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really pathetic mc abused and manipulated. his first and only goal should be to kill the old man. no to say he likes the abuse or that he feels alive fighting. thats pathetic.
The translation is pretty bad, other than that it's an OK fic. I think the biggest problem is how the translator gets even basic things wrong, like calling sorcerers mages.
It’s really good but man this author is from the 1800s or something😂 they have the most magnificent vocab I have ever seen
From all that I have read this fanfic is amazing and you should ignore the rating as much as you can, the first 2 or 3 chaps might be confusing but it is very good and you get it as you read, you can't judge a book in a few chapters specially when there are more than 30 chaps
Cara, é o seguinte a maioria das pessoas estão bravas porque a escala de poder do caminho do sacerdote vermelho foi diminuída para se encaixar na escala de jjk, mas fora isso é bem de boa uma ótima fica na vdd se colocar na escala da um 8/10 mais ou menos, as lutas são muito bem feitas o presosagem e consistente nada a reclamar!
El mejor fanfiction que he leido hasta el momento de jjk. Me interesa saber que secuencia sigue. Ojala nanami se retire con tranquilidad, se case con la panadera y gojo con utahime. El finales de los personajes original fue demasiado miserable.
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The first JJK fanfic I have ever read, and I am loving it. So far the characters are great. The side characters are dynamic and the main character is likable enough. The plot is also decent and unique with the MC not entirely on the main casts side. He has his own plans and ambitions which he will not forsake, this for me is a plus as for one it can generate conflict not just with the villains but some from the main cast. Two, it makes the MC more grounded sometimes putting his emotions such as pity aside for the sake of the bigger picture. He will surely make Kiritsugu proud. Lastly, it has LoTM elements in it which automatically makes it a must read for me. Thankfully the author delivered. Overall Rating: 8.5/10
problems : power: Red priest of war does not have flame teleport its the magician ability totally different patway. they have a flame transformation whic they use to travel. they gain the ability to enhance only at sequence 4 . instigation is not the power of the hunter pathway, but understandable as he seems to be connected to the sefirah .
This is frankly so amazing it one of the best stories I've read on this app 👏 ; I can't wait for more chapters.
I'll get on it. AS long as i get more chapters to read. I'll give this story powerstones..............................................................................
It was worth to read but you need solidify power scaling and world settings since some powers from Red priest pathways can effect the world itself. Thanks for the fanfic tho ☺️
Its pretty good, one of the issues I had was the MC doesn't really fit the Red Priest pathway IMO, would be better of as something like the Darkness pathway but that could just be me.
Just asking if anyone know or remember this jjk fanfic mc is reborn in zenin clan, his name is Naoto zenin. and his power is enel fruit from one piece. Thanks
really wanted to like this but the power scaling is just all over the place with characters seemingly becoming stronger and weaker entirely based on the author's whims.
The writing quality is really good, the dialogue flows nicely, and I love lord of mysteries novel. I really can't think of any complains for this story. Its a easy 5 stars for me.
I have one question for u... What type of girls do u like??? Otherwise, I liked it. Not without mistakes, of course, but who doesn't make them?
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I really like this, there aren't a lot of lotm fanfics and most of them are dropped the only problem I have is the update stability but ehh there must be a reason
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Definitely worth reading, one of the few fanfictions on this app with a plot, capable of bringing out the life in the characters, introduce new stuff and still keep the flavour of JJK. Props to you author.
As mentioned in the description, this is a re-upload of my fanfic from the "Vandalizer". I would be very grateful if you could support the fanfic with power stones.
really pathetic mc abused and manipulated. his first and only goal should be to kill the old man. no to say he likes the abuse or that he feels alive fighting. thats pathetic.
The translation is pretty bad, other than that it's an OK fic. I think the biggest problem is how the translator gets even basic things wrong, like calling sorcerers mages.
It’s really good but man this author is from the 1800s or something😂 they have the most magnificent vocab I have ever seen
From all that I have read this fanfic is amazing and you should ignore the rating as much as you can, the first 2 or 3 chaps might be confusing but it is very good and you get it as you read, you can't judge a book in a few chapters specially when there are more than 30 chaps
Cara, é o seguinte a maioria das pessoas estão bravas porque a escala de poder do caminho do sacerdote vermelho foi diminuída para se encaixar na escala de jjk, mas fora isso é bem de boa uma ótima fica na vdd se colocar na escala da um 8/10 mais ou menos, as lutas são muito bem feitas o presosagem e consistente nada a reclamar!
El mejor fanfiction que he leido hasta el momento de jjk. Me interesa saber que secuencia sigue. Ojala nanami se retire con tranquilidad, se case con la panadera y gojo con utahime. El finales de los personajes original fue demasiado miserable.
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Revelar spoiler The first JJK fanfic I have ever read, and I am loving it. So far the characters are great. The side characters are dynamic and the main character is likable enough. The plot is also decent and unique with the MC not entirely on the main casts side. He has his own plans and ambitions which he will not forsake, this for me is a plus as for one it can generate conflict not just with the villains but some from the main cast. Two, it makes the MC more grounded sometimes putting his emotions such as pity aside for the sake of the bigger picture. He will surely make Kiritsugu proud. Lastly, it has LoTM elements in it which automatically makes it a must read for me. Thankfully the author delivered. Overall Rating: 8.5/10
problems : power: Red priest of war does not have flame teleport its the magician ability totally different patway. they have a flame transformation whic they use to travel. they gain the ability to enhance only at sequence 4 . instigation is not the power of the hunter pathway, but understandable as he seems to be connected to the sefirah .
This is frankly so amazing it one of the best stories I've read on this app 👏 ; I can't wait for more chapters.
I'll get on it. AS long as i get more chapters to read. I'll give this story powerstones..............................................................................
It was worth to read but you need solidify power scaling and world settings since some powers from Red priest pathways can effect the world itself. Thanks for the fanfic tho ☺️
Its pretty good, one of the issues I had was the MC doesn't really fit the Red Priest pathway IMO, would be better of as something like the Darkness pathway but that could just be me.
Just asking if anyone know or remember this jjk fanfic mc is reborn in zenin clan, his name is Naoto zenin. and his power is enel fruit from one piece. Thanks
really wanted to like this but the power scaling is just all over the place with characters seemingly becoming stronger and weaker entirely based on the author's whims.
The writing quality is really good, the dialogue flows nicely, and I love lord of mysteries novel. I really can't think of any complains for this story. Its a easy 5 stars for me.
I have one question for u... What type of girls do u like??? Otherwise, I liked it. Not without mistakes, of course, but who doesn't make them?
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I really like this, there aren't a lot of lotm fanfics and most of them are dropped the only problem I have is the update stability but ehh there must be a reason
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Definitely worth reading, one of the few fanfictions on this app with a plot, capable of bringing out the life in the characters, introduce new stuff and still keep the flavour of JJK. Props to you author.
As mentioned in the description, this is a re-upload of my fanfic from the "Vandalizer". I would be very grateful if you could support the fanfic with power stones.