OP Harry, Physical abused, Ancient house Potter, Lord Potter, Magical core, etc.
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just finished ch 59 it's pacing is great and leaves you wanting more, while also hinting at deeper developments throughout 10/10 so far
He doesn't seem like a mischievous type that'll choose a house just to mess with dumblydore, and he hasn't formed any suspicion of people trying to put him in griffindor... Sooooo my choice of house might not be picked... Hufflepuff And love interest... Hmmm tall order and might me overused, and a bit hard because of the age difference... But that can be offset with veela bonds or something. Like, they are perfect, he's not affected by her allure, and i can onky imagine how hard veela lives with the constant men leering at them and and women hating their kind, and being a different race too... Fleur
Very well written (barely two or three mistakes in 40 chapters), an interesting story presenting a very different Harry Potter from cannon (eidetic memory, a bit introverted, quite obsessed with control, sporty). There's not much in the way of a plot, but it's still too early for that, and till now the author is doing a great job concerning character development. Recommended
Everything was fine till the latest chapters 33 and 34. Dude has millions of gold that he will get access on maturity but has complete excess to his mums's vault that hve 400k gold so he Asks GOBLINS to invest it all in ventures keep in mind he does not have future knowledge. Goblins take 15percent of the profit MC offers 20percent, 5percent as an incentive. He wants to invest in muggle side which i don't should be possible as there has to law or rule that makes it so muggle mony like that is not worth it. He is not a businessman or investors but this is dumb things like this tell a lot of what type of fanfiction this is going to be.
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a smart and intelligent Harry. it's nice to have one mc who can properly use his brain, able to utilize all available resources. there's more to see, hopefully, he's someone who won't be manipulated. let's see how will navigate his life in Hogwarts. slytherin is my first choice for him, followed by ravenclaw. good luck.
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Me encanta está historia [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good perspective and the story building is going smoothly not rushed which is amazing. Smart harry and likely won't be manipulated by dumble-dumbles. just update faster and don't drop it please♥️♥️
I loved it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A very strong and Well constructed story. The author can be a little too much some times but he has a great sense of pace and can create great side characters. What is veeeeeeeeery rare. Thanks and i will continue to follow as long as it be here.
later on chapters are out in wrong location mc defeats the troll troll then it jumps back to start of year for multiple chapters of him putting on the hat to be assigned to griffindor when that has all happened already
it was a great story but it spiralled out of control when he got sorted into "obviously" gryffindor [img=faceslap][img=gift]
Revelar spoiler From chapter 123 they are dublicated chapters 🥲 Story so far is really good so I will wait for author to correct wrong chapters and continue 😁
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I like it so far and just hope Lisa will be the LI and the only one taken seriously, I‘ve been disappointed by HP fanfics again and again
progression is slow and chapters very short, abrupt plot occurances and changes
Becomes more and more generic as the story progresses. OP Harry, Physical abused, Ancient house Potter, Lord Potter, Magical core, etc.
Revelar spoiler just finished ch 59 it's pacing is great and leaves you wanting more, while also hinting at deeper developments throughout 10/10 so far
He doesn't seem like a mischievous type that'll choose a house just to mess with dumblydore, and he hasn't formed any suspicion of people trying to put him in griffindor... Sooooo my choice of house might not be picked... Hufflepuff And love interest... Hmmm tall order and might me overused, and a bit hard because of the age difference... But that can be offset with veela bonds or something. Like, they are perfect, he's not affected by her allure, and i can onky imagine how hard veela lives with the constant men leering at them and and women hating their kind, and being a different race too... Fleur
Very well written (barely two or three mistakes in 40 chapters), an interesting story presenting a very different Harry Potter from cannon (eidetic memory, a bit introverted, quite obsessed with control, sporty). There's not much in the way of a plot, but it's still too early for that, and till now the author is doing a great job concerning character development. Recommended
Everything was fine till the latest chapters 33 and 34. Dude has millions of gold that he will get access on maturity but has complete excess to his mums's vault that hve 400k gold so he Asks GOBLINS to invest it all in ventures keep in mind he does not have future knowledge. Goblins take 15percent of the profit MC offers 20percent, 5percent as an incentive. He wants to invest in muggle side which i don't should be possible as there has to law or rule that makes it so muggle mony like that is not worth it. He is not a businessman or investors but this is dumb things like this tell a lot of what type of fanfiction this is going to be.
Revelar spoiler a smart and intelligent Harry. it's nice to have one mc who can properly use his brain, able to utilize all available resources. there's more to see, hopefully, he's someone who won't be manipulated. let's see how will navigate his life in Hogwarts. slytherin is my first choice for him, followed by ravenclaw. good luck.
Revelar spoiler Me encanta está historia [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good perspective and the story building is going smoothly not rushed which is amazing. Smart harry and likely won't be manipulated by dumble-dumbles. just update faster and don't drop it please♥️♥️
I loved it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A very strong and Well constructed story. The author can be a little too much some times but he has a great sense of pace and can create great side characters. What is veeeeeeeeery rare. Thanks and i will continue to follow as long as it be here.