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This is definitely one of my favorite novels really surprised author only has 3 books
Reaching the end of a good book is rather sad. I rather enjoyed the development of the story and the characters
best story Ive read in a really long time! it was awesome! stories this long usually only interest me for around 100 chapters before I lose interest but somehow this one had me hooked the whole way through! the story was great, the characters were great, the twist at the end wasn't something i expected, and writing is great! This is so cool! easily one of my top 10 stories ever! maybe even top 5! Awesome book, would recommend!
Love the story so far.I currnetly am on chapter 70 but i keep noticing that parts of the story are not connected and the autor keeps breaking the rules he put there and it seems that other lords are really underpowerd with the autor excuse that its all about luck most notible is other lords not having any special building this shows both of the. With her getting new blueprint every 3 levels on any building but others not having a single one
Genuinely the best book I’ve ever read 9/10 Cause it ended rlly hope we get another like this
To start, This is an amazing story but I wish you put more work on the ending like when Drake's is being questioned of his loyalty in the final battle, you could have extended their dialogue and it could have brought more impact to us readers, and one more thing the ending is kinda incomplete and we didn't get to witness what Mc would do with his newfound powers, but overall it is a great world building novel packed with action.
Definitely the best global transmigration novel I've ever read, and as satisfied as I am with the ending, if felt like it came to quickly... I can only hope to find more similar novels to this in terms of quality and creativity. (very good descriptions and designs, both physical depictions and action scenes) The only thing I would ever criticize or hope for more of, would be a bit more of an after story or extra chapter or two a few years into the future. But thats just my selfishness because this was a really good read. Great job author, I hope you continue writing more stories, thank you for the experience!
in chapter 199 she just lost a monarch level necromancer, in exchange for trying to protect a weak one who has so far proven useless, without contributing anything to Alex's evolution, remembering that monarch levels are rare, I honestly can't understand what What made her commit this big mistake?
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This novel is good, however the author seemed to forget what they were writing at a certain point and replaced characters and their backgrounds, at first Sophie was the MC's sister, then she became an orphan and just a subordinate. There also wasn't much character development for Alex, the fact that she was previously a guy with a family before was completely forgotten and then was said that she's an orphan instead. She also conveniently made incredibly stupid decisions as she got stronger for the sole purpose of pushing the plot forwards. The levelling also made no sense as it was clearly just use to level up characters when the author wanted them to, rather than making any sense in exp gain(which was never even explained properly) Overall, a good premise, however, with poor execution
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I'm not satisfied with the story's ending; it leaves me wondering where the transcended gods went."
I do recommend, very captivating story. I will be looking out for more works from the author. I will most definitely remember this story in a very good light. Give this story a try you won’t be disappointed I promise.
amazing story.. regretfully it was very rushed towards the ending it would have been better if it took 20 or so more chapters for the final arc and it had more potential for even later arcs after the final one
I truly enjoyed the ups and downs of this story and I would love a follow up chapter of this story.
Recommend this book to those that enjoy semi kingdom building and OP main character.
extremly good book do continiu to write so good i await more of this and sorry english ist Not my Main langued :)
I like this novel! It has a good setup and an interesting development direction. The initial chapters are nice and the overall story is also nicely paced. but For story purposes the MC starts to get dumber the stronger she gets: 1. She has the advantage of getting plus 50 percent xp from yer minions if she stays in her castle, but she gives it up pretty early and it's not even mentioned in a few chapters. 2. She has a huge army but she just sends it away and after a few chapters the army is not mentioned anymore and SHE OFTEN GOES OUT ADVENTURING ALONE AND GET IN DANGER. That's pretty disappointing.
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This is a good novel except the dialogues are a bit like they're robots with no emotions. A lack of personality or emotions. A force speech with no life. It feels like the story or the novel is not 100% real. Sometimes it feels like the mc allies just obey the mc like a robot and the mc just orders them like a puppet. Btw the mc is also a bit hypocritical, he is a man who became a woman but when it comes to moral he/she acts for justic like an angel himself/herself who is pure innocent virgin who is holy, like the guy has no lust at all i think he i not human. Ohh btw the angels are also the antagonists lol 😆 That's all. But i still recommend this novel to anyone. Still better than many trash and average novels there are.
awesome story loved it just hope they get more clear with numbers in the army
This is the first web novel I've ever read, and I don't regret it; the story is a solid 4.5 out of 5, the world-building, in my opinion, is a 5, the writing quality, barely any mistakes, I love the main character personality, and I'm here for her adventures. So basically, I look forward to more chapters. I love the story and enjoyed almost every second of it. Great work.
This is not review but a invite of many different comments from different areas of our world. I am going to write a novel called Survivors of the Apocalypse [Mankind Divided] Based around every single religions apocalypse or end of days beginning all at once, the story will be made like World War Z with all its different Stories hopefully with the aid of all of you adding your input about different aspects and religions , All the stories will come together in my planed ending arc that will have all of Humanity{religions and governments left} unite in the end of days that will begin my next Novel Breakers of the Apocalypse [Mankind United] that will have all of humanity fighting together to end the apocalypse . Thanks for reading this hope for support .This comment will be posted on multiple Novel Comment sections don't worry not a bot just copy and paste.
Love the story and the main character. The first 10 chapters were changed, which is a shame, as it seemed interesting, but such as life. The edit to the first 10 wasn't bad either, so 5 stars!
This is definitely one of my favorite novels really surprised author only has 3 books
Reaching the end of a good book is rather sad. I rather enjoyed the development of the story and the characters
best story Ive read in a really long time! it was awesome! stories this long usually only interest me for around 100 chapters before I lose interest but somehow this one had me hooked the whole way through! the story was great, the characters were great, the twist at the end wasn't something i expected, and writing is great! This is so cool! easily one of my top 10 stories ever! maybe even top 5! Awesome book, would recommend!
Love the story so far.I currnetly am on chapter 70 but i keep noticing that parts of the story are not connected and the autor keeps breaking the rules he put there and it seems that other lords are really underpowerd with the autor excuse that its all about luck most notible is other lords not having any special building this shows both of the. With her getting new blueprint every 3 levels on any building but others not having a single one
Genuinely the best book I’ve ever read 9/10 Cause it ended rlly hope we get another like this
To start, This is an amazing story but I wish you put more work on the ending like when Drake's is being questioned of his loyalty in the final battle, you could have extended their dialogue and it could have brought more impact to us readers, and one more thing the ending is kinda incomplete and we didn't get to witness what Mc would do with his newfound powers, but overall it is a great world building novel packed with action.
Definitely the best global transmigration novel I've ever read, and as satisfied as I am with the ending, if felt like it came to quickly... I can only hope to find more similar novels to this in terms of quality and creativity. (very good descriptions and designs, both physical depictions and action scenes) The only thing I would ever criticize or hope for more of, would be a bit more of an after story or extra chapter or two a few years into the future. But thats just my selfishness because this was a really good read. Great job author, I hope you continue writing more stories, thank you for the experience!
in chapter 199 she just lost a monarch level necromancer, in exchange for trying to protect a weak one who has so far proven useless, without contributing anything to Alex's evolution, remembering that monarch levels are rare, I honestly can't understand what What made her commit this big mistake?
Revelar spoiler This novel is good, however the author seemed to forget what they were writing at a certain point and replaced characters and their backgrounds, at first Sophie was the MC's sister, then she became an orphan and just a subordinate. There also wasn't much character development for Alex, the fact that she was previously a guy with a family before was completely forgotten and then was said that she's an orphan instead. She also conveniently made incredibly stupid decisions as she got stronger for the sole purpose of pushing the plot forwards. The levelling also made no sense as it was clearly just use to level up characters when the author wanted them to, rather than making any sense in exp gain(which was never even explained properly) Overall, a good premise, however, with poor execution
Revelar spoiler I'm not satisfied with the story's ending; it leaves me wondering where the transcended gods went."
I do recommend, very captivating story. I will be looking out for more works from the author. I will most definitely remember this story in a very good light. Give this story a try you won’t be disappointed I promise.
amazing story.. regretfully it was very rushed towards the ending it would have been better if it took 20 or so more chapters for the final arc and it had more potential for even later arcs after the final one
I truly enjoyed the ups and downs of this story and I would love a follow up chapter of this story.
Recommend this book to those that enjoy semi kingdom building and OP main character.
extremly good book do continiu to write so good i await more of this and sorry english ist Not my Main langued :)
I like this novel! It has a good setup and an interesting development direction. The initial chapters are nice and the overall story is also nicely paced. but For story purposes the MC starts to get dumber the stronger she gets: 1. She has the advantage of getting plus 50 percent xp from yer minions if she stays in her castle, but she gives it up pretty early and it's not even mentioned in a few chapters. 2. She has a huge army but she just sends it away and after a few chapters the army is not mentioned anymore and SHE OFTEN GOES OUT ADVENTURING ALONE AND GET IN DANGER. That's pretty disappointing.
Revelar spoiler This is a good novel except the dialogues are a bit like they're robots with no emotions. A lack of personality or emotions. A force speech with no life. It feels like the story or the novel is not 100% real. Sometimes it feels like the mc allies just obey the mc like a robot and the mc just orders them like a puppet. Btw the mc is also a bit hypocritical, he is a man who became a woman but when it comes to moral he/she acts for justic like an angel himself/herself who is pure innocent virgin who is holy, like the guy has no lust at all i think he i not human. Ohh btw the angels are also the antagonists lol 😆 That's all. But i still recommend this novel to anyone. Still better than many trash and average novels there are.
awesome story loved it just hope they get more clear with numbers in the army
This is the first web novel I've ever read, and I don't regret it; the story is a solid 4.5 out of 5, the world-building, in my opinion, is a 5, the writing quality, barely any mistakes, I love the main character personality, and I'm here for her adventures. So basically, I look forward to more chapters. I love the story and enjoyed almost every second of it. Great work.
This is not review but a invite of many different comments from different areas of our world. I am going to write a novel called Survivors of the Apocalypse [Mankind Divided] Based around every single religions apocalypse or end of days beginning all at once, the story will be made like World War Z with all its different Stories hopefully with the aid of all of you adding your input about different aspects and religions , All the stories will come together in my planed ending arc that will have all of Humanity{religions and governments left} unite in the end of days that will begin my next Novel Breakers of the Apocalypse [Mankind United] that will have all of humanity fighting together to end the apocalypse . Thanks for reading this hope for support .This comment will be posted on multiple Novel Comment sections don't worry not a bot just copy and paste.
Love the story and the main character. The first 10 chapters were changed, which is a shame, as it seemed interesting, but such as life. The edit to the first 10 wasn't bad either, so 5 stars!