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shocked this book isn't getting more love, in a sea of shitty Chinese translations this book is an absolute godsend. I think this is possibly the best one piece fanfic I have read on here. Definitely top 5.
This novel... *Chef's Kiss* Simply glorious. Yes, at the beginning u might get the feeling of "Oh the chapter is very verbose, feels like it's too wordy when describing something that feels may not matter as much as it should." But I swear when talking about growth in someone's narrating and storytelling ability... After going through 300+ chapters and thousands of paragraphs with this author, the stuff that he makes now... Ooof... I'll take the word out of the Issho's arc, "it's preternatural". I'm just glad he never stops cooking
By far one the best one piece fanfic, the fanfic is written in a way where it feels like in could happen in one piece, lots of character expansions. It has its flaws but don't let that stop you from having a good read.
Brrrr Brrrr no Mi (Shiver-Shiver Fruit) 🥶 🔹 Type: Paramecia 🔹 Theme: Shivering & Vibrations 🔹 Starting Power (Weak Stage): The user can make themselves or others shiver uncontrollably—it’s like a really bad case of the chills. ❄️ They can slightly vibrate objects, making them rattle a little. People just think they have poor temperature control and get cold easily. How It Evolves Into a Universe-Breaking Nightmare Phase 1: Vibration Manipulation 🌀 ✅ Can now control their own shivers, making their body vibrate at high speeds. ✅ Can shake weapons so fast they slice through metal like butter. ✅ Can cause small tremors by touching the ground. Phase 2: Resonance Control 💀 ✅ Can match frequencies to break objects—glass, walls, weapons… even bones. ✅ Can make enemies shake uncontrollably, disrupting their movements. ✅ Can create "resonance waves" that travel through the air like shockwaves. Phase 3: Planetary Quakes 🌍💥 💀 Awakening: The World's Death Rattle 💀 ✔️ Can cause tectonic shifts just by touching the ground. ✔️ Can vibrate objects at a molecular level, making them disintegrate. ✔️ Can make an entire island tremble, causing buildings to collapse. ✔️ A single punch now releases city-wide shockwaves. Final Form: "Universal Breakdown" ☠️💥 🔺 The user enters a permanent vibrating state, making them untouchable (attacks phase through them). 🔺 Can shake atoms apart, causing objects to dissolve into energy. 🔺 Can create "Infinite Vibration Waves"—once they start, they never stop expanding. 🔺 Can literally shake a planet apart, causing it to self-destruct into dust. Ultimate Attack: "The Final Shiver" 💥🚀 ✅ The user touches the planet’s core and shivers once. ✅ The entire planet vibrates itself to death, breaking into a trillion pieces. ✅ The shockwave travels faster than light, destroying everything within 100 light-years. Why It’s the Most Ridiculous Power Ever? ✔️ It starts as just "being cold and shivering," but ends with planetary annihilation. ✔️ No fire, no lasers—just VIBRATING THE UNIVERSE INTO OBLIVION. ✔️ Enemies will think it's a joke… until their bones explode. ✔️ Even reality itself can't survive the final vibrations.
Great story, I didn't expect it when I first started reading i was just expect another random fanfic but this is easily one of my best. I think the author should make his own story next it was that good of writing but I think Ross doesn't have any flaws and that could he improved
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I'm in love with this story, the way everything blends in so well. The world builds how the author made the characters. it feels so great, but I need a timeskip. I don't know if they are still 18 or older, I can not tell where in the timeline they are, but I love it. I just need a timeskip, big or small. It doesn't matter. I just need one
Genuinely one of the best one piece fanfics I have ever read. The story progression is amazing and every chapter is very well thought out.
I wake up every morning and see another chapter of this wonderful story uploaded, It honestly one of the things that gets me out of bed.[img=exp]
I like this story because it’s a one piece fan fiction that isn’t a translationt and because the author doesn’t mainly focus on the main character but also on worl building and other characters like it’s most recent chapter and how it focused on big mom and her family and the aftermath of her them failing to protect Toto land from skiki
Revelar spoiler
Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I would like to say that this is one of the best stories... no, one of the best novels that I have had the pleasure of reading. To say anything less would be a disservice to both the story that has been written and the author and everyone else who supports it.
One of the best or if the best One Piece Fanfic out here. Have read many but dropped em all before reaching 3 digits. This is is one of the 5 Fan fics iam eagerly waiting every day for a new update. Kudos to the author for such a wonderful work. Don't Hold back. Give it your best like always.
This story keeps it's pace nicely through the One Piece world with interesting and most importantly, sustainable changes to the storyline/history of the world. Believable changes to characters with backstory driven reasoning and a decent amount of progression in strength for the characters the author follows.
JUST READ IT. Has genuine character develoment, author is not afriad of changing the canon timeline, which is good, whats the purpose of a fanfic is to change things.
Review update: The writing quality is much better than I remembered and the characters feels so alive they have personalities and the author has great knowledge about the one piece word and does not even afraid to add oc antagonist to the novel with op powers to keep it interesting. And the other great thing is that it is not a harem like many other one piece fanfic. I just wanted to write this down as my token of gratitude.
Great storytelling man. I love how you don't shy away from creating butterflies in your story, and creating new storylines from the MC's effects on the world.
Gooòoòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Love the fic, but at the rate where going canon is going to start at chapter 500. It’s gonna be a long read.
honestly i really liked this novel but it is not my type the fact that Mc is whole into brotherhood with doflamingo I can't accept as you know one piece world is truly tragic world death slavery abuse of authority and many more crimes but out of all things you had to make mc dream of becoming a king do you know how much blood will be spilled and lets not get into mc whole personality he is a merger of two souls one kind and another Dark but you showed us that mc wholeheartedly understand the suffering of common people but what about his brother as you know doflamingo is cruel to his core even mc could not change it but still mc says that he will make his brother king so no that is not how i like it
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author can you make ross's sword eat devil fruit, i kind of wanna see what will happen
why isn't there more likes on this fanfic, this is like one of the best one piece fanfic i have ever read, good work author, looking forward for more chaptere, i just want to suggest if you could give mc a second devil fruit, like how there is a theory that black beard has 2 hearts thats why he can have the power of 2 devil fruit, its just the suggestion, loved your fanfixc looking forward for more
The Mc has character development, don’t expect him to be everything you want in the beginning. The Author clearly improves his writing and you can tell he works hard on the plot. I would suggest giving it a chance and seeing how you feel about it. No system and nothing too OP.
shocked this book isn't getting more love, in a sea of shitty Chinese translations this book is an absolute godsend. I think this is possibly the best one piece fanfic I have read on here. Definitely top 5.
This novel... *Chef's Kiss* Simply glorious. Yes, at the beginning u might get the feeling of "Oh the chapter is very verbose, feels like it's too wordy when describing something that feels may not matter as much as it should." But I swear when talking about growth in someone's narrating and storytelling ability... After going through 300+ chapters and thousands of paragraphs with this author, the stuff that he makes now... Ooof... I'll take the word out of the Issho's arc, "it's preternatural". I'm just glad he never stops cooking
By far one the best one piece fanfic, the fanfic is written in a way where it feels like in could happen in one piece, lots of character expansions. It has its flaws but don't let that stop you from having a good read.
Brrrr Brrrr no Mi (Shiver-Shiver Fruit) 🥶 🔹 Type: Paramecia 🔹 Theme: Shivering & Vibrations 🔹 Starting Power (Weak Stage): The user can make themselves or others shiver uncontrollably—it’s like a really bad case of the chills. ❄️ They can slightly vibrate objects, making them rattle a little. People just think they have poor temperature control and get cold easily. How It Evolves Into a Universe-Breaking Nightmare Phase 1: Vibration Manipulation 🌀 ✅ Can now control their own shivers, making their body vibrate at high speeds. ✅ Can shake weapons so fast they slice through metal like butter. ✅ Can cause small tremors by touching the ground. Phase 2: Resonance Control 💀 ✅ Can match frequencies to break objects—glass, walls, weapons… even bones. ✅ Can make enemies shake uncontrollably, disrupting their movements. ✅ Can create "resonance waves" that travel through the air like shockwaves. Phase 3: Planetary Quakes 🌍💥 💀 Awakening: The World's Death Rattle 💀 ✔️ Can cause tectonic shifts just by touching the ground. ✔️ Can vibrate objects at a molecular level, making them disintegrate. ✔️ Can make an entire island tremble, causing buildings to collapse. ✔️ A single punch now releases city-wide shockwaves. Final Form: "Universal Breakdown" ☠️💥 🔺 The user enters a permanent vibrating state, making them untouchable (attacks phase through them). 🔺 Can shake atoms apart, causing objects to dissolve into energy. 🔺 Can create "Infinite Vibration Waves"—once they start, they never stop expanding. 🔺 Can literally shake a planet apart, causing it to self-destruct into dust. Ultimate Attack: "The Final Shiver" 💥🚀 ✅ The user touches the planet’s core and shivers once. ✅ The entire planet vibrates itself to death, breaking into a trillion pieces. ✅ The shockwave travels faster than light, destroying everything within 100 light-years. Why It’s the Most Ridiculous Power Ever? ✔️ It starts as just "being cold and shivering," but ends with planetary annihilation. ✔️ No fire, no lasers—just VIBRATING THE UNIVERSE INTO OBLIVION. ✔️ Enemies will think it's a joke… until their bones explode. ✔️ Even reality itself can't survive the final vibrations.
Great story, I didn't expect it when I first started reading i was just expect another random fanfic but this is easily one of my best. I think the author should make his own story next it was that good of writing but I think Ross doesn't have any flaws and that could he improved
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I'm in love with this story, the way everything blends in so well. The world builds how the author made the characters. it feels so great, but I need a timeskip. I don't know if they are still 18 or older, I can not tell where in the timeline they are, but I love it. I just need a timeskip, big or small. It doesn't matter. I just need one
Genuinely one of the best one piece fanfics I have ever read. The story progression is amazing and every chapter is very well thought out.
I wake up every morning and see another chapter of this wonderful story uploaded, It honestly one of the things that gets me out of bed.[img=exp]
I like this story because it’s a one piece fan fiction that isn’t a translationt and because the author doesn’t mainly focus on the main character but also on worl building and other characters like it’s most recent chapter and how it focused on big mom and her family and the aftermath of her them failing to protect Toto land from skiki
Revelar spoiler Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I would like to say that this is one of the best stories... no, one of the best novels that I have had the pleasure of reading. To say anything less would be a disservice to both the story that has been written and the author and everyone else who supports it.
One of the best or if the best One Piece Fanfic out here. Have read many but dropped em all before reaching 3 digits. This is is one of the 5 Fan fics iam eagerly waiting every day for a new update. Kudos to the author for such a wonderful work. Don't Hold back. Give it your best like always.
This story keeps it's pace nicely through the One Piece world with interesting and most importantly, sustainable changes to the storyline/history of the world. Believable changes to characters with backstory driven reasoning and a decent amount of progression in strength for the characters the author follows.
JUST READ IT. Has genuine character develoment, author is not afriad of changing the canon timeline, which is good, whats the purpose of a fanfic is to change things.
Review update: The writing quality is much better than I remembered and the characters feels so alive they have personalities and the author has great knowledge about the one piece word and does not even afraid to add oc antagonist to the novel with op powers to keep it interesting. And the other great thing is that it is not a harem like many other one piece fanfic. I just wanted to write this down as my token of gratitude.
Great storytelling man. I love how you don't shy away from creating butterflies in your story, and creating new storylines from the MC's effects on the world.
Gooòoòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Love the fic, but at the rate where going canon is going to start at chapter 500. It’s gonna be a long read.
honestly i really liked this novel but it is not my type the fact that Mc is whole into brotherhood with doflamingo I can't accept as you know one piece world is truly tragic world death slavery abuse of authority and many more crimes but out of all things you had to make mc dream of becoming a king do you know how much blood will be spilled and lets not get into mc whole personality he is a merger of two souls one kind and another Dark but you showed us that mc wholeheartedly understand the suffering of common people but what about his brother as you know doflamingo is cruel to his core even mc could not change it but still mc says that he will make his brother king so no that is not how i like it
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author can you make ross's sword eat devil fruit, i kind of wanna see what will happen
why isn't there more likes on this fanfic, this is like one of the best one piece fanfic i have ever read, good work author, looking forward for more chaptere, i just want to suggest if you could give mc a second devil fruit, like how there is a theory that black beard has 2 hearts thats why he can have the power of 2 devil fruit, its just the suggestion, loved your fanfixc looking forward for more
The Mc has character development, don’t expect him to be everything you want in the beginning. The Author clearly improves his writing and you can tell he works hard on the plot. I would suggest giving it a chance and seeing how you feel about it. No system and nothing too OP.