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Love it, i really like the character and the approach with the story, worth the read.
the story is good and all but what i am waiting for the most is for the MC to bang female body orochimaru 😈
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this is pure perfect the mc doesnt let anyone gets in his way smart villan finally good villan story ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
This book has some much potential but it feels like a filler and nothing to serious I thought the Mc would go his own path but keep finding ways to suck off orcimaru and not his own for the most parts.
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Está tendo uma vibe BL, com o discípulo podendo ter romance com Orochimaru, isso estraga toda história Tem potencial, pena que isso pode arruinar a história
La verdad es que no se puede evitar que se me permite ser más o menos a mí me parece que el no de autorización de la mañana y que tal vez no me acuerdo que se me permite ser más o menos a mí me parece que el no de autorización para la salida del país tal y como está en la casa
years of research to end up not even being able to use mokuton, if it's for nerf mc don't research idiot hashirama's cells, don't miss it with this fanfic
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Writing quality: Good, there are a few errors but not many, 5/5 Updating Stability: Several chapters per day, 5/5 Story Development : The story develops very well and I really liked the fic, I recommend reading it, 5/5 Character design: My favorite type of character, cold-blooded, smart, the one who will do anything for power, the one who doesn't care about women and whether you are a girl or not World Background: AU, But well developed, 5/5
Very good story. The characters are well developed and show some or equal kinship to the original Naruto. It's also a good approach for the protagonist to go with Orochimaru, I'm tired of Fan-Fics in Konoha
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It's unexpectedly good, (I'm giving it 5 stars because I want more people to know it) Kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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Very good story. The characters are well developed and show some or equal kinship to the original Naruto. It's also a good approach for the protagonist to go with Orochimaru, I'm tired of Fan-Fics in Konoha. ☆☆☆☆ Stars.
The story is very interesting and I quite like it so far. It leaves me excited to see how the main character will develop in the naruto world and how he will influence the original story with his existence. It is just a shame that there are so few chapters at the moment.
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It's fascinating and I recommend giving it a try! ... ... .. ... ... ... .. Ciao Adios . .. ... .... ..... ...... ...... ......... ....... ....... ...... ........ ........ ........ ....... ....... ......... .......... ........
Love it, i really like the character and the approach with the story, worth the read.
the story is good and all but what i am waiting for the most is for the MC to bang female body orochimaru 😈
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this is pure perfect the mc doesnt let anyone gets in his way smart villan finally good villan story ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
This book has some much potential but it feels like a filler and nothing to serious I thought the Mc would go his own path but keep finding ways to suck off orcimaru and not his own for the most parts.
Revelar spoiler Está tendo uma vibe BL, com o discípulo podendo ter romance com Orochimaru, isso estraga toda história Tem potencial, pena que isso pode arruinar a história
La verdad es que no se puede evitar que se me permite ser más o menos a mí me parece que el no de autorización de la mañana y que tal vez no me acuerdo que se me permite ser más o menos a mí me parece que el no de autorización para la salida del país tal y como está en la casa
years of research to end up not even being able to use mokuton, if it's for nerf mc don't research idiot hashirama's cells, don't miss it with this fanfic
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Writing quality: Good, there are a few errors but not many, 5/5 Updating Stability: Several chapters per day, 5/5 Story Development : The story develops very well and I really liked the fic, I recommend reading it, 5/5 Character design: My favorite type of character, cold-blooded, smart, the one who will do anything for power, the one who doesn't care about women and whether you are a girl or not World Background: AU, But well developed, 5/5
Very good story. The characters are well developed and show some or equal kinship to the original Naruto. It's also a good approach for the protagonist to go with Orochimaru, I'm tired of Fan-Fics in Konoha
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It's unexpectedly good, (I'm giving it 5 stars because I want more people to know it) Kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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Very good story. The characters are well developed and show some or equal kinship to the original Naruto. It's also a good approach for the protagonist to go with Orochimaru, I'm tired of Fan-Fics in Konoha. ☆☆☆☆ Stars.
The story is very interesting and I quite like it so far. It leaves me excited to see how the main character will develop in the naruto world and how he will influence the original story with his existence. It is just a shame that there are so few chapters at the moment.
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It's fascinating and I recommend giving it a try! ... ... .. ... ... ... .. Ciao Adios . .. ... .... ..... ...... ...... ......... ....... ....... ...... ........ ........ ........ ....... ....... ......... .......... ........
Don’t tell me you dropped it bro it was so cute