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Xcalibur_Xc

Author here with usual shameless 5 stars. As always, you got questions, let me know. Keep the reviews and comments only to the ff and try not to troll. I know some of those trolls will pay a visit as always even after losing arguments with me, so I will ignore them because it's boring. Anyway, troll reviews and comments will be deleted. Have a happy read.

1yr
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John_Rex_98

tis a better book about spiderman with seggs

18d
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JaKon
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I really enjoyed this spin on Spider-Man. Imagine Spider-Man more powered up, more ruthless, and going for the things and women he wants. Really good story, especially if you hate how gets treated in the comics. In this novel you really see him get justice in more ways than one.

1mth
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Von3566
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1mth
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rukuto

I would give this a solid 3/5. It is chaos. The pacing changes frequently, the focus keeps changing, the character personality keeps changing. You are reading two different linked stories (the one with the romance and sex, and the one with the superhero stuff). The blending of both failed fabulously in this, making me want to skip all the sex and romantic scenes or skip the superhero scenes (depending on my mood). Give it a try, but don't expect anything great.

1mth
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Shawn_Smith_8691

really enjoyed this story and I wished it would never end 10/10 would recommend

1mth
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Zeroren

What can be said read it yourself. It a good story that has it share of smutty ff that people love but it never takes away from the story and each relationship has quite a few dedicated chapters to each girl so it doesn't feel like pokemon.

1mth
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Hymaster986

The story was outstanding. I am a huge Marvel fan with Spider-Man is one of my favourite characters. From the start to end, I liked everything. Thanks for a great Spiderman 😁 😁 fanfic. Since the story has come to an end. I will say with Spidey's iconic quote to end this. "With Great Power... Comes Great Responsibility."

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1mth
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Santy_Melay

Too slow development, the author says he wants to develop everything well but it can be done in fewer chapters without so much filler. Curiously, the author says that he read the comics but seems not to know that Spiderman is stronger than King Pin, he literally beat him up, the author is the same as the scriptwriters of the movie, who even make him stronger than Spiderman, and no one complain about it but they do it if a character is black when in reality he is white.

2mth
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emanuelspk

it is to my liking 👍 🙃 keep up the good work 👏 🙌

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2mth
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YFactor1969

She-Hulk will be in the Harem? Please.... 🥺

2mth
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mike_w_0544

Good story, I like the MC. I sat down to read this book and it basically sucks you into the story. But everyone has their own likes and dislikes but if your looking for a good fanfic then I would recommend checking this out.

3mth
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Kaung_Kim

I don't know what to write but I like how you portrait the smart MC using intelligence to deal with villain.So five out of five ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ no drama !!!

3mth
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Britcio
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Me gustó bastante la historia 👍🏻 a pesar que no me agrada un harem grande pero igual funciona para mí jajaja, es fluido el desarrollo de la trama y una genial evolución personal del MC que es mucho más directo en sus métodos que un spidey normal, y sus momentos +18 tienen mucho detalle 😆👌🏻

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4mth
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Robert_Biederman_3424

I love the flow of the story ,quality is very good , and the world background is solid , the only part of what I have red up to now that kind of sticks out is his control of his emotions which are little bit to unstable it the only reason I did not give him a solid 5 star across the board

4mth
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monkeydashura

Can't wait for the chapter to drop keep up the good work author. Always dropping banger chapter for the story also love your stories .[img=disgusted]

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5mth
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pEmKayS
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This is a really good fanfic. The characters are well written. The plot is consistent On the downside, the plot is sometimes rushed and some things are dropped because there is not enough space for them in the plot due to the rush. But nothing critical. I recommend reading it.

5mth
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Monarch_106

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5mth
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6mth
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SANX100
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"Spider-Man 0X" is amazing! I'd like to thank the author for detailing everything in each chapter, including even the basic things. And, also, Peter Parker(MC) is a cool and calculative guy. In my opinion, the way he destroyed Kingpin's underground place is smart. Also, I like that the story has a slice of life. It gives me a little bit of relief in my soul.

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6mth
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Flash_YT

Will you make him be in the iron fist show to since it a part of marvel

6mth
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Kachow_0

I read up to chapter 6, and I'm already hating this mc because of his views on the previous peter, also after what the author replied to someone in the comments about peter being a loser I'm also gonna despise his mindset. I think spiderman/peter is a great person, respect a hero man, even if it's fictional character. in one of the comics when spiderman was about to quit being a hero, the god personally comes to tell him to continue, and shows peter how many people he had saved, this renews peter's resolve to be spiderman again what I'm trying to say is that, I quit this ff because author/mc doesn't respect peter/spiderman

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6mth
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JRCaste

I swear I've read this story before, its' no deja vu im certain this story was from another fanfic

7mth
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Kenny1243

This story is slow paced so that’s something I like. The grammar is pretty good no mistakes that I have seen.

9mth
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Cabelinho

Very good, I really liked it, I highly recommend it, the story and the plot are incredible, I love the development of the two characters and their personalities, I really liked the protagonist and the heroines, I'm Worshiping them

9mth
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CHEON_MA

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9mth
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Ghalib_Ali_5133

Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍aa

9mth
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escobe
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Good.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

10mth
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gustavo_hhhhdsd

I'm writing through the translator because I don't know English, the first 8/9 chapters were good, the development with Michele, the dialogues, everything was incredible, but out of nowhere it went downhill with his aunt starting to like him out of nowhere, fantasizing about him and etc. I was very disappointed but I still continued, then the flash tries to kill him, but I continued, and soon after a beggar saves him and we discover that the beggar has a history with oscorp and so on. In conclusion, it started well and became just another fiction without logical development (the first 8 chapters were on the way, a shame they were lost)

10mth
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Omnoseji

I honestly really liked it and there is good writing aswell not many(if any) misspellings

10mth
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_LordRavenclaw

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10mth
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Xcalibur_Xc

Author here with usual shameless 5 stars. As always, you got questions, let me know. Keep the reviews and comments only to the ff and try not to troll. I know some of those trolls will pay a visit as always even after losing arguments with me, so I will ignore them because it's boring. Anyway, troll reviews and comments will be deleted. Have a happy read.

1yr
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John_Rex_98

tis a better book about spiderman with seggs

18d
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JaKon
LV 15 Badge

I really enjoyed this spin on Spider-Man. Imagine Spider-Man more powered up, more ruthless, and going for the things and women he wants. Really good story, especially if you hate how gets treated in the comics. In this novel you really see him get justice in more ways than one.

1mth
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Von3566
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1mth
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rukuto

I would give this a solid 3/5. It is chaos. The pacing changes frequently, the focus keeps changing, the character personality keeps changing. You are reading two different linked stories (the one with the romance and sex, and the one with the superhero stuff). The blending of both failed fabulously in this, making me want to skip all the sex and romantic scenes or skip the superhero scenes (depending on my mood). Give it a try, but don't expect anything great.

1mth
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Shawn_Smith_8691

really enjoyed this story and I wished it would never end 10/10 would recommend

1mth
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Zeroren

What can be said read it yourself. It a good story that has it share of smutty ff that people love but it never takes away from the story and each relationship has quite a few dedicated chapters to each girl so it doesn't feel like pokemon.

1mth
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Hymaster986

The story was outstanding. I am a huge Marvel fan with Spider-Man is one of my favourite characters. From the start to end, I liked everything. Thanks for a great Spiderman 😁 😁 fanfic. Since the story has come to an end. I will say with Spidey's iconic quote to end this. "With Great Power... Comes Great Responsibility."

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1mth
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Santy_Melay

Too slow development, the author says he wants to develop everything well but it can be done in fewer chapters without so much filler. Curiously, the author says that he read the comics but seems not to know that Spiderman is stronger than King Pin, he literally beat him up, the author is the same as the scriptwriters of the movie, who even make him stronger than Spiderman, and no one complain about it but they do it if a character is black when in reality he is white.

2mth
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emanuelspk

it is to my liking 👍 🙃 keep up the good work 👏 🙌

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2mth
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YFactor1969

She-Hulk will be in the Harem? Please.... 🥺

2mth
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mike_w_0544

Good story, I like the MC. I sat down to read this book and it basically sucks you into the story. But everyone has their own likes and dislikes but if your looking for a good fanfic then I would recommend checking this out.

3mth
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Kaung_Kim

I don't know what to write but I like how you portrait the smart MC using intelligence to deal with villain.So five out of five ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ no drama !!!

3mth
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Britcio
LV 13 Badge

Me gustó bastante la historia 👍🏻 a pesar que no me agrada un harem grande pero igual funciona para mí jajaja, es fluido el desarrollo de la trama y una genial evolución personal del MC que es mucho más directo en sus métodos que un spidey normal, y sus momentos +18 tienen mucho detalle 😆👌🏻

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4mth
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Robert_Biederman_3424

I love the flow of the story ,quality is very good , and the world background is solid , the only part of what I have red up to now that kind of sticks out is his control of his emotions which are little bit to unstable it the only reason I did not give him a solid 5 star across the board

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monkeydashura

Can't wait for the chapter to drop keep up the good work author. Always dropping banger chapter for the story also love your stories .[img=disgusted]

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pEmKayS
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This is a really good fanfic. The characters are well written. The plot is consistent On the downside, the plot is sometimes rushed and some things are dropped because there is not enough space for them in the plot due to the rush. But nothing critical. I recommend reading it.

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Monarch_106

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_LordRavenclaw

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SANX100
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"Spider-Man 0X" is amazing! I'd like to thank the author for detailing everything in each chapter, including even the basic things. And, also, Peter Parker(MC) is a cool and calculative guy. In my opinion, the way he destroyed Kingpin's underground place is smart. Also, I like that the story has a slice of life. It gives me a little bit of relief in my soul.

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Flash_YT

Will you make him be in the iron fist show to since it a part of marvel

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Kachow_0

I read up to chapter 6, and I'm already hating this mc because of his views on the previous peter, also after what the author replied to someone in the comments about peter being a loser I'm also gonna despise his mindset. I think spiderman/peter is a great person, respect a hero man, even if it's fictional character. in one of the comics when spiderman was about to quit being a hero, the god personally comes to tell him to continue, and shows peter how many people he had saved, this renews peter's resolve to be spiderman again what I'm trying to say is that, I quit this ff because author/mc doesn't respect peter/spiderman

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JRCaste

I swear I've read this story before, its' no deja vu im certain this story was from another fanfic

7mth
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Kenny1243

This story is slow paced so that’s something I like. The grammar is pretty good no mistakes that I have seen.

9mth
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Cabelinho

Very good, I really liked it, I highly recommend it, the story and the plot are incredible, I love the development of the two characters and their personalities, I really liked the protagonist and the heroines, I'm Worshiping them

9mth
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CHEON_MA

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Ghalib_Ali_5133

Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍aa

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escobe
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Good.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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gustavo_hhhhdsd

I'm writing through the translator because I don't know English, the first 8/9 chapters were good, the development with Michele, the dialogues, everything was incredible, but out of nowhere it went downhill with his aunt starting to like him out of nowhere, fantasizing about him and etc. I was very disappointed but I still continued, then the flash tries to kill him, but I continued, and soon after a beggar saves him and we discover that the beggar has a history with oscorp and so on. In conclusion, it started well and became just another fiction without logical development (the first 8 chapters were on the way, a shame they were lost)

10mth
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Omnoseji

I honestly really liked it and there is good writing aswell not many(if any) misspellings

10mth
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_LordRavenclaw

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