One Piece: I Am Kaido And Luffy is Coming!

LV 2

Moveton

Even though the story is interesting, I just can't understand why people give it such high ratings. at best it's worth a 3/5. This is a typical isekai story with the system and MC overpowered. Narration: The story operates on a simple principle: Kaido goes somewhere, defeats all enemies easily, destroys the surrounding area. There are no interesting dialogues, the characters are all bland, I understand that this is fan fiction and there is no need to retell the backstory of the characters from the very beginning, but they are not even given the appropriate timing, the characters are only needed to show how they fear Kaido, or how much they respect him, nothing more. Plot: The story actually ceases to make sense immediately after the MC receives the first reward from the system, since he was already the strongest character in the story, but he became even stronger and already at the beginning of the 20th chapters he can go and destroy the World, just flying and burning everything with your breath. MS: Not interesting, he has no personal philosophy, all he does is carry out the missions of the system. He doesn't explore the world of ONE PIECE, doesn't try to find treasure, doesn't build his own kingdom, with his own views and preferences, he just does what Kaido would do in the original story with changes in the storyline. The description of the battles is quite interesting and the author conveys the atmosphere of what is happening well, but the battles themselves are not interesting, because the MC is invincible.

LV 2

R0B

The story is missing some *spice*, you know.. It's preatty bland - no humor, steriotipical characters, no butterfly effect, mc thinks he IS Kaido personality wise, 1 hit 1 kill fights. This story is missing a hook that keeps the readers reading. For me tge more I read the harder it was to read the next chapter because nothing interesting happened. Everything is predictable, so there weren't a lot of surprises. Now the system - the system makes the story worse, because the main point of this fanfic was "what would you do if you were Kaido?", obviously the answer wouldn't be you would cheat with a system, right? That defeats the whole purpose of this fanfic idea wise.

LV 4

madman1010

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LV 4

Iteq24_24

nice story author you deserve 5 stars ,

LV 10

Gunts92

great fanfiction until the auction, from then on it's unnecessarily long chapters, and kaido makes unnecessary plans since he's so powerful, it's clearly forced to lengthen the story. as we know that the translator has a patreon... move on if you don't want to be disappointed

LV 11

Benoit_Valtin

too long for nothing, more 20 chapters to kill Luffy, and the end... just the author who takes us for ideas with a supposedly intelligent MC with complicated plans. kaido new is stronger and invincible, what's the point of making plans, he's in front of you, you kill him now and that's it

LV 5

Hasu_Yodd

best one piece fan fic have ever read. The level of detail that went into connecting planning is amazing.

LV 1

Armourstack

thanks

LV 4

Haze_

Good translation, good story.

LV 4

Chaosscythe

Great story!!! love this! Though the grammar needs a little fixing!

LV 1

Rhandson_D

lazy work with the + system

LV 4

_Ni_ck_

An excellent story until now I have never read one that had Kaido as the MC I hope I can continue reading chapters of this story and see how it continues to develop

LV 3

Alex3DxD

A good idea but very wasted, it is just another dog of the system that moves for and through the system, the protagonist lacks charisma and motivations

Очень круто классно жду продолжения Спасибо большое за такие работы и кучу труда Фанфик очень понравился как развивается история и в целом как ведёт себя гг давно искал что нибудь такое что бы почитать

A beautiful story, and I will continue working on it because I am confident that it will be perhaps the greatest and greatest story for Kaido.

LV 1

SwiftKey_SWIFTKEY

A very beautiful story, but what do you think about adding an atmosphere of romance? Hancock, for example, But despite that, the story is very wonderful and interesting. Keep it up Add romance :) ..[img=Loving it]

LV 13

Muhamby

Extremely fast paced, but I enjoyed it.

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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