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Does he ever find out that the others can read his diary entries? I’ve read about 30 chapters and surprisingly I kind of like the different pov’s and seeing what people are thinking, but I’m not too big of a fan of the mc being clueless about it and acting slick despite him totally spilling alllll his thoughts. It’s kinda fun to see the interactions with them knowing what he’s thinking and all but I don’t think I could keep reading if he remains clueless abt it forever.
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La única historia decente de one piece, en dónde Uta es un interés romántico, es realmente genial, la historia es más que nada harem, mc no tiene mucha lógica en su poder, simplemente tendrá el poder suficiente para ganar o escapar de los individuos más fuertes, por lo que la historia no se trata de las batallas o fuerza ganada con entrenamiento, mc no duda en compartir los beneficios del sistema con su tripulación, diría que es un buen capitán, la tripulación del mc es su harem, lo que no es raro, el harem es tipo Pokémon, pero no está mal hecho, habiendo cierto desarrollo con las chicas, si tuviera que dar una puntuación adecuada, sería un 7/10, una historia decente, muy adecuada para pasar el tiempo y no pensar demasiado, el mejor punto es que Uta está incluída desde el principio de la historia, como mi personaje favorita de one piece, con eso ya estoy contento.
Cayó, aparentemente, es una lastima, casi nadie usa a uta desde el principio, aunque la historia es bastante parecida a otras historias con la misma temática, es bastante divertido y puedes verlo si estás aburrido, califico de unos 7/10
Love the idea for this story! World progression and character interaction are also amazing. Can't wait to see what comes next. ............................................................
At first I was doubtful about this story, but after reading it I fell in love with the story, good job . . . . .. . . . .. . .. .. . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . .
A cara me dá agonia ler esse história do pode ser fanfic chinesa né 😮💨😮💨 meu instinto de otako transcendental está me dizendo que esse merda e china 😮💨😮💨falou só li até o capítulo 31 história e engraçado mas a agonia vence ótimo trabalho autor pro traduzir esse merda chinesa mas mesmo assim e china
What is the name of this work in the original? I searched using this title in Chinese but couldn't find it .................................
I swr since I started reading on webnovel this has been the most interesting book ever ARIGATO AUTHOR SAN😭😭
I sincerely hope that you release more chapters with short intervals and very good but very short,...............................................................
I finished the first 50 chapters, and I have to say it's a pretty good fanfic. I like the interaction of the characters and their reactions, something that many fanfics tend to fail at by making everyone seem like robots; this is not the case. I didn't have much confidence at first because of the diaries, but it turned out to be quite entertaining. Keep up the good work."
Wonderful fic, although one question, could you tell me what you use to translate from Chinese?
Really looking forward to seeing his development with everyone. There's so many stories that don't use most of the one piece characters but this one does. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
Keep it up. Great story. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
so far, I'm really loving the story. System is also very unique, similar to heroines listening to inner voice, but it's much better. I sometimes want to read other fanfics that have similar system like this but instead of one piece, maybe DxD or an anime that has multiple heroines. Anyhow, you won't regret reading this, full of comedy, which is perfect.
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Great work so far. I just hope Kaya doesn't join the Marins like in a similar fic, which was kinda non-sensical and seemed like a betrail even tho she was still fixated on the MC.
Hey translator.... Tell me, HOW you managed to post half a chapter from another translated novel here? I do not understand how that can happen. Chapter 27 of this, 70% of it. Is from another novel. Fix it
great translation the mtl is too cursed and hard to read so many wrong names, wrong grammars, pronouns and wrong east blue is called east china sea.
only one chapter in lol but I'm digging it! it's interesting and thank God it's got good grammar so far. Hate having to use half my brain to understand a sentence. anyways keep it up!
AFter digging around, i found the novel i read. Its called Dimensional Wanderer Starting with a Diary in One piece. The premise and the way its written is 90% similar with very few variations. Basically. They follow the template of plagiarism. As expected of chinese lol. The novel is still good though.
this story is so much like dimensional Wonder with diary in one piece.It has almost the same introI like that FF a lot so Iam going to read this too
ohhhhh, Another interesting One Piece story?I wonder, will thare be Lemons In This story since this harem Novel.?
Really good start. The grammar is also very good at the beginning, but we’ll see if that continues. I hope that the author cobtinues to update quickly and have the story move at a decent pace.
Keep updating Great Fanfic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Does he ever find out that the others can read his diary entries? I’ve read about 30 chapters and surprisingly I kind of like the different pov’s and seeing what people are thinking, but I’m not too big of a fan of the mc being clueless about it and acting slick despite him totally spilling alllll his thoughts. It’s kinda fun to see the interactions with them knowing what he’s thinking and all but I don’t think I could keep reading if he remains clueless abt it forever.
Revelar spoiler La única historia decente de one piece, en dónde Uta es un interés romántico, es realmente genial, la historia es más que nada harem, mc no tiene mucha lógica en su poder, simplemente tendrá el poder suficiente para ganar o escapar de los individuos más fuertes, por lo que la historia no se trata de las batallas o fuerza ganada con entrenamiento, mc no duda en compartir los beneficios del sistema con su tripulación, diría que es un buen capitán, la tripulación del mc es su harem, lo que no es raro, el harem es tipo Pokémon, pero no está mal hecho, habiendo cierto desarrollo con las chicas, si tuviera que dar una puntuación adecuada, sería un 7/10, una historia decente, muy adecuada para pasar el tiempo y no pensar demasiado, el mejor punto es que Uta está incluída desde el principio de la historia, como mi personaje favorita de one piece, con eso ya estoy contento.
Cayó, aparentemente, es una lastima, casi nadie usa a uta desde el principio, aunque la historia es bastante parecida a otras historias con la misma temática, es bastante divertido y puedes verlo si estás aburrido, califico de unos 7/10
Love the idea for this story! World progression and character interaction are also amazing. Can't wait to see what comes next. ............................................................
At first I was doubtful about this story, but after reading it I fell in love with the story, good job . . . . .. . . . .. . .. .. . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . .
A cara me dá agonia ler esse história do pode ser fanfic chinesa né 😮💨😮💨 meu instinto de otako transcendental está me dizendo que esse merda e china 😮💨😮💨falou só li até o capítulo 31 história e engraçado mas a agonia vence ótimo trabalho autor pro traduzir esse merda chinesa mas mesmo assim e china
What is the name of this work in the original? I searched using this title in Chinese but couldn't find it .................................
I swr since I started reading on webnovel this has been the most interesting book ever ARIGATO AUTHOR SAN😭😭
I sincerely hope that you release more chapters with short intervals and very good but very short,...............................................................
I finished the first 50 chapters, and I have to say it's a pretty good fanfic. I like the interaction of the characters and their reactions, something that many fanfics tend to fail at by making everyone seem like robots; this is not the case. I didn't have much confidence at first because of the diaries, but it turned out to be quite entertaining. Keep up the good work."
Wonderful fic, although one question, could you tell me what you use to translate from Chinese?
Really looking forward to seeing his development with everyone. There's so many stories that don't use most of the one piece characters but this one does. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
Keep it up. Great story. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
so far, I'm really loving the story. System is also very unique, similar to heroines listening to inner voice, but it's much better. I sometimes want to read other fanfics that have similar system like this but instead of one piece, maybe DxD or an anime that has multiple heroines. Anyhow, you won't regret reading this, full of comedy, which is perfect.
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Great work so far. I just hope Kaya doesn't join the Marins like in a similar fic, which was kinda non-sensical and seemed like a betrail even tho she was still fixated on the MC.
Hey translator.... Tell me, HOW you managed to post half a chapter from another translated novel here? I do not understand how that can happen. Chapter 27 of this, 70% of it. Is from another novel. Fix it
great translation the mtl is too cursed and hard to read so many wrong names, wrong grammars, pronouns and wrong east blue is called east china sea.
only one chapter in lol but I'm digging it! it's interesting and thank God it's got good grammar so far. Hate having to use half my brain to understand a sentence. anyways keep it up!
AFter digging around, i found the novel i read. Its called Dimensional Wanderer Starting with a Diary in One piece. The premise and the way its written is 90% similar with very few variations. Basically. They follow the template of plagiarism. As expected of chinese lol. The novel is still good though.
this story is so much like dimensional Wonder with diary in one piece.It has almost the same introI like that FF a lot so Iam going to read this too
ohhhhh, Another interesting One Piece story?I wonder, will thare be Lemons In This story since this harem Novel.?
Really good start. The grammar is also very good at the beginning, but we’ll see if that continues. I hope that the author cobtinues to update quickly and have the story move at a decent pace.
Keep updating Great Fanfic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]