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i loved this fanfic, I don't know ehy did you delet it, i enoyed it a lot, and always waited each they for new chapters. i waited for it every day, like if it was i waiting one piece episode each sun day, its's saddened me you droped it.... :'(
Serious? Second rage quit, author. I know that the audience in the webnovel is annoying, I personally am included in this but if you keep dropping novels like this you won't be able to finish one. I know it's annoying people complaining about something they didn't like about the novel or the chapter, but do you expect them to praise if they didn't like the chapter? And behaving like this doesn't help at all, it just drives away the audience that maybe could go to your Patreon. I know that the novel may continue on your Patreon, but I can't afford to pay Patreon or any other. One more thing: if you have a 100-chapter novel with 100 readers and every 10 chapters you lose 10 for making a decision whether you want it or not that displeases them, with how many people reading do you think you would finish this novel? I'm not saying that you have to write only what the readers ask for, this can also spoil the novel, but the ideal is that even if the person complains about the chapter you should read and try to understand why the reader didn't like this point (unless it's just cursing then you can delete the comment if the Webnovel let you delete it) But in other cases you would have to balance what you want to write and what the audience wants to read, after all if you write what the audience doesn't want to read, you won't grow. I gave it 1 star because you abandoned the novel.
If you've come here thinking that this is a fanfic where someone gets a Madara template in the Witcher world, then you are mistaken. This is a slow burn into a full-on messy crossover. Other ninjas are just...there. Story was set up in a way that you could assume that some of the Uchiha clan had crossed over during the conjunction of the spheres, but no. Poof! It's a UNIVERSAL crossover for seemingly no reason.
The story is good.The world building is very good. Romance is very good. Side characters are well designed. The writing is good. About the mc... oh boy. Expect him to be op but not to the point you are thinking. Most enemies and characters in general from the witcher world have been buffed. For example, a witcher has a combat strength of a middle-upper chunin. Also, absolutely NOT TRUST THE PERCENTAGE FROM THE SYSTEM. Even the author realized it was bullshit and then gave an excuse later in the story. So if you see (10% power of madara), don't expect actually 10% of madaras power otherwise you will be greatly disappointed. Also, Mc is NOT MADARA. He doesn't even have the memories. He is more like a person who reincarnated in the wtmitcher with a Madara template.
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De un momento muy particular y ciertamente de manera singular haciendo referencia a cierto diálogo que puede o no estar relacionada con algún hipotético muñeco para ser o no ser contabilizado como 150 caracteres. Solo para finalizar esta historia está...
Mid as the author has no drive to improve its constant errors zero edits. Character wise it’s pretty much AI feel it reads fake
Such a good fanfic no cap you HAVE TO FINISH THIS it’s so good author on fire cooking
Not super lore friendly, but it's still really good, and progress is not stagnating or too fast-paced. Don't expect madra that was brainwashed, but a reasonable persona. Thought I think the author doesn't represent guerrilla warfare too well.
Regardless of what people have written, your story is very good. The development of the characters and the plot. The story is fun and engaging. I follow each chapter released and intend to continue until the end of this work.
Excellent novel, usually I don't like it when the MC is doing so many things at one-digit age, but here it is very well done. Following the standards of the ninja world where a genin can kill 100 common humans without problems, it is noted that the mc has been nerfed, but it is a crossover problem, the power levels are simply too different and in the future continuing to nerf it is impossible without load the novel. If I had to mention a problem, it is that no one questioned too much how the MC learned to fight, but they were given "explanations" about the matter so it's not bad, I guess the fact that he is a child of few words helped here. I notice a lot of crying because MC is not a Gary Stu, don't pay attention to those fans of bad taste, Author.
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Esta es la mejor historia que e leído sobre The Witcher. El protagonista no es alguien que caiga pesado, si no que uno puede disfrutar su desarrollo de afrontamiento ante las adversidades.
This might be a hasty choice but I’ve read 7 chapters and love it, srsly if you focus on this fic and pump out chaps it could be among the highest ranked in the app
This was good in the first few chapters until the nerf on top of nerf. Author made it a point to to lower the Mc combat abilities near table level every chapter. He also rarely try to fully clarify or explain why mc is so weak and just says he don’t want a 9 year old to be powerful when he himself game mc 5-10% of pre jubidara power.
came here from One piece: I'm a different luffy, love your stories dude, they are very good.
I genuinely thought i was reading a fic where Madara was reincarnated into the Witcher. Im sad.
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I don't know much about the Witcher series but I'm loving story keep up the good and take my stones
Danmachi - Infinite Mana System dropped ? .................................................................................................
A good read doesn't get to strong to fast just enough to keep up with the story and is a well rounded character.
Es una novela con mucho potencial a explorar 🧐👌🏻 tiene una buena traducción y gramática de calidad, el desarrollo del MC en ganar poder es medianamente lento pero comprensible ya que todavía no tiene ni dos dígitos de edad, espero que haya un salto de tiempo en su crecimiento y en su interacción con Cirilla ya que la actitud de la mocosa es bastante exasperante, espero que el autor aparte de desarrollar el mundo actual también tome en cuenta en explorar las brechas espaciales hacia otros mundos tomando en cuenta que Ciri también puede ir a otros mundos 😉 a todo esto recomiendo la novela 🤙🏻
A nice story with well-developed side characters, but I dislike Madara being portrayed as submissive. He bears the name Uchiha Madara and his strength reflects that. Please do not diminish his strength too much; even at 10% of his physical power, he should be far stronger than Captain America. I hope you make Madara gradually smarter, like the original Madara, because he is very intelligent. Most importantly, do not have him bow his head, as no mere kingdom should be able to make him do so.
Perfeito, simplesmente uma das melhores q acabei lendo nos últimos tempos, só acho q deveria acelerar um pouco a ação e colocar outros pontos de vistas sobre o personagem como pensamentos sobre ele tipo isso
This is my favourite "The Witcher" fanfic so far. Nice work Author-san 👍.
Novel world balance is really good. main character and world is progress well.writing is working good with system shows. Only problem is there is not enough chapter. Currently it's 35 but to able to be satisfied it needs 60,70 minimum .
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This is annoying. Being able to exchange coins for power is stupid; Another thing is the amount of things he does at only 6 years old. 6 years old! Even children, not even Madara himself was capable of doing something with chakra at 6 years old. Finally, it is time, a stupid need to want to extend the plot when no one takes a 6-year-old child seriously, it is a fantasy world but it is not a world of stupid people. In other words, Madara's idea was good, the first chapters too, but instead of making a time jump he did stupid things to give it a plot.
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This author is fantastic at creating immersive stories. I admit, I couldn't stop myself from reading it! Although Grammar is clear and descriptive, there are a few things that could use some work, like the occasional naming mistakes that throw off the flow a bit. Also the main character is a little too cold for my liking: Or maybe I'm just a simp, but I wish he treats Ciri better in future. So I'd give it solid 4.3 stars
i loved this fanfic, I don't know ehy did you delet it, i enoyed it a lot, and always waited each they for new chapters. i waited for it every day, like if it was i waiting one piece episode each sun day, its's saddened me you droped it.... :'(
Serious? Second rage quit, author. I know that the audience in the webnovel is annoying, I personally am included in this but if you keep dropping novels like this you won't be able to finish one. I know it's annoying people complaining about something they didn't like about the novel or the chapter, but do you expect them to praise if they didn't like the chapter? And behaving like this doesn't help at all, it just drives away the audience that maybe could go to your Patreon. I know that the novel may continue on your Patreon, but I can't afford to pay Patreon or any other. One more thing: if you have a 100-chapter novel with 100 readers and every 10 chapters you lose 10 for making a decision whether you want it or not that displeases them, with how many people reading do you think you would finish this novel? I'm not saying that you have to write only what the readers ask for, this can also spoil the novel, but the ideal is that even if the person complains about the chapter you should read and try to understand why the reader didn't like this point (unless it's just cursing then you can delete the comment if the Webnovel let you delete it) But in other cases you would have to balance what you want to write and what the audience wants to read, after all if you write what the audience doesn't want to read, you won't grow. I gave it 1 star because you abandoned the novel.
If you've come here thinking that this is a fanfic where someone gets a Madara template in the Witcher world, then you are mistaken. This is a slow burn into a full-on messy crossover. Other ninjas are just...there. Story was set up in a way that you could assume that some of the Uchiha clan had crossed over during the conjunction of the spheres, but no. Poof! It's a UNIVERSAL crossover for seemingly no reason.
The story is good.The world building is very good. Romance is very good. Side characters are well designed. The writing is good. About the mc... oh boy. Expect him to be op but not to the point you are thinking. Most enemies and characters in general from the witcher world have been buffed. For example, a witcher has a combat strength of a middle-upper chunin. Also, absolutely NOT TRUST THE PERCENTAGE FROM THE SYSTEM. Even the author realized it was bullshit and then gave an excuse later in the story. So if you see (10% power of madara), don't expect actually 10% of madaras power otherwise you will be greatly disappointed. Also, Mc is NOT MADARA. He doesn't even have the memories. He is more like a person who reincarnated in the wtmitcher with a Madara template.
Mas capitulos por fa y no tomes encuanta a los idiotas que critican la historia 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
De un momento muy particular y ciertamente de manera singular haciendo referencia a cierto diálogo que puede o no estar relacionada con algún hipotético muñeco para ser o no ser contabilizado como 150 caracteres. Solo para finalizar esta historia está...
Mid as the author has no drive to improve its constant errors zero edits. Character wise it’s pretty much AI feel it reads fake
Such a good fanfic no cap you HAVE TO FINISH THIS it’s so good author on fire cooking
Not super lore friendly, but it's still really good, and progress is not stagnating or too fast-paced. Don't expect madra that was brainwashed, but a reasonable persona. Thought I think the author doesn't represent guerrilla warfare too well.
Regardless of what people have written, your story is very good. The development of the characters and the plot. The story is fun and engaging. I follow each chapter released and intend to continue until the end of this work.
Excellent novel, usually I don't like it when the MC is doing so many things at one-digit age, but here it is very well done. Following the standards of the ninja world where a genin can kill 100 common humans without problems, it is noted that the mc has been nerfed, but it is a crossover problem, the power levels are simply too different and in the future continuing to nerf it is impossible without load the novel. If I had to mention a problem, it is that no one questioned too much how the MC learned to fight, but they were given "explanations" about the matter so it's not bad, I guess the fact that he is a child of few words helped here. I notice a lot of crying because MC is not a Gary Stu, don't pay attention to those fans of bad taste, Author.
Revelar spoiler Esta es la mejor historia que e leído sobre The Witcher. El protagonista no es alguien que caiga pesado, si no que uno puede disfrutar su desarrollo de afrontamiento ante las adversidades.
This might be a hasty choice but I’ve read 7 chapters and love it, srsly if you focus on this fic and pump out chaps it could be among the highest ranked in the app
This was good in the first few chapters until the nerf on top of nerf. Author made it a point to to lower the Mc combat abilities near table level every chapter. He also rarely try to fully clarify or explain why mc is so weak and just says he don’t want a 9 year old to be powerful when he himself game mc 5-10% of pre jubidara power.
came here from One piece: I'm a different luffy, love your stories dude, they are very good.
I genuinely thought i was reading a fic where Madara was reincarnated into the Witcher. Im sad.
Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.Bueno. Bueno.
I don't know much about the Witcher series but I'm loving story keep up the good and take my stones
Danmachi - Infinite Mana System dropped ? .................................................................................................
A good read doesn't get to strong to fast just enough to keep up with the story and is a well rounded character.
Es una novela con mucho potencial a explorar 🧐👌🏻 tiene una buena traducción y gramática de calidad, el desarrollo del MC en ganar poder es medianamente lento pero comprensible ya que todavía no tiene ni dos dígitos de edad, espero que haya un salto de tiempo en su crecimiento y en su interacción con Cirilla ya que la actitud de la mocosa es bastante exasperante, espero que el autor aparte de desarrollar el mundo actual también tome en cuenta en explorar las brechas espaciales hacia otros mundos tomando en cuenta que Ciri también puede ir a otros mundos 😉 a todo esto recomiendo la novela 🤙🏻
A nice story with well-developed side characters, but I dislike Madara being portrayed as submissive. He bears the name Uchiha Madara and his strength reflects that. Please do not diminish his strength too much; even at 10% of his physical power, he should be far stronger than Captain America. I hope you make Madara gradually smarter, like the original Madara, because he is very intelligent. Most importantly, do not have him bow his head, as no mere kingdom should be able to make him do so.
Perfeito, simplesmente uma das melhores q acabei lendo nos últimos tempos, só acho q deveria acelerar um pouco a ação e colocar outros pontos de vistas sobre o personagem como pensamentos sobre ele tipo isso
This is my favourite "The Witcher" fanfic so far. Nice work Author-san 👍.
Novel world balance is really good. main character and world is progress well.writing is working good with system shows. Only problem is there is not enough chapter. Currently it's 35 but to able to be satisfied it needs 60,70 minimum .
Nice,good,perfect,Nice,good,perfect,Nice,good,perfect,Nice,good,perfect,Nice,good,perfect,Nice,good,perfect,Nice,good,perfect,Nice,good,perfect,Nice,good,perfect,Nice,good,perfect,
This is annoying. Being able to exchange coins for power is stupid; Another thing is the amount of things he does at only 6 years old. 6 years old! Even children, not even Madara himself was capable of doing something with chakra at 6 years old. Finally, it is time, a stupid need to want to extend the plot when no one takes a 6-year-old child seriously, it is a fantasy world but it is not a world of stupid people. In other words, Madara's idea was good, the first chapters too, but instead of making a time jump he did stupid things to give it a plot.
Revelar spoiler This author is fantastic at creating immersive stories. I admit, I couldn't stop myself from reading it! Although Grammar is clear and descriptive, there are a few things that could use some work, like the occasional naming mistakes that throw off the flow a bit. Also the main character is a little too cold for my liking: Or maybe I'm just a simp, but I wish he treats Ciri better in future. So I'd give it solid 4.3 stars
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