A Gamer in Remnant & Multiverse

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Shirou_9689

A good fic with very good world building but the story progression is bit bland it can be improved .

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Prakash_Das_7278

i really like the story so far....... mc is smart......👍👍👍🏻

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Mr_X_6352

A good story overall I really like the way In which magic system was developed and fantastic world building the remnant arc was good but u good sloppy after that and last few chaps are especially bad

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Shivam_031

A very good rwby fic and gamer element is a plus too

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antonio_montenegro

Parecía bueno pero poco a poco se vuelve rancio ..................................................................................................

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GreyKnights

good read so far

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Fullety1009

I really love the story I haven’t finished it yet but is really good so far I already got to the part where another reincarnated person is mentioned they haven’t met yet but I normally don’t like stories with more than one reincarnated person but the story is making me like it more.

LV 13

Akito_

The beginning is great but the middle chunk when after he makes his body and goes after the ice elemental’s is horrendous to get through if a slog fest from there in with just enough intrigue that been built up for you try and push through but from chapter 17 it’s been a slog to get through it’s still interesting but I’m at chapter 30 and it feels like read like 5 time as much as the first 18 chapters with less than half the satisfaction of the beginning 18.

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antmanFN

ummmmmm it was good in the beginning until summer and the Mc started sharing souls now its just super uncomfortable and hard to read and the Arthur isn't saying or answering anything bro is just liking comments idk what's going on anymore BTW the Mc is gay

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ImmortalRoachKing

This is a slight warning to future readers… The MC at around chapter 8 merges his soul with a married woman, he feels everything she does (according to how it is worded), and the woman makes love with her husband (happens offscreen, but kisses onscreen which he mentions is pleasant and tastes like sunflower seeds or something)…I’m not gonna review bomb this fic with 1 star or anything, as it’s a decent read, I’d just rather not have had a sudden seemingly Bi-curious MC…

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Book_Addict_8094

This story is great it took me a week to get to the end but that’s impressive because I am addicted to reading and it was the only thing I read that week.

LV 4

Death_Council

Don’t know why it ended on a spot that is obviously not a ending, so I hope someday you comeback and put more maybe with a actual ending

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AlastorGF

nunca me paso que dejen un fanfic después del primer capitulo pero supongo que hay una primera ves para todo, Sinceramente no logro entender al autor para que darle padres??? porque no podía ser un huérfano ? los padres fuera la cosa mas inútil que vi en este fanfic no llegaron al segundo capitulo y el hecho que el MC pueda usar magia tan fácil cuando ni tiene 2 años me pareció aun mas incoherente

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Cerberus_Daley

More chapters to tie the story to a complete close would make this story so much better