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Normally I don't give reviews cuz it's too much typing and thinking but for the author it's worth it . This fanfiction is everything I like and more ,op character,huge harem,no yuri or ntr, intelligent ,not a beta ,as for the plot it's neither slow paced or fast ,but just good enough not to complain . As for the grammar, it's on point but my only concern is the repeating of some sentences but besides that i love the fanfic and would recommend you to give it a read.
Well this is the first fanfic where Mc is not a devil but a vampire if you gave mc the power of True Noblesse or Alcuard Helsing it really interesting to see what other faction this or how he simply create noble using the power of Noblesse ( My English is not very good
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It is good so far keep up the good work ............................................................ ............................................................
Author shamelessly giving himself a review (3.8-4.2/5 with honesty) and also attempt at providing some insights into this story of mine. The story is a Multi-Cross, but the first part of the story is quite the introduction into things, we’re not quite heavy into DxD plot or any of the verses I intend to jumble a bit. I’ve been writing around for quite a while, and have found this habit of building up, or many dragging things along the lines. Hopefully this doesn’t happen with this project. (Wink)(Wink) Another quirk I have is giving personality to characters and developing them which leads us back to building up things and dragging. However, if people want me to cut directly to the honey, I’m willing to shorten and dumb down plots. Next? I’ll talk a bit about the MC. He’s your typical joe, a bad boy (a wannabe) who got himself hit by karma hard, but ended up with a 2nd chance. And this leads us to him getting to lead the life of a Villain Character (??), an individual who got all the perks of being a Final Boss for the DxD/Rosario or Qwaser verse. Another part that maybe some would be curious about. The question of Harem. No, if you ask in your mind, this isn’t Yuri or whatever abomination. Idk where that came from, has the Meta on Webnovel shifted to that kink? Well, whatever. I don’t know exactly the upper limits of this Harem, but I can say the lowest limit (6+). If you’re really, really curious about which member I’m certain that I might add, ask me in a question down bellow. To go with an ending. Do give your feedback after reading the story, constructive or not. I need engagement and feedback from readers to actually make me feel like continuing writing, because with life sometimes I just get bored of it and take a break, and breaks lead to dropping things.
Meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
good one need more chapters . The mc needs to be more stronger if he needs a chance to survive in this world
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Normally I don't give reviews cuz it's too much typing and thinking but for the author it's worth it . This fanfiction is everything I like and more ,op character,huge harem,no yuri or ntr, intelligent ,not a beta ,as for the plot it's neither slow paced or fast ,but just good enough not to complain . As for the grammar, it's on point but my only concern is the repeating of some sentences but besides that i love the fanfic and would recommend you to give it a read.
Well this is the first fanfic where Mc is not a devil but a vampire if you gave mc the power of True Noblesse or Alcuard Helsing it really interesting to see what other faction this or how he simply create noble using the power of Noblesse ( My English is not very good
Interesting...🫡[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
It is good so far keep up the good work ............................................................ ............................................................
Author shamelessly giving himself a review (3.8-4.2/5 with honesty) and also attempt at providing some insights into this story of mine. The story is a Multi-Cross, but the first part of the story is quite the introduction into things, we’re not quite heavy into DxD plot or any of the verses I intend to jumble a bit. I’ve been writing around for quite a while, and have found this habit of building up, or many dragging things along the lines. Hopefully this doesn’t happen with this project. (Wink)(Wink) Another quirk I have is giving personality to characters and developing them which leads us back to building up things and dragging. However, if people want me to cut directly to the honey, I’m willing to shorten and dumb down plots. Next? I’ll talk a bit about the MC. He’s your typical joe, a bad boy (a wannabe) who got himself hit by karma hard, but ended up with a 2nd chance. And this leads us to him getting to lead the life of a Villain Character (??), an individual who got all the perks of being a Final Boss for the DxD/Rosario or Qwaser verse. Another part that maybe some would be curious about. The question of Harem. No, if you ask in your mind, this isn’t Yuri or whatever abomination. Idk where that came from, has the Meta on Webnovel shifted to that kink? Well, whatever. I don’t know exactly the upper limits of this Harem, but I can say the lowest limit (6+). If you’re really, really curious about which member I’m certain that I might add, ask me in a question down bellow. To go with an ending. Do give your feedback after reading the story, constructive or not. I need engagement and feedback from readers to actually make me feel like continuing writing, because with life sometimes I just get bored of it and take a break, and breaks lead to dropping things.
Meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
good one need more chapters . The mc needs to be more stronger if he needs a chance to survive in this world