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4.31

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OPLonerDragon

Great novel.[img=recommend]. This author's works are very good.

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Caos_Caos_

i expected more but nope i dont like it the quality dropped the characters are bordeline npcs... a shame expected more

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Illusionof

Its nice. Sometimes, i had to push through chapters, but overall its okay. Once again we have gacha/pokemon harem (catch them all romace). Nice progression for plot, good fightings (sometimes). Worth to read, but you can drop from 350ch if you fell like so (theres nothing really interesting happens i feel like)

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EyeOfSilver

A akikan fanfic never fails to not dissapoint you.

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Cassean

Other than the horrible grammar and Engrish sentences, which only seem to get worse the longer it goes on, it isn't a terrible read. The end sucks. It just suddenly speeds up and then "the end", like they just got bored with writing it. Better than just abandoning it entirely at least, so, eh.

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Anmol_Anmol_7828

it wos perfect and thank you 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲.

2mth
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Darkph30nix

Top marks for the authors works this one included. Honestly this author is almost as good as ein Lion but pumps out a lot more stuff haha xD as he is very skilled in making use of the narrative of other works and is only lacking slightly in building his own personas but given time.. this guy will go far!

2mth
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Mihawk_67

Gostei muito dele, achei bem engraçado os pensamentos do MC kkk

2mth
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Prince_Sky_

Amazing 😍😍😍 I love it. I love akikan new book. There are all amazing. Please 🙏 akikan make the To The Abandoned Sacred Beast. I love the anime, but the mc isn't good for me. I want you to make it, because the girls is hot. hahaha 😂

2mth
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Beyker

Gracias por tu dedicación, disfrute la lectura desde el capitulo 1 esta vez no te sucedió lo mismo que con raizer, aprendiste a llevar mucho mejor la historia sin ser obviamente repetitivo, éxitos y espero tus nuevos proyectos.

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Hyroster

Absolutely loved the story . As expected of akikkan . Though story ending is not author strong suite I can say that after reading all 6 of his novels through and till the end . And endings always being a little disappointing in his novels but if I have to say , The immersion and fun and thrill that author stories bring , do compensate for lacking ending . All in all I'm saying story was fantastic as always and I'm happy . Onces again thankyou for your fabulous work Akikkan.

3mth
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ReDawn097

İ absolutely love it great story end but good

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Don_Arturo

muy buena la historia,solo que no se completo las demás historias

3mth
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cordonbleu

A good fanfic Nothing exeptional but a good read If you got nothing else to read Give it a try

3mth
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Big_Sasa

Simplemente una obra maestra este fanfic mis palabras no pueden describir toda la esencia de esta novela 100% recomendable esperando que el autor suba otras historias como esta para leerlas Si ven esto dejen un comentario para no olvidar esta obra

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reza_Asgari

trash story trash everything ..............................................................................................................................

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hyuse888

The only way I could do that was if you wanted me

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Pyerre_Poredoso

Honestly, this is one of the worst protagonists I've ever read in my life, I regret wasting my time reading this, this good person thing is shit, it's better for him to simply be a good person, bad, normal or neutral, instead of this aberration that was made here.

3mth
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Cupidarrow

Don’t waste your time reading it. MC thinks from his lower brain most of the time.

3mth
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Dark19
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It's not Akikan's best work, but I like it and it's very entertaining. Maybe many people don't like it because the interactions are more superficial, but as far as I'm concerned it fulfills the objective of being entertaining and fun. Not all novels can be masterpieces. Thank you Akikan-san for your efforts, one of, if not the best fanfic writer I've ever seen in my life and I'm glad you keep working to bring us these beautiful works.

3mth
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Raizn51

It was good novel. I hope you will write new novel in Sword Art Online world.

3mth
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ESSTA
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In short Holy Mother .🌝👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... .... .....

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DaoistjQtMkq

Author i love your all novel, but you make him like married woman but i hope you make him to have virgin girls like myuki.ok thanks for everything.

4mth
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Mauricio_Arroyo

El personaje es insufrible, es una historia hentai y de coleccion de mujeres. El ultimo capítulo que leí es aún mas incoherente. Para el que quiera leerlo... deje sus neuronas de lado y disfrute.

5mth
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DevilDzishan

This fanfic is just trash I like dxd fanfic vary much So write something like that please write from this anime world * miss Kobayashi's dragon maid *The Devil is a Part-Timer! *Oshi no ko *Food Wars *Tensura *Jujutsu Kaisen *Overload *Black Clover *In Another World With My Smart phone *The Eminence in Shadow *The Rising of the Shield Hero *misfit of demon king academy *Welcome to Demon School! Iruma-kun *Vermeil in Gold *Mushoku Tensei: Jobless Reincarnation *Gushing over Magical Girls *Arifureta *GATE *KonoSuba *Re:ZERO -Starting Life in Another world *Magi: The Labyrinth of Magic *Seraph of the End *The Vexations of a Shut-In Vampire Princess *Blood Lad *Farming Life in Another World *The Seven Deadly Sins *So I'm a Spider, So What? *Akashic Records of Bastard Magic Instructor *I Was Reincarnated as the 7th Prince so I Can Take My Time Perfecting My Magical Ability *I Got a Cheat Skill in Another World and Became Unrivaled in The Real World, Too *Tsukimichi -Moonlit Fantasy *My Instant Death Ability is So Overpowered, No One in This Other World Stands a Chance Against Me! *Villainess Level 99: I May Be the Hidden Boss but I'm Not the Demon Lord Romance anime *To Love-ru *Horimiya *Kaguya-sama: Love is War *Spy Classroom *Shikimori's Not Just a Cutie *Girlfriend, Girlfriend *Engage Kiss *Tomo-chan Is a Girl! *A Couple of Cuckoos *The Genius Prince's Guide to Raising a Nation Out of Debt *The 100 Girlfriends Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Love You *Hokkaido Gals Are Super Adorable! *The Angel Next Door Spoils Me Rotten *We Never Learn: BOKUBEN *In/Spectre *Banished From The Hero's Party, I Decided To Live A Quiet Life In The Countryside *Masamune-kun's Revenge *Maoyu ~ Archenemy & Hero *ORESUKI Are you the only one who loves me? *Our Last Crusade or the Rise of a New World *Rent-a-Girlfriend *The Testament of Sister New Devil *Undefeated Bahamut Chronicle *The Detective Is Already Dead *Ladies versus Butlers *Mother of the Goddess' Dormitory *My Dress-Up Darling *Oh! My Goddess *Date A Live *The Quintessential Quintuplets *TONIKAWA: Over the Moon For You

5mth
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caraf2025

This is a holy land for every member of the harem-sect to read and sing praises about. Akikan-san is a gentleman that understands the needs of 'gotta catch and love them all' And those who curse at mc... huh, patethic. You never understood the greatness of his ninja way. His compassion towards those poor widows, mothers, daugthers and wifes who need love. You curse at him, and yet wish to be on his shoes doing the same. 'Women would fall for him too easily'? Bullshit, mc takes the protagonist luck of every world he visits, coupled with and appearance copied from who knows how many gods that are known for their beauty and yet come with this bull*hit? Shameful display!

5mth
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cardo_sinclair

Not enjoyable in the least. Mc got broken abilities like time control, gravity control, muzan regen, shiba tatsuya powers, breathing techniques, animal animal/ insect dna, every main characters power form failed knight, OFA powers, bakugo powers, and a lot more but author always finds some stupid reason to drag out fight or make me struggle agains building level opponents. Every chapter he preaches he wants to become a “good person” but sleeps with people’s wives. He always get talked into things because he wants to be a good person. It’s like that’s the only thing author can use to make minimal progress in the story. There is plenty more stuff I could tell about but I can’t bother. So if you like frustration and little to no satisfaction, this for you

5mth
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purnsky

Well Akikan san like I said, there's nothing bad about your story, but somehow the MC is getting more and more wrong. I feel like they're just people below the average of society, but given unreasonable powers, and made them hate the original main characters. I just feel MC Yuki is better, even though he stole Rias from Issei but it's not too dishonorable. but still, MC Haruka is better in my opinion.

5mth
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OPLonerDragon

Great novel.[img=recommend]. This author's works are very good.

2d
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Caos_Caos_

i expected more but nope i dont like it the quality dropped the characters are bordeline npcs... a shame expected more

14d
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Illusionof

Its nice. Sometimes, i had to push through chapters, but overall its okay. Once again we have gacha/pokemon harem (catch them all romace). Nice progression for plot, good fightings (sometimes). Worth to read, but you can drop from 350ch if you fell like so (theres nothing really interesting happens i feel like)

14d
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EyeOfSilver

A akikan fanfic never fails to not dissapoint you.

1mth
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Cassean

Other than the horrible grammar and Engrish sentences, which only seem to get worse the longer it goes on, it isn't a terrible read. The end sucks. It just suddenly speeds up and then "the end", like they just got bored with writing it. Better than just abandoning it entirely at least, so, eh.

2mth
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Anmol_Anmol_7828

it wos perfect and thank you 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲.

2mth
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Darkph30nix

Top marks for the authors works this one included. Honestly this author is almost as good as ein Lion but pumps out a lot more stuff haha xD as he is very skilled in making use of the narrative of other works and is only lacking slightly in building his own personas but given time.. this guy will go far!

2mth
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Mihawk_67

Gostei muito dele, achei bem engraçado os pensamentos do MC kkk

2mth
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Prince_Sky_

Amazing 😍😍😍 I love it. I love akikan new book. There are all amazing. Please 🙏 akikan make the To The Abandoned Sacred Beast. I love the anime, but the mc isn't good for me. I want you to make it, because the girls is hot. hahaha 😂

2mth
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Beyker

Gracias por tu dedicación, disfrute la lectura desde el capitulo 1 esta vez no te sucedió lo mismo que con raizer, aprendiste a llevar mucho mejor la historia sin ser obviamente repetitivo, éxitos y espero tus nuevos proyectos.

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3mth
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Hyroster

Absolutely loved the story . As expected of akikkan . Though story ending is not author strong suite I can say that after reading all 6 of his novels through and till the end . And endings always being a little disappointing in his novels but if I have to say , The immersion and fun and thrill that author stories bring , do compensate for lacking ending . All in all I'm saying story was fantastic as always and I'm happy . Onces again thankyou for your fabulous work Akikkan.

3mth
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ReDawn097

İ absolutely love it great story end but good

3mth
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Don_Arturo

muy buena la historia,solo que no se completo las demás historias

3mth
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cordonbleu

A good fanfic Nothing exeptional but a good read If you got nothing else to read Give it a try

3mth
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Big_Sasa

Simplemente una obra maestra este fanfic mis palabras no pueden describir toda la esencia de esta novela 100% recomendable esperando que el autor suba otras historias como esta para leerlas Si ven esto dejen un comentario para no olvidar esta obra

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reza_Asgari

trash story trash everything ..............................................................................................................................

3mth
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hyuse888

The only way I could do that was if you wanted me

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Pyerre_Poredoso

Honestly, this is one of the worst protagonists I've ever read in my life, I regret wasting my time reading this, this good person thing is shit, it's better for him to simply be a good person, bad, normal or neutral, instead of this aberration that was made here.

3mth
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Cupidarrow

Don’t waste your time reading it. MC thinks from his lower brain most of the time.

3mth
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Dark19
LV 11 Badge

It's not Akikan's best work, but I like it and it's very entertaining. Maybe many people don't like it because the interactions are more superficial, but as far as I'm concerned it fulfills the objective of being entertaining and fun. Not all novels can be masterpieces. Thank you Akikan-san for your efforts, one of, if not the best fanfic writer I've ever seen in my life and I'm glad you keep working to bring us these beautiful works.

3mth
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Raizn51

It was good novel. I hope you will write new novel in Sword Art Online world.

3mth
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ESSTA
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In short Holy Mother .🌝👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... .... .....

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DaoistjQtMkq

Author i love your all novel, but you make him like married woman but i hope you make him to have virgin girls like myuki.ok thanks for everything.

4mth
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Mauricio_Arroyo

El personaje es insufrible, es una historia hentai y de coleccion de mujeres. El ultimo capítulo que leí es aún mas incoherente. Para el que quiera leerlo... deje sus neuronas de lado y disfrute.

5mth
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DevilDzishan

This fanfic is just trash I like dxd fanfic vary much So write something like that please write from this anime world * miss Kobayashi's dragon maid *The Devil is a Part-Timer! *Oshi no ko *Food Wars *Tensura *Jujutsu Kaisen *Overload *Black Clover *In Another World With My Smart phone *The Eminence in Shadow *The Rising of the Shield Hero *misfit of demon king academy *Welcome to Demon School! Iruma-kun *Vermeil in Gold *Mushoku Tensei: Jobless Reincarnation *Gushing over Magical Girls *Arifureta *GATE *KonoSuba *Re:ZERO -Starting Life in Another world *Magi: The Labyrinth of Magic *Seraph of the End *The Vexations of a Shut-In Vampire Princess *Blood Lad *Farming Life in Another World *The Seven Deadly Sins *So I'm a Spider, So What? *Akashic Records of Bastard Magic Instructor *I Was Reincarnated as the 7th Prince so I Can Take My Time Perfecting My Magical Ability *I Got a Cheat Skill in Another World and Became Unrivaled in The Real World, Too *Tsukimichi -Moonlit Fantasy *My Instant Death Ability is So Overpowered, No One in This Other World Stands a Chance Against Me! *Villainess Level 99: I May Be the Hidden Boss but I'm Not the Demon Lord Romance anime *To Love-ru *Horimiya *Kaguya-sama: Love is War *Spy Classroom *Shikimori's Not Just a Cutie *Girlfriend, Girlfriend *Engage Kiss *Tomo-chan Is a Girl! *A Couple of Cuckoos *The Genius Prince's Guide to Raising a Nation Out of Debt *The 100 Girlfriends Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Love You *Hokkaido Gals Are Super Adorable! *The Angel Next Door Spoils Me Rotten *We Never Learn: BOKUBEN *In/Spectre *Banished From The Hero's Party, I Decided To Live A Quiet Life In The Countryside *Masamune-kun's Revenge *Maoyu ~ Archenemy & Hero *ORESUKI Are you the only one who loves me? *Our Last Crusade or the Rise of a New World *Rent-a-Girlfriend *The Testament of Sister New Devil *Undefeated Bahamut Chronicle *The Detective Is Already Dead *Ladies versus Butlers *Mother of the Goddess' Dormitory *My Dress-Up Darling *Oh! My Goddess *Date A Live *The Quintessential Quintuplets *TONIKAWA: Over the Moon For You

5mth
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caraf2025

This is a holy land for every member of the harem-sect to read and sing praises about. Akikan-san is a gentleman that understands the needs of 'gotta catch and love them all' And those who curse at mc... huh, patethic. You never understood the greatness of his ninja way. His compassion towards those poor widows, mothers, daugthers and wifes who need love. You curse at him, and yet wish to be on his shoes doing the same. 'Women would fall for him too easily'? Bullshit, mc takes the protagonist luck of every world he visits, coupled with and appearance copied from who knows how many gods that are known for their beauty and yet come with this bull*hit? Shameful display!

5mth
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Zu69
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very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !

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cardo_sinclair

Not enjoyable in the least. Mc got broken abilities like time control, gravity control, muzan regen, shiba tatsuya powers, breathing techniques, animal animal/ insect dna, every main characters power form failed knight, OFA powers, bakugo powers, and a lot more but author always finds some stupid reason to drag out fight or make me struggle agains building level opponents. Every chapter he preaches he wants to become a “good person” but sleeps with people’s wives. He always get talked into things because he wants to be a good person. It’s like that’s the only thing author can use to make minimal progress in the story. There is plenty more stuff I could tell about but I can’t bother. So if you like frustration and little to no satisfaction, this for you

5mth
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purnsky

Well Akikan san like I said, there's nothing bad about your story, but somehow the MC is getting more and more wrong. I feel like they're just people below the average of society, but given unreasonable powers, and made them hate the original main characters. I just feel MC Yuki is better, even though he stole Rias from Issei but it's not too dishonorable. but still, MC Haruka is better in my opinion.

5mth
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