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Love the story. I believe the author has captured Tanys' personality well and painted a compelling story to follow. Please, author, continue the great work. Thank you for your efforts.
Author is goated with the sauce, he has a deep grasp of Tanya's personality allowing him to perfectly recreate her in this story. The plot is very well thought out with many nail biting events and interesting events. Overall, one of the best fics I've ever read. I aspire to become as great as the author one day.
I think everyone who has seen both shows should give this a read. It makes my day every time I see another update for the literacy accomplishment come out.
Good stuff. Very well done. Avoids the usual pitfalls of calling bending magic. That thing usually makes me go away, even if the fic is good. But nah, I was pleasantly surprised to see an eloquent, and narritively cohesive story. Things make sense, and don't clash against the original source material, only adding to what was already there. The characters feel the same as well, so its very cozy. 10/10 keep up da good work
I got high hopes for this series and was glad it was still being updated. I never thought of this concept but again, i got high hopes :)
It is perfect. Just perfect. The characters, the objetives of the people, the dead Perfect
El autor es completamente fiel a los personajes ademas de darnos una escritura rica en descripción de momentos con dialogos entre personajes coherentes y naturales ademas de seguir un guion logico a lo largo de la historia
This work gets Tanya's personality (youjo senki/mc) right, the only change in her personality that I've noticed so far (chap 14) is that she really values friendships (only about 4, which are important figures) apart from that the plot is similar like the original work, but in the avatar world (and so far it is well done)
Peakest peak to ever peak on this wn. I doubted at first but the writing quality in this fic is incredible, it stays true to the character Tanya at hand and doesn’t deviate at all from what the original would do in this situation. Development of the story is perfect and really hammers the themes of the show perfectly when put against the themes and ideals of Tanya. Absolute peak
jaime vraiment cette histoire lauteur a reelemnt capte la personnalite dumc ou fl si vous prefere , jaime beaucoup ce quil ont fait delle et surotu la mettre dans nation du feu est genial
rare to see fanfics that portray Tanya as who she actually is, rather than a made up version that fit the whole "cute girl doing cute things" deal
I NEED MOAR!!! This is making my chaotic neutral rage out of control tanya is a little devil and I can't get enough SO MOAR!
(CH8) está bem escrito, erros ortográficos/gramaticais são quase inexistentes. Sinto que o autor capturou Tanya com precisão como personagem e é fiel em seu retrato dela. O desenvolvimento da história é onde eu poderia encontrar problemas mais tarde, mas é
Revelar spoiler
Good quality fanfic one of the best I think good grammar stable updates so overall highly recommend it to anyone
Not a bad ATLA fanfiction tbh. Most atla FF tend to gravitate towards joining the avatar on his quest, few actually take place from the perspective of a member of the fire nation. MC definitely has some crazy issues but there isn’t really anything to critique about the work. I recommend it.
this is exactly the type of story that the terrorist in the friends group would like (AKA ME)and author really catch the character of Tanya really well so keep making the masterpiece[img=gift]
Not a lot of fanfics where the story is actually happening and it's not some power fantasy, system or omniscience. Recommend to read it.
The only real problem is that there isn’t enough, one of the only pieces that seem to nail Tanya’s personality. The multiple POVs work well to show how Tanya reads situations differently then “the normal” characters.
Please make a romantic line where there is a normal relationship between a boy and a girl .....,, please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️
Tanya, in the Imperialistic Fire Nation Military. I can definitely wait for chapters!
Aunque, hasta ahora, es casi la misma historia del anime, logró capturar muy bien las personalidades de los personajes de Avatar y lograr que la trama fluya de manera natural. Excelente.
First time seeing this kind of premise in a story, this is really underrated. I really like the story so far, Keep up the good work Author-san
(CH8) its written well, mistakes with spelling/grammar are almost non-existent. I feel like the author has accurately captured Tanya as a character and is faithful in his portrayal of her. Story development is where I might find issue later on but its hard to see where everything is going given there being only 8 chapters. Author might go the way of the original anime and make Tanya a front line military commander or perhaps will try something else. hard to say, but its promising so far.
Love the story. I believe the author has captured Tanys' personality well and painted a compelling story to follow. Please, author, continue the great work. Thank you for your efforts.
Author is goated with the sauce, he has a deep grasp of Tanya's personality allowing him to perfectly recreate her in this story. The plot is very well thought out with many nail biting events and interesting events. Overall, one of the best fics I've ever read. I aspire to become as great as the author one day.
I think everyone who has seen both shows should give this a read. It makes my day every time I see another update for the literacy accomplishment come out.
Good stuff. Very well done. Avoids the usual pitfalls of calling bending magic. That thing usually makes me go away, even if the fic is good. But nah, I was pleasantly surprised to see an eloquent, and narritively cohesive story. Things make sense, and don't clash against the original source material, only adding to what was already there. The characters feel the same as well, so its very cozy. 10/10 keep up da good work
I got high hopes for this series and was glad it was still being updated. I never thought of this concept but again, i got high hopes :)
It is perfect. Just perfect. The characters, the objetives of the people, the dead Perfect
El autor es completamente fiel a los personajes ademas de darnos una escritura rica en descripción de momentos con dialogos entre personajes coherentes y naturales ademas de seguir un guion logico a lo largo de la historia
This work gets Tanya's personality (youjo senki/mc) right, the only change in her personality that I've noticed so far (chap 14) is that she really values friendships (only about 4, which are important figures) apart from that the plot is similar like the original work, but in the avatar world (and so far it is well done)
Peakest peak to ever peak on this wn. I doubted at first but the writing quality in this fic is incredible, it stays true to the character Tanya at hand and doesn’t deviate at all from what the original would do in this situation. Development of the story is perfect and really hammers the themes of the show perfectly when put against the themes and ideals of Tanya. Absolute peak
jaime vraiment cette histoire lauteur a reelemnt capte la personnalite dumc ou fl si vous prefere , jaime beaucoup ce quil ont fait delle et surotu la mettre dans nation du feu est genial
rare to see fanfics that portray Tanya as who she actually is, rather than a made up version that fit the whole "cute girl doing cute things" deal
I NEED MOAR!!! This is making my chaotic neutral rage out of control tanya is a little devil and I can't get enough SO MOAR!
(CH8) está bem escrito, erros ortográficos/gramaticais são quase inexistentes. Sinto que o autor capturou Tanya com precisão como personagem e é fiel em seu retrato dela. O desenvolvimento da história é onde eu poderia encontrar problemas mais tarde, mas é
Revelar spoiler Good quality fanfic one of the best I think good grammar stable updates so overall highly recommend it to anyone
Not a bad ATLA fanfiction tbh. Most atla FF tend to gravitate towards joining the avatar on his quest, few actually take place from the perspective of a member of the fire nation. MC definitely has some crazy issues but there isn’t really anything to critique about the work. I recommend it.
this is exactly the type of story that the terrorist in the friends group would like (AKA ME)and author really catch the character of Tanya really well so keep making the masterpiece[img=gift]
Not a lot of fanfics where the story is actually happening and it's not some power fantasy, system or omniscience. Recommend to read it.
The only real problem is that there isn’t enough, one of the only pieces that seem to nail Tanya’s personality. The multiple POVs work well to show how Tanya reads situations differently then “the normal” characters.
Please make a romantic line where there is a normal relationship between a boy and a girl .....,, please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️ please❤️
Tanya, in the Imperialistic Fire Nation Military. I can definitely wait for chapters!
Aunque, hasta ahora, es casi la misma historia del anime, logró capturar muy bien las personalidades de los personajes de Avatar y lograr que la trama fluya de manera natural. Excelente.
First time seeing this kind of premise in a story, this is really underrated. I really like the story so far, Keep up the good work Author-san
(CH8) its written well, mistakes with spelling/grammar are almost non-existent. I feel like the author has accurately captured Tanya as a character and is faithful in his portrayal of her. Story development is where I might find issue later on but its hard to see where everything is going given there being only 8 chapters. Author might go the way of the original anime and make Tanya a front line military commander or perhaps will try something else. hard to say, but its promising so far.
There was a problem with the fanfic. I had to delete it before Re-publishing it.