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Me gusta mucho esta historia. Es diferente a las demás, espero que no te desanimes con comentarios que lo buscan es molestar .......................................................................
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Absolutamente asqueroso 262 un completa mierda le jode la mente a la esposa y le miente y le oculta cosas pedaso de basura se volvió el profesor x viol#ndo mentes basura asquerosa 🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮
If any people reading this want something similar but better quality search for Priest, Pray For Us from SrCuervo ...........................
I’ve been seeing so many reference to many horror movies and one of them that the church and rules for a exorcism is the popes exorcist which is the one I’m watching righ now
Revelar spoiler
Really good story, the translation for names is a bit confusing at times because names and spellings of those names gets translated weirdly with multiple versions of said names to the point I have to wonder if Geoffry is Jeffery or vice versa or if they are two different separate people with similar names and similar things like that happens for other characters like Eileen and Irene I want to say they are the same person right? Not nagging just stating my opinion on what I’ve noticed about the story. Love the story and I binge read like everything about it that was available for the last two days till I finished what was available so thanks and it was an enjoyable story series.
Update lebih banyak dong,saya suka ceritanya,tapi updatenya terlalu lambat😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
this novel is if you gave the song "God bless America" a human form. like every time he fights a supernatural creature all I can think of is that song playing as he pulls out two desert eagle s
It's very good story, hope so he use less blast or otherwise everything is going to solved by blast and story will loose it's interest ................... ..................... .... ........ .....
entre sin esperar nada, pero es muy entretenido, me gusta mucho la actitud del padre para crear "granadas sagradas" jajaja
This gets progressively more Dog-S the further it goes... He just rolls in blast everything and with zero struggle deals with everything. Literally just taking a P on the entire western horror media. Also MC is pretty much the generic Chinese protagonist. Meaning a sociopath who likes to pretend like hes a good person but when it actually comes down to it he will literally let people die just because he didn't trigger a mission from the system. One good example is when the Necronomicon is dealt with in 2 or 3 chapters like its some trivial joke. He knows something is wrong with the girl who looks for him for aid but because she didn't come to talk to him and thus trigger a mission he ignores it. And the outcome is the same as in the movie. Everyone dies and the girl is now an orphan. Almost right after he has to deal with a cursed mirror. Tells a woman who's entire family was butchered by it to get it for him, NOT bring it to him and when she does acquire it he goes to F around with some dollhouse. This all while fully aware it can kill within a day and she has no means of actually defending herself.
Revelar spoiler More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
The book is very, very good.I haven't seen it but I want it all my time reading.But I would like to know the raw link
To be honest, I don't understand why this novel doesn't have 5 stars since from what I've been reading it is very well structured in addition to having an incredible development, I just hope that you continue like this and delight us with more of this masterpiece
The story and premise is good, but overall is a terrible reading experience. Grammar and sentence structure is so horrendus tha an AI would do a better job writing a story. I have to filter the text I’m reading like I’m reading a Xuxia cultivation novel x2, it’s that bad. The conflict in the story is also terrible as there’s no tension, or worry as the terrible writing quality draws from the experience. This story would be interesting if there was an editor to fix all the mistakes. However I tried and I can’t read any further the grammar and way everyone interacts, talks and thinks is borderline robotic. I made it to chapter 62 before stopping thinking it’d get better, it dosen’t
Bastante bueno more more moreore more more more more mroore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
It's very good story,l like the system because it did not make him superman and still with in humans limit. May be add some sacrifice some stuff
Awesome story. Want to point out that it's not always supernatural horror movies; John Wick also exist in this story so... Anyway, good read if you just want to pass time.
çok iyi bence ama çok sevdim umarım devamı gelir. en iyi yanıda rahip olması bu arada 140 kelimede çok uzunmuş. ham afını verirseniz sevinirim.
I've only read up to chapter 9 but so far I'm loving it. I like all the different supernatural/ Haunting moves that have been used in this fanfiction
Je peux dire que j'ai adoré 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Raw name or link?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I mean, what can I say? It's not really that bad in my opinion. It's good for a quick read up to about one hundred chapters and delivers exactly what you'd expect. I think there's another novel on this sight with the same premise but with Better writing and story, However, it has romance :( In terms of characters', i actually like York somewhat. He's like a priest, if you sent him on steroids and gave him muscle for days! However, here in lies the biggest problem for me. The novel simply does not have a direction or a gripping plot in any way. Why? Because York is just OP and the monsters and demons just feel like his punching bag. Obviously, this takes away from why we like these horror type entities, since their powerful, malicious and mysterious. But to York, they might as well be crackheads on the street trying to rob a fully armed gun wielding super soldier. Ofcourse their are some other story stuff too, like the whole wick thing. I didn't come here to read about gangs and assassins, I came to read about demons and priests. Overall, it's not too bad, but it gets old fast and you'll probably end up skimming through the boring parts until you drop it unless you like this overly op type MC.
Revelar spoiler Me gusta mucho esta historia. Es diferente a las demás, espero que no te desanimes con comentarios que lo buscan es molestar .......................................................................
🙄 Mc is like to chinese protagonist. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Absolutamente asqueroso 262 un completa mierda le jode la mente a la esposa y le miente y le oculta cosas pedaso de basura se volvió el profesor x viol#ndo mentes basura asquerosa 🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮
If any people reading this want something similar but better quality search for Priest, Pray For Us from SrCuervo ...........................
I’ve been seeing so many reference to many horror movies and one of them that the church and rules for a exorcism is the popes exorcist which is the one I’m watching righ now
Revelar spoiler Really good story, the translation for names is a bit confusing at times because names and spellings of those names gets translated weirdly with multiple versions of said names to the point I have to wonder if Geoffry is Jeffery or vice versa or if they are two different separate people with similar names and similar things like that happens for other characters like Eileen and Irene I want to say they are the same person right? Not nagging just stating my opinion on what I’ve noticed about the story. Love the story and I binge read like everything about it that was available for the last two days till I finished what was available so thanks and it was an enjoyable story series.
Update lebih banyak dong,saya suka ceritanya,tapi updatenya terlalu lambat😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
this novel is if you gave the song "God bless America" a human form. like every time he fights a supernatural creature all I can think of is that song playing as he pulls out two desert eagle s
It's very good story, hope so he use less blast or otherwise everything is going to solved by blast and story will loose it's interest ................... ..................... .... ........ .....
entre sin esperar nada, pero es muy entretenido, me gusta mucho la actitud del padre para crear "granadas sagradas" jajaja
This gets progressively more Dog-S the further it goes... He just rolls in blast everything and with zero struggle deals with everything. Literally just taking a P on the entire western horror media. Also MC is pretty much the generic Chinese protagonist. Meaning a sociopath who likes to pretend like hes a good person but when it actually comes down to it he will literally let people die just because he didn't trigger a mission from the system. One good example is when the Necronomicon is dealt with in 2 or 3 chapters like its some trivial joke. He knows something is wrong with the girl who looks for him for aid but because she didn't come to talk to him and thus trigger a mission he ignores it. And the outcome is the same as in the movie. Everyone dies and the girl is now an orphan. Almost right after he has to deal with a cursed mirror. Tells a woman who's entire family was butchered by it to get it for him, NOT bring it to him and when she does acquire it he goes to F around with some dollhouse. This all while fully aware it can kill within a day and she has no means of actually defending herself.
Revelar spoiler More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
The book is very, very good.I haven't seen it but I want it all my time reading.But I would like to know the raw link
To be honest, I don't understand why this novel doesn't have 5 stars since from what I've been reading it is very well structured in addition to having an incredible development, I just hope that you continue like this and delight us with more of this masterpiece
The story and premise is good, but overall is a terrible reading experience. Grammar and sentence structure is so horrendus tha an AI would do a better job writing a story. I have to filter the text I’m reading like I’m reading a Xuxia cultivation novel x2, it’s that bad. The conflict in the story is also terrible as there’s no tension, or worry as the terrible writing quality draws from the experience. This story would be interesting if there was an editor to fix all the mistakes. However I tried and I can’t read any further the grammar and way everyone interacts, talks and thinks is borderline robotic. I made it to chapter 62 before stopping thinking it’d get better, it dosen’t
Bastante bueno more more moreore more more more more mroore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
It's very good story,l like the system because it did not make him superman and still with in humans limit. May be add some sacrifice some stuff
Awesome story. Want to point out that it's not always supernatural horror movies; John Wick also exist in this story so... Anyway, good read if you just want to pass time.
çok iyi bence ama çok sevdim umarım devamı gelir. en iyi yanıda rahip olması bu arada 140 kelimede çok uzunmuş. ham afını verirseniz sevinirim.
I've only read up to chapter 9 but so far I'm loving it. I like all the different supernatural/ Haunting moves that have been used in this fanfiction
Je peux dire que j'ai adoré 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Raw name or link?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I mean, what can I say? It's not really that bad in my opinion. It's good for a quick read up to about one hundred chapters and delivers exactly what you'd expect. I think there's another novel on this sight with the same premise but with Better writing and story, However, it has romance :( In terms of characters', i actually like York somewhat. He's like a priest, if you sent him on steroids and gave him muscle for days! However, here in lies the biggest problem for me. The novel simply does not have a direction or a gripping plot in any way. Why? Because York is just OP and the monsters and demons just feel like his punching bag. Obviously, this takes away from why we like these horror type entities, since their powerful, malicious and mysterious. But to York, they might as well be crackheads on the street trying to rob a fully armed gun wielding super soldier. Ofcourse their are some other story stuff too, like the whole wick thing. I didn't come here to read about gangs and assassins, I came to read about demons and priests. Overall, it's not too bad, but it gets old fast and you'll probably end up skimming through the boring parts until you drop it unless you like this overly op type MC.
Revelar spoiler