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Capítulo 14: Chapter 014 Old mother Kalpas

" Trial? "

Su Mu was a little confused, but he didn't hesitate and walked in directly.

After all, this is a peaceful everyday world. Brother Kalpas won't roast him, right?

" Brother Kalpas, I'm so hungry. Have you made anything to eat? "

Pardo didn't regard himself as an outsider at all. After entering Brother Kalpas's house, he went into the kitchen, but Brother Kalpas grabbed him by the collar and threw him onto the sofa next to him.

" How many times have I told you, that is my battlefield! Just sit outside and be obedient! "

" oh ...."

" snort! "

Kalpas snorted coldly, and then walked into the kitchen without looking back.

" Brother Su Mu, please stop standing. Brother Kalpas's house is very big, so just find a place to sit. "

Pardo smiled and waved to Su Mu, indicating that he should sit down first.

Su Mu was not polite, found a chair and sat down, then took the can off his shoulder and held it in his arms. While teasing, he asked Pardo,

" Pardo, what does Kalpas mean by trial? Does he want to fight with me? "

" Brother Su Mu, why do you think so? Brother Kalpas is a very nice person, so he won't fight against people from Golden Courtyard. "

Pardo shook her head, then smiled mysteriously,

" As for what Brother Kalpas's trial is ... you will know later. "

"... Pardo, you're also in love with me, the Riddler, right? Don't you want the benefits anymore? "

Su Mu winced. What he hated the most was the Riddler. When he played in the Land of the Past, he didn't know that Kevin, the Riddler, made his blood pressure rise.

" No, Brother Su Mu! "

Pardo suddenly screamed.

The two chatted and laughed for a while, and soon Kalpas came out of the kitchen.

" Eat, you know my rules. "

Kalpas held two plates in his hands. He placed the plate in his right hand in front of Pardo, with several grilled fish placed on it.

" Thank you, Brother Kalpas! I will definitely finish it! "

" Meow! "

Pardo suddenly beamed with joy. She didn't even use chopsticks. Shee picked up a grilled fish and started eating it. The can also jumped out of Su Mu's arms, ran to his master, picked up a grilled fish and started to enjoy it.

Afterwards, Kalpas placed another plate in front of Su Mu. This plate was also covered with a cover, and he didn't know what was inside.

" Come on, this is the trial I give you. If you have the courage, open it. "

Kalpas said to Su Mu condescendingly.

Su Mu curiously opened the lid, and immediately a wave of heat flowed into his nose along with the tangy spicy aroma.

Su Mu looked closely and saw piles of barbecued meats on the plate. These barbecued meats overlapped each other and formed a small mountain!

Red peppers flow along with the gravy on the meat mountain, and each piece of barbecue is exuding an attractive color. It is a delicious food that makes people salivate at just one glance!

Pardo, who was eating the grilled fish with an expression of enjoyment, suddenly felt that the grilled fish in her hand no longer tasted good when she saw the mountain of barbecued meat in front of Su Mu.

" Ah this ..."

Seeing this, Su Mu's mouth twitched slightly. Could it be that Kalpas was thinking ...

" Eat, you must eat them all! You can't leave even a piece of meat! "

Kalpas said word for word.

"... Master Chef, Kalpas, eating barbecue so early in the morning ... is it good? "

Su Mu swallowed and said hesitantly.

Although these barbecues look delicious, there are too many of them!

It's enough for three people!

" Humph, this was originally a trial I prepared for you yesterday, but you didn't come yesterday, so it's now. "

Kalpas raised his chin and hummed softly,

" If you can't finish eating, hum ..."

" Brother Su Mu, don't let Brother Kalpas to scare you. In fact, every time someone lived in the Golden Courtyard, Brother Kalpas would cook them a delicious dish. It was also regarded as a feast. You can eat as much as you want, and you can't finish it. It's fine. "

Pardo explained with a smile.

Su Mu: " ..."

Damn it, how could he forget that Kalpas also has the attribute of tsundere!

After doing it for a long time, this so-called trial is just a reception feast!

" Pardo! Do you want to die?! "

After being exposed, Kalpas immediately looked at Pardo as if he wanted to kill someone.

Pardo was immediately startled and quickly closed his mouth, indicating that he would not speak anymore.

She is not really afraid of what Kalpas will do to her, she is afraid that Kalpas will not give her food to eat!

" Then you're welcome, Master Chef. "

After knowing that this was what the so-called trial meant, Su Mu relaxed completely, smiled at Kalpas, and then launched an attack on the pile of barbecue in front of him.

" Call me Kalpas! "

Although it is not suitable to eat barbecued meat in the early morning, the barbecued meat made by Kalpas is really delicious!

The heat of the barbecue is just right, the seasoning is perfect, every piece of meat is rich in juice, and it doesn't taste greasy at all.

It is no exaggeration to say that this is definitely the best barbecue Su Mu has ever eaten in his life!

" Pardo, where is that little girl Bronya? "

Kalpas seemed to have remembered something and turned to ask Pardo.

" Sister Bu, she is still sleeping now. You know, she gets up very late every weekend. "

Pardo looked at Su Mu's barbecue with envy while eating the grilled fish in his hand.

" Huh! You don't eat on time. It's because of this that people's bodies are getting weaker and weaker! "

Kalpas snorted dissatisfiedly.

Su Mu: " ….."

Brother Kalpas, why do you sound like an old lady?

Where is my powerful and domineering Brother Kalpas who is always ready to kill people and set fires?

Although Kalpas's barbecue was indeed delicious, Su Mu tried his best but still couldn't finish it. In the end, he only managed to eat half of it.

But Kalpas was not angry as expected. He just ate the remaining barbecue himself and then drove Su Mu and Pardo out.

Before leaving, he gave Su Mu a sandwich and asked him to bring it to Bronya.

Okay, now the old lady of Kalpas has really succeeded.

After that, Pardo wanted to take Su Mu to meet other people, but unfortunately they were not in the Golden Courtyard at the moment, so Su Mu said goodbye to Pardo and returned to his home.

Of course, he came home not to be a homebody, but to work.

He promised Bronya that he would let her see the plan for Bishoujo Game in a few days, so he should work hard now to get Honkai Impact III out.

Su Mu plans to write the game plot until the Queen arrives first, and then write some ideas about the gameplay, such as the abyss battlefield, and version updates.

After all, although there are mobile games in this world, they are not mobile games in the true sense.


Capítulo 15: Chapter 015 Changes to Honkai Impact III

Of course, the gameplay is just that, and the most important thing is of course the plot.

To be honest, although the plot of Honkai Impact III is very exciting, it did have a lot of problems in the past.

And here comes the issue of GGZ's legacy and comigs.

The most classic contradiction among them is naturally the plot of Sakura and Kiana, Sakura samsara.

I believe that a large number of players cannot understand the plot of Yae Sakura and Kallen.

Karen and Otto were clearly childhood sweethearts, so why did she suddenly fall in love with Yae Sakura after a trip to the far east?

In fact, this is the plot of the continuation of GGZ.

When it was made that year, MiHoYo was still a small workshop with little popularity, and the videos posted on station B only had tens of thousands of views.

But when they released the story about Kallen and Yae Sakura, the number of views of that video suddenly increased to hundreds of thousands!

So MiHoYo, who had tasted the benefits of Lily, also brought this plot with him at the beginning of Honkai III.

But I didn't expect that Honkai's follow-up would be so big, and it would conflict with the subsequent plot, so this Sakura samsara plot became a complete mess.

The screenwriter didn't dare to mess with this mess, so when he later wrote about Kallen, he didn't dare to write about Yae Sakura at all, and just ignored it.

Therefore, this plot has been criticized by many players until now, and even Kallen's reviews have always been mixed.

Then there is the issue of Kiana's name.

Similarly, in Kiana's character design at the beginning of GGZ and Honkai, there was no such thing as a clone.

She is Kiana.

But later when the screenwriter wrote the main plot, she was given the identity of a clone, so Kiana's name should naturally belong to the real Kiana.

But since she is a clone, why is she still called Kiana?

The screenwriter had no way to justify himself, so he had no choice but to put the blame on Siegfried's head.

And because the description of Durandal at the beginning of the HI3 plot was vague, a large group of players thought that Durandal was tortured by Otto's experiments.

This made Siegfried's reputation among players worse.

After all, your daughter suffered inhuman torture and experiments at Otto's place. Instead of saving her, you gave her name to a clone. What kind of father are you?

So Siegfried was blamed for this for several years. It was not until the main plot revealed the identity of Durandal that the players realized that it was not that Siegfried did not save Kiana, but that he thought she was dead. , so he gave up.

So when K423 impressed Siegfried with his actions, he gave her the name Kiana.

Because in his opinion, his daughter was dead, so he would let K423 inherit her name. As a European, it was understandable that Siegfried would do this.

After all, there has always been a tradition of inheriting names there.

Just like Goku in Dragon Ball, he also named his son after his grandfather, just to commemorate him.

This plot actually makes sense if used to explain it.

But the problem is that in the eyes of players, this is actually a patch and a forced explanation.

In the final analysis, it is actually a question of eating books.

If you had directly stated at the beginning that both Siegfried and Theresa thought the real Kiana was dead, so they gave the name to K423 , then the players would not have such big objections.

So since Su Mu is going to do Honkai Impact III now, he will naturally avoid these unnecessary mistakes and continue to perform.

The first thing he had to adjust was Sakura samsara' plot.

After all, he doesn't need Sakura yuri to increase his popularity.

Just let Yae Sakura and Kallen become close friends who redeem each other, and there won't be any problems with the plot, and Kallen's character won't collapse.

The same goes for Kiana's plot.

In addition, there are some other character setting changes.

Such as Cocolia.

This is also a contradictory role.

The paradox of Cocolia is that she is just a tool to promote the plot.

Her setting is that of a mother who loves her children very much, but she conducts experiments on Seele and Bronya, and implants a chip in Bronya's brain to control her. This is the purpose of the classic 'The plot is pushed over the character' settings.

Su Mu naturally had to make changes this.

For example, a child in the Cocolia orphanage was attacked by Honkai disease and was about to die. In this case, Seele took the initiative to find Cocolia, hoping to use herself as an experiment to find a way to save the child. Method.

There is also Bronya's chip. The official explanation is to make Bronya's brain more compatible with the reloaded bunny.

If that's the case, wouldn't it be okay if he stuffed the chip into Heavy Rabbit's body and let Bronya wear a device?

To put it bluntly, these changes made by Su Mu are to eliminate some bugs in the original plot and allow the plot to run more smoothly.

And Su Mu made such a change, and it took him several days to write the main plot from the beginning to the arrival of the queen.

Of course, Su Mu also made some changes to the plots before 3rd eruption.

Because there is no Honkai Impact 2 in this world, he needs to tell the players the basic settings of Honkai Impact, Death Warrior, Honkai Beast, Valkyrie, and Schicksal Against Entropy at the beginning.

He also deleted some unnecessary scenes in the original work and added some interesting campus daily life to depict the relationship between Kiana and her friends.

Especially in the part between Kiana and Himeko, Su Mu spent more emphasis on describing the deep teacher-student relationship between the two, which was also laying the groundwork for the final lesson.

After all, in the original plot, Kiana and Himeko had very little interaction. Her and Himeko's stories were all supplemented by Kiana's memories in the Sky Vault chapter after the last lesson happened.

Now that there is an opportunity, Su Mu naturally wants to shape the relationship between Kiana and Himeko in the front, so that in the last lesson, the players can empathize more!

After with the plot of Honkai 3rd, Su Mu went to Bronya with the planning book.

" Bronya, I've already finished the planning of the new game. "

Su Mu put the two documents on the table, then sat down on the sofa, lying down in a salty fish position.

He has been working overtime these past few days to do this, which can be considered a torment for him.

" So fast? "

Bronya was a little surprised. She originally thought it would take a week or two for Su Mu to hand over the planning document to her, but she didn't expect it to be done so quickly.

" That's because I stayed up for several nights to play this game, and I'm exhausted. "

Su Mu said complainingly.

In fact, he didn't work that hard, but in front of Big Duck, how could he increase Big Duck's favorability if he didn't pretend to work harder?

Hehe, don't call him despicable. Why is he so shameless just to chase girls?

" It's really hard on you, but you don't need to stay up late every day, right? We don't set a deadline. "

Bronya said with some doubts.

" But don't you really want to see the new game? "

Su Mu said casually,

" Because you really want to read it, I want to write it quickly. Is there any problem? "

" Eh? "

Bronya was stunned for a moment, and the hand holding the document froze.

"... Just because I wanted to see it, that's why you ... well ... you are really ..."

".... There are quite a few stupid reason. "


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