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I was thinking with how the mc is and the way his ability works you can make it so Alfia is still alive and have him save her and have her reset her falna to have her become a god with him and because of her personality I think her and the Mac would mesh well.
I have been reading this book for a while and I have read the other books this author has posted. All I can say is good job, you have done an amazing job in writing this book
writing quality is great. tho this feels like the author is trying too hard to limit his mc. (I have never read jjk so if this is how those abilities actually work I am glad I never got into it.) I am also not sure why author seems to like the whole using evil stuff to do good dimorphism. ringmaker started to delve into this as well with the deadra and hollow additions. I am going to try some of the authors other works and see if they are more to my taste.
you wrote ringmaker and that is enough reason to give you power stones and good reviews
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At first i thought the author is an edgy teen with all the cursed energy BS, but then slowly the world opened up and the MC started to think and utilize his energy(mana replacement), everything in the story makes sense. the MC makes sense, his actions makes sense, he is growing at a pace which makes sense. currently he is level 2 and i cant wait to watch him grow to top.
very nice. if the author adds images in these chapters when describing weapons or characters, the story will be perfect. ps don't make the mc a 30-year-old mage
Very interesting story and I like the MC and his interactions with other characters. Keep it up 🗿👍🔥
I read up to chapter 39 but now I'm dropping it, most of the chapters are taken up by the MC thinking or the author expositing how the skills and powers sytsems work and it's gotten really boring. There's also the constant conveniences that the author keeps handing the MC like him being the first person to have the idea of deodorant, or some random guy he met once getting his God to set up a meeting with Hephaestus for the MC. At this point what little momentum the story had is dead and I don't see it getting any better.
this author doesn't miss like ever, probably gonna be one of the best fic I've read in a month or two.
I read up to chapter 34 and so far it's been enjoyable, it has a lot of potential . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I think this story has a lot of potential, the writing quality is shockingly good for something you'd find on Webnovel, we get 1 decently long chapter a day, the story's moving in a decent direction at a steady pace and the characters are good. MC is likeable and relatable and the legacy characters are mostly accurate apart from some intentional changes. My only problem with this fic (which isn't a massive one) is that the author decided to apply our mythology to the Danmachi Gods (making them related by blood e.g Miach is Dian Chedt's son) and decided that they can have children so long as they are in Tenkai which removes the God's motivation to descend to the mortal world to start families (familias) but other than that, it's pretty good.
This has potential to be the best danmachi fic. So far story has been really great and I hope you won't drop this ff. (HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TO THOSE WHO ARE READING THE REVIEW FIRST)
Pk lui retirer ses souvenir ? Si c pas parce que tu sais pas écrire une histoire sans souhait la je sais pas [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Looking forward to more chapter's which I'm sure there will be plenty of if your other work's are anything to go by, keep up the great work.
if you can, you should really use text justification. It is really hard to read the large paragraphs otherwise.
I was thinking with how the mc is and the way his ability works you can make it so Alfia is still alive and have him save her and have her reset her falna to have her become a god with him and because of her personality I think her and the Mac would mesh well.
I have been reading this book for a while and I have read the other books this author has posted. All I can say is good job, you have done an amazing job in writing this book
writing quality is great. tho this feels like the author is trying too hard to limit his mc. (I have never read jjk so if this is how those abilities actually work I am glad I never got into it.) I am also not sure why author seems to like the whole using evil stuff to do good dimorphism. ringmaker started to delve into this as well with the deadra and hollow additions. I am going to try some of the authors other works and see if they are more to my taste.
you wrote ringmaker and that is enough reason to give you power stones and good reviews
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At first i thought the author is an edgy teen with all the cursed energy BS, but then slowly the world opened up and the MC started to think and utilize his energy(mana replacement), everything in the story makes sense. the MC makes sense, his actions makes sense, he is growing at a pace which makes sense. currently he is level 2 and i cant wait to watch him grow to top.
very nice. if the author adds images in these chapters when describing weapons or characters, the story will be perfect. ps don't make the mc a 30-year-old mage
Very interesting story and I like the MC and his interactions with other characters. Keep it up 🗿👍🔥
I read up to chapter 39 but now I'm dropping it, most of the chapters are taken up by the MC thinking or the author expositing how the skills and powers sytsems work and it's gotten really boring. There's also the constant conveniences that the author keeps handing the MC like him being the first person to have the idea of deodorant, or some random guy he met once getting his God to set up a meeting with Hephaestus for the MC. At this point what little momentum the story had is dead and I don't see it getting any better.
this author doesn't miss like ever, probably gonna be one of the best fic I've read in a month or two.
I read up to chapter 34 and so far it's been enjoyable, it has a lot of potential . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I think this story has a lot of potential, the writing quality is shockingly good for something you'd find on Webnovel, we get 1 decently long chapter a day, the story's moving in a decent direction at a steady pace and the characters are good. MC is likeable and relatable and the legacy characters are mostly accurate apart from some intentional changes. My only problem with this fic (which isn't a massive one) is that the author decided to apply our mythology to the Danmachi Gods (making them related by blood e.g Miach is Dian Chedt's son) and decided that they can have children so long as they are in Tenkai which removes the God's motivation to descend to the mortal world to start families (familias) but other than that, it's pretty good.
This has potential to be the best danmachi fic. So far story has been really great and I hope you won't drop this ff. (HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TO THOSE WHO ARE READING THE REVIEW FIRST)
Pk lui retirer ses souvenir ? Si c pas parce que tu sais pas écrire une histoire sans souhait la je sais pas [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Looking forward to more chapter's which I'm sure there will be plenty of if your other work's are anything to go by, keep up the great work.
if you can, you should really use text justification. It is really hard to read the large paragraphs otherwise.