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A genuinely solid piece of work, Just starting off swinging cleanly. Solid five stars across the board. Anyways, I hope those reading this get screwed in their next 50/50 outta spite.
I never comment in a fanfic but this IS an exception. This is one of the best if not the best HSR fanfic that I ever read Kudos to you author UNLIMITED BONK WORKS!
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Peak Brainrot. Mc is unhinged and I love it. The character interaction is good, though the humor tend to get stale in the later chapters. I hope you update chapters soon.
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The Character is outright Batty. "Never Gonna Give You Up" We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you (Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
I had a lot of fun writing this, so I hope it's fun for everyone else! I got more chaps stored up, so let me know if you like it! This is a fun more spontaneous story compared to the fate one, but I enjoyed both the same nonetheless
Well, i can't say much other than... I am the Bone of my Bat Blunt Dmg is my body and hitting stuff is my blood Unknown to a life nor known to 5 stars i have withstood Gacha to pull many bats yet those hands will never hold anything So as i pray, Unlimited bat works
A genuinely solid piece of work, Just starting off swinging cleanly. Solid five stars across the board. Anyways, I hope those reading this get screwed in their next 50/50 outta spite.
I never comment in a fanfic but this IS an exception. This is one of the best if not the best HSR fanfic that I ever read Kudos to you author UNLIMITED BONK WORKS!
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Peak Brainrot. Mc is unhinged and I love it. The character interaction is good, though the humor tend to get stale in the later chapters. I hope you update chapters soon.
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The Character is outright Batty. "Never Gonna Give You Up" We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you (Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
I had a lot of fun writing this, so I hope it's fun for everyone else! I got more chaps stored up, so let me know if you like it! This is a fun more spontaneous story compared to the fate one, but I enjoyed both the same nonetheless
Well, i can't say much other than... I am the Bone of my Bat Blunt Dmg is my body and hitting stuff is my blood Unknown to a life nor known to 5 stars i have withstood Gacha to pull many bats yet those hands will never hold anything So as i pray, Unlimited bat works