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I needed to drop it. Unbearable POV changes. I know, the author said they’re important and all, but fuck it. The author should already be considered a veteran, or at least seasoned, so why are they unable to naturally explore the world without these long lore dumps? Really disappointing.
Author focused so much on the world lore that he forget to develop attachments to mc and side characters , also to many pov switches don’t get me wrong the lore is probably good but damn we didn’t even know the mc for a few chaps before we got shoved with pages of info dumps
Way to many point of views, too much prophesizing to be enjoyable. Let the protagonist live a little before you drag all this garbage out. Author put a lot of effort into the back drop and world building but really forced it down your throat.
The potential is sky high.... but way too many different POV... and each one has different cultures and names. At the point where I stopped I have no idea who POV I wad reading from or why. the story is good and if you pull back on trying to show the story from so many views you would have something that would be amazing. but right now... im confused.
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
Going to leave a preemptive 5 star review because I expect nothing less from you author
Read up to Chapter 5, and so far, it's really good. I can't wait to see where the novel goes. Keep up the good work Author-san. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Love the Dune vibes this novel puts off. I can’t get enough! Keep up the hard work author-san.
Banging start. This has a lot of potential to be an amazing novel. Strong MC, Harem, great romance, etc, etc. It’s all there!
A piece of art made by one of the greatest goddanm authors on this app. I can't wait for more chapters to satiate my crack rock smoking-like novel reading addiction. I I would highly recommend anyone read it.
This is really a good novel. I like everything: good story plot, characters and their potential development. I am looking forward for more updates. Also, I will definitely recommend to everyone to read this novel.
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Great so far. I can't wait to see how it goes and if it's as good as Journey. It does seem like it's going that way. I will pick back up when more chapters have been released.
new work? ok, here we go again! ............................................................................................................................................
Shameless author here. Check out Level Up: Voidwalker, A novel about one boy's adventure and how he navigates the world of Valoria. Let me know what you think by leaving a comment and review. Thanks.
I needed to drop it. Unbearable POV changes. I know, the author said they’re important and all, but fuck it. The author should already be considered a veteran, or at least seasoned, so why are they unable to naturally explore the world without these long lore dumps? Really disappointing.
Author focused so much on the world lore that he forget to develop attachments to mc and side characters , also to many pov switches don’t get me wrong the lore is probably good but damn we didn’t even know the mc for a few chaps before we got shoved with pages of info dumps
Way to many point of views, too much prophesizing to be enjoyable. Let the protagonist live a little before you drag all this garbage out. Author put a lot of effort into the back drop and world building but really forced it down your throat.
The potential is sky high.... but way too many different POV... and each one has different cultures and names. At the point where I stopped I have no idea who POV I wad reading from or why. the story is good and if you pull back on trying to show the story from so many views you would have something that would be amazing. but right now... im confused.
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
Going to leave a preemptive 5 star review because I expect nothing less from you author
Read up to Chapter 5, and so far, it's really good. I can't wait to see where the novel goes. Keep up the good work Author-san. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Love the Dune vibes this novel puts off. I can’t get enough! Keep up the hard work author-san.
Banging start. This has a lot of potential to be an amazing novel. Strong MC, Harem, great romance, etc, etc. It’s all there!
A piece of art made by one of the greatest goddanm authors on this app. I can't wait for more chapters to satiate my crack rock smoking-like novel reading addiction. I I would highly recommend anyone read it.
This is really a good novel. I like everything: good story plot, characters and their potential development. I am looking forward for more updates. Also, I will definitely recommend to everyone to read this novel.
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Great so far. I can't wait to see how it goes and if it's as good as Journey. It does seem like it's going that way. I will pick back up when more chapters have been released.
new work? ok, here we go again! ............................................................................................................................................
Shameless author here. Check out Level Up: Voidwalker, A novel about one boy's adventure and how he navigates the world of Valoria. Let me know what you think by leaving a comment and review. Thanks.