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I am trying to change the recommended algorithm to stop suggesting these. I do not have anything against this genre as a whole, but I want the recommendations to be something I am more likely to read and this just got caught in the crossfire
I absolutely loved the chemistry between the characters! Their interactions felt so natural and real, and it made me root for them the entire time. One of the things I appreciated the most was that the story wasn't rushed. The pacing felt just right—there wasn’t a constant fast-paced action, which allowed the scenes to breathe and develop fully. Every moment felt meaningful and the transitions were smooth, giving the story a comfortable rhythm. There were a few minor typos here and there, but honestly, it didn’t take away from the overall experience. It was easy to overlook, especially considering how engaging the plot and characters were. Overall, it was a really enjoyable read that kept me hooked without feeling too rushed or overwhelming. ps. I love it more because it's a YURI 😍
I love this story but unfortunately I don't have money to containue reading it I really want to read it... But... I don't have money nor anything to pay to read it I just hope one day they will all be unlocked
I love this novel so much and im so happy knowing its not dropped or on hiatus right now, knowing next day ill have more chapters to read.
Hi! I noticed something interesting in Chapter 20 of your story. The main character's personality seems to shift a bit around there, especially in the way she talks. I was wondering if this was something you had planned for her development, or if it was something you might want to revisit. I'm always interested in learning more about the characters in the stories I read, and this little change caught my attention. Just curious to hear your thoughts.
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I like Yuri, and I also really like the updated schedule. I hope I do not jinx this
Review from a big fat bird here. I really love the chemistry of our leads. Both sides are hiding things and I cannot wait for the story to develop more.
I read the story before it was plotted and I loved it. I hope it will do well for my friend
I don't usually read FL, but it's yuri and I love the character of the princess. she's epic
Thank you for all your love for this story. Don't worry, the real craziness is yet to come. My dear characters will keep you up on your toes. Give me PS, reviews for faster updates.
Really good story and development so far. Besides a few grammatical errors, the overall writing quality is great too.
The story so far is good and the princess is interesting but then again she could have just been like this. I do hope she has a reason like something really bad happened in the past. Overall I enjoy reading this story and can’t wait for more updates!
Good so far enjoyable to read and interesting characters. Princess is obsessive bully whilst the slave has a big secret
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I am trying to change the recommended algorithm to stop suggesting these. I do not have anything against this genre as a whole, but I want the recommendations to be something I am more likely to read and this just got caught in the crossfire
I absolutely loved the chemistry between the characters! Their interactions felt so natural and real, and it made me root for them the entire time. One of the things I appreciated the most was that the story wasn't rushed. The pacing felt just right—there wasn’t a constant fast-paced action, which allowed the scenes to breathe and develop fully. Every moment felt meaningful and the transitions were smooth, giving the story a comfortable rhythm. There were a few minor typos here and there, but honestly, it didn’t take away from the overall experience. It was easy to overlook, especially considering how engaging the plot and characters were. Overall, it was a really enjoyable read that kept me hooked without feeling too rushed or overwhelming. ps. I love it more because it's a YURI 😍
I love this story but unfortunately I don't have money to containue reading it I really want to read it... But... I don't have money nor anything to pay to read it I just hope one day they will all be unlocked
I love this novel so much and im so happy knowing its not dropped or on hiatus right now, knowing next day ill have more chapters to read.
Hi! I noticed something interesting in Chapter 20 of your story. The main character's personality seems to shift a bit around there, especially in the way she talks. I was wondering if this was something you had planned for her development, or if it was something you might want to revisit. I'm always interested in learning more about the characters in the stories I read, and this little change caught my attention. Just curious to hear your thoughts.
Revelar spoiler I like Yuri, and I also really like the updated schedule. I hope I do not jinx this
Review from a big fat bird here. I really love the chemistry of our leads. Both sides are hiding things and I cannot wait for the story to develop more.
I read the story before it was plotted and I loved it. I hope it will do well for my friend
I don't usually read FL, but it's yuri and I love the character of the princess. she's epic
Thank you for all your love for this story. Don't worry, the real craziness is yet to come. My dear characters will keep you up on your toes. Give me PS, reviews for faster updates.
Really good story and development so far. Besides a few grammatical errors, the overall writing quality is great too.
The story so far is good and the princess is interesting but then again she could have just been like this. I do hope she has a reason like something really bad happened in the past. Overall I enjoy reading this story and can’t wait for more updates!
Good so far enjoyable to read and interesting characters. Princess is obsessive bully whilst the slave has a big secret
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Yuri so instant five stars for me, tho I might change it later on