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Escribe una reseñaMain character Female. POV Hermione. Hermione centric. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Entré por Lucifer, pero el problema es que el personaje de Lucifer Morningstar no mantiene su personalidad inicial. Parece que al comienzo el autor quería dejar claro cómo era, pero ya para el capítulo 17 (o incluso antes) empieza a cambiar de forma aleatoria y sin sentido. Luego está el tema del sexo en su primer año: al principio mencionan que tienen 11 años al entrar, pero en otro capítulo dicen que no, que tienen 16. Además, está la excusa barata y poco convincente que usa el autor para que Hermione se vuelva loca por el protagonista. La historia empezó bastante bien, pero luego se convirtió en más de lo mismo: mismos sucesos, mismos acontecimientos, lo mismo que en las películas y libros, salvo que ahora son cuatro en las aventuras, no tres. El añadido de este personaje extra no aporta nada realmente novedoso ni interesante.
Toughed out the first 25 chapters but when herminone SA’d the MC and angled a weird Yandere affection with the MC who comes off as petulant more than charming I had to tap out. If your hunting lemons just pick a couple of the 18+ marked chapters and treat it like any other collection of random smut some I enjoyed but the plot ain’t worth the trouble for me.
How is this a harem story?. I’m so confused cause it says harem but it’s nainy Lucifer and hermione!!!
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I'll list what I can from 20 chapters that I read so far 1. Lucifer is does not act like Lucifer would, but acts more like edgy MCs not at all what Lucifer does 2. Lucifer has been nerfed so bad that its really sad 3. Hermione got a AU backstory that pretty much made her soooo annoying and kills this whole fic (IMO) 4. Lucifer is a Angel/Devil and yet weak Magic from a mortal world works on him, someone who is over billions of years old from the dawn of time and creation itself, yet mortal magic from a 12 year old kid works on him like its nothing 5. Author does not explain when people comments on parts that make no sense and just likes ur comment and then ignores you Author please explain why that is 🤨
Really good story imo. excited to read more. ............................................................................................................
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Hermione is MC. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
You took the book/movie, added Luci and made Hermione even more annoying than before in the most unnatural of ways...and she is what? 11 in the 1st year. Absolutely Trippin.
Great work and nice grammar with little to no mistakes. I see many people commenting and trashing about Luci being eligible for every house. Bruh, You guys haven't watched Lucifer huh? He is the light bringer! Lucifer is eligible to take the seat of GOD of all creations and becomes God in season 4, you guys think he can't get every house? Lucifer isn't evil, he punishes evil.
1.- Copy and paste (the book original). 2.- The fanfic have main protagonist to Hermione. 3.- Lucifer is secondary character. 4.- World background: only Hogwarts.
makes no sense to me... You follow canon way too much, you beat Ron up and prevent the golden trio but in the next chapter it's like nothing happened and follows the original plot with an extra character...
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Main character Female. POV Hermione. Hermione centric. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Entré por Lucifer, pero el problema es que el personaje de Lucifer Morningstar no mantiene su personalidad inicial. Parece que al comienzo el autor quería dejar claro cómo era, pero ya para el capítulo 17 (o incluso antes) empieza a cambiar de forma aleatoria y sin sentido. Luego está el tema del sexo en su primer año: al principio mencionan que tienen 11 años al entrar, pero en otro capítulo dicen que no, que tienen 16. Además, está la excusa barata y poco convincente que usa el autor para que Hermione se vuelva loca por el protagonista. La historia empezó bastante bien, pero luego se convirtió en más de lo mismo: mismos sucesos, mismos acontecimientos, lo mismo que en las películas y libros, salvo que ahora son cuatro en las aventuras, no tres. El añadido de este personaje extra no aporta nada realmente novedoso ni interesante.
Toughed out the first 25 chapters but when herminone SA’d the MC and angled a weird Yandere affection with the MC who comes off as petulant more than charming I had to tap out. If your hunting lemons just pick a couple of the 18+ marked chapters and treat it like any other collection of random smut some I enjoyed but the plot ain’t worth the trouble for me.
How is this a harem story?. I’m so confused cause it says harem but it’s nainy Lucifer and hermione!!!
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I'll list what I can from 20 chapters that I read so far 1. Lucifer is does not act like Lucifer would, but acts more like edgy MCs not at all what Lucifer does 2. Lucifer has been nerfed so bad that its really sad 3. Hermione got a AU backstory that pretty much made her soooo annoying and kills this whole fic (IMO) 4. Lucifer is a Angel/Devil and yet weak Magic from a mortal world works on him, someone who is over billions of years old from the dawn of time and creation itself, yet mortal magic from a 12 year old kid works on him like its nothing 5. Author does not explain when people comments on parts that make no sense and just likes ur comment and then ignores you Author please explain why that is 🤨
Really good story imo. excited to read more. ............................................................................................................
Bad story. [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
Hermione is MC. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
You took the book/movie, added Luci and made Hermione even more annoying than before in the most unnatural of ways...and she is what? 11 in the 1st year. Absolutely Trippin.
Great work and nice grammar with little to no mistakes. I see many people commenting and trashing about Luci being eligible for every house. Bruh, You guys haven't watched Lucifer huh? He is the light bringer! Lucifer is eligible to take the seat of GOD of all creations and becomes God in season 4, you guys think he can't get every house? Lucifer isn't evil, he punishes evil.
1.- Copy and paste (the book original). 2.- The fanfic have main protagonist to Hermione. 3.- Lucifer is secondary character. 4.- World background: only Hogwarts.
makes no sense to me... You follow canon way too much, you beat Ron up and prevent the golden trio but in the next chapter it's like nothing happened and follows the original plot with an extra character...
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