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i like how this story is being developed. Its getting from better better and better. I want the writer to add romance but not like a harem no need a wife that supports the main character and genuinely loves him easy and simple as that
it is intriguing and I want to see how everything will unfold[img=Unalived][img=Shocked][img=More pls][img=Cries][img=Mad][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Feeling it][img=Cries][img=Feeling it]
Really enjoying it so far it tackles with the role of the side character make us shift from the perspective we always had with the protagonist to make us see the side untold story
the first chapters were basic but as it goes on it takes on a journey of originality , creativity even though no story can escape from the typical cliche it's still open a new perspective
Hello Author Here I wanted to thank everybody who reads my srtoryand inform you that i am writing this story for WSA so i would appreciate power stones and give me feesdbacks and reviews so we can make the story better together
For a first light novel i read it is really good . I liked the plot development. I hope to see more chapter and am hyped up.
Bro, it's a nice story with potential but that's got to proven correct by yourself okay? I made a overall judgement and rated you, now it has to be proven that my rating was correct and not flawed. Keep going brother...
i like how this story is being developed. Its getting from better better and better. I want the writer to add romance but not like a harem no need a wife that supports the main character and genuinely loves him easy and simple as that
it is intriguing and I want to see how everything will unfold[img=Unalived][img=Shocked][img=More pls][img=Cries][img=Mad][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Feeling it][img=Cries][img=Feeling it]
Really enjoying it so far it tackles with the role of the side character make us shift from the perspective we always had with the protagonist to make us see the side untold story
the first chapters were basic but as it goes on it takes on a journey of originality , creativity even though no story can escape from the typical cliche it's still open a new perspective
Hello Author Here I wanted to thank everybody who reads my srtoryand inform you that i am writing this story for WSA so i would appreciate power stones and give me feesdbacks and reviews so we can make the story better together
For a first light novel i read it is really good . I liked the plot development. I hope to see more chapter and am hyped up.
Bro, it's a nice story with potential but that's got to proven correct by yourself okay? I made a overall judgement and rated you, now it has to be proven that my rating was correct and not flawed. Keep going brother...
it's a good story, but the writing quality is terrible.