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I hope you are only using AI tools to fix grammars since dialogue seems unnatural and same tone always. Also 80 KM west of manila is too close for as they violate philippine airspace remeber 200 Nm is the EEZ. And general is for army and admiral for navy as far as i know
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A truly braindead Mc, and no emotions in most of the conversations att all....................... A truly braindead Mc, and no emotions in most of the conversations att all.......................
Just another overpowered tycoon story. You get to the 2nd chapter you can guess the rest. at least make it a bit hard for the MC.
it's alright, a nice slice of life novel. Sadly, it doesn't really give what I was hoping for. 100 chapters in and all the mc "invents" is a really good solar panel. It's about building a business empire. The technological system and inventing cool stuff play a minimal role. That's not necessarily a bad thing per se, but I was looking for sci fy stuff.
300+ch in and its boring. There character has its moments of problems but everything is solved easily by using money and luck. His ability is not that he develops or learn thing but rather grinding “books” and gaining xp to lvl up and unlock full finished products. There is no sense of development and the romance is kinda not flourished but it’s there. Overall it stops being interesting and becomes monotonous.
The biggest issue for me is everything is calculated in Philippine Pesos. The problem is the story doesn't make much sense, because the tiny amounts the MC makes. It's a 60 to 1 conversion, for pesos to usd I wish the author fixed the values.
I read up to the 300+ chapter and can say it's one of best reads for me at least. I can easily recomend if you are interested in similar things.
I like the technological aspect but this MC sucks in every way possible. such poor business decisions and life decisions. there's nothing relatable or admirable about his character except for his care for his mother. definitely a let down.
En términos sencillos.....es inovador, porque este libro oh novela te está dando las instrucciones para que veas de como se crea una empresa y las dificultades que tiene. Hay cosas que ni sabía y este libro me mostró un mundo totalmente nuevo, me cambio la percepción de la realidad....un poquito.
Incredibly similar premise to Scholar's Advanced Technological System. The latter goes more in-depth regarding the specifics of the technology and build-up to produce them. Other than that there are some incredibly cringe moments where mc acts like he's a 5yr old shouting. I can't even definitively call that a face-slapping tag, it's 100% cringe.
Read up to ch 78 and this will be a blunt review. This story is obviously inspired by the “Scholar’s Advanced Technological System.” However the difference in quality and understanding of why that story succeeds is not the same. A major issue in this tech type stories is that the author can easily be bogged down writing jargon or a lot of inessential details that do not move the story forward and just make you scroll through the chapter because as a reader you know it’s not important. This is a failure in any book in my opinion. Readers should not feel that they are reading filler and that their time is wasted reading. However, I felt that way so many times reading this story. There were chapters where more than half of it was wasted on a list of inconsequential information that would not even matter one chapter over. The reason SATS succeeded is because the author understood how to temper the info dumps, in that story they are reserved only for techno jargon where there is some competition or tension in the story, making you be invested in the jargon, even if all of it did not make sense to a normal person. Here is just wasted on the specs of a truck, properties, or employee listings. Now onto the story aspects. The system and its inception is super cookie cutter, some generic Goddess™️ finds pity on this generic dude is “struggling oh so much” with the most generic issues. Honestly, the background of the main character would not be that important if it wasn’t so bland. Now the story progress is suffering from the same issue of the info dumps, bogged down by inconsequential content. Oh he has to file for business permits, oh he has to spend four chapters buying a truck to stroke his bruised ego because some guy looked at him funny, oh he has to spend multiple chapters getting a drivers license. It’s all just so banal and honestly not interesting to read. Which is the worst thing a book can do, bore you. Which is funny considering the most interesting part of this novel are the two female side characters who are investors in his business. They are interesting. I feel like the story would be so much better if a lot of the “filler” is cut down and the author focuses on moving the story forward instead of meandering on the most mundane aspects of the story.
Good and smart writing. As realistic as it can be. Only concern are the time skips that the story might look too rush. Overall a better read. Good job author. Cheers. Ps. Can you put some more action on the story as the MC might encounter dangerous plots or enemies as he grow his business empire.
this story is interesting. it is slow paced with Mc getting better in society, and it my first time reading a novel like this and its has potential to be best in future.
I will give the bluntest review possible. If you like technology, business, and entrepreneurship/innovation - you may find reading this enjoyable. However, for those who don’t, I do not recommend this novel. The reason? The main character acquires a technology system from an ethereal being (a god) for a reason like “You interest me because you struggle a lot.” This reason is quite absurd to say the least and there are billions of others that are in his exact situation - nothing made him very special or standout. There was also very little character introduction prior to the question of the system. This system also theoretically gives him the knowledge and ability to create inventions decades ahead of when they’re supposed to be introduced. However, the main character claims these inventions are his and through his own volition, even going as far as getting mad when “his” solar panel invention is stolen. It’s quite infuriating because the MC is basically joyriding and overcomes his “struggles” in 5 chapters by proceeding to win 15 million pesos through gambling. An absurd story that you should only read if you’re a tech fanatic, and even then I wouldn’t recommend it.
The problem is that almost all technology stories are in a hurry to use advanced technology. Before this MC was average to the bottom of the class, you can improve your studies, but you cannot become an inventor within 1 month. He makes something that is 4.5 times better than the whole world, which is not compatible with reason. There is also a young rich girl who comes to invest in your card. Among all the technological novels that I have read so far, there was one that did not progress all at once, but slowly progressed, but I have not found another one like it. (Google Translate)
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As of chapter 57 I’m enjoying the book. I had to stop writing though because of the pay wall. Hoping to pick it back up again next week when I can buy more coins
I enjoyed the story quite a bit until I couldn't read it anymore due to requiring the app. I think that was around chapter 30 or 32. If this is a translation, I couldn't tell. The characters feel relatively real though it has the undertone of the young master feel to it. The system plays an important part but so far it doesn't feel like the driving force. I would definitely continue reading this and recommend the story if I could.
It was good at first but man does this get draged out. I mean 70 chapters in and still he hasnt produced anything. And why does he even need to produce stuff if he could just sit back and let his super advanced Ai do stock trading for him?
Revelar spoiler
I liked this novel but I didn't like mc because he explains everything to people 1 example is when he was buying a car why would he tell them like he's starting a company or that he wanna show of to a guys I'm mean I can come up with other things he did but yeah overall it was good except how the mc behaves
Revelar spoiler
Good writing. I know that there’s a lot of this kind of trope here in webnovel but stil the writing is splendid. Can’t wait for more chapters.
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I hope you are only using AI tools to fix grammars since dialogue seems unnatural and same tone always. Also 80 KM west of manila is too close for as they violate philippine airspace remeber 200 Nm is the EEZ. And general is for army and admiral for navy as far as i know
Revelar spoiler A truly braindead Mc, and no emotions in most of the conversations att all....................... A truly braindead Mc, and no emotions in most of the conversations att all.......................
Just another overpowered tycoon story. You get to the 2nd chapter you can guess the rest. at least make it a bit hard for the MC.
it's alright, a nice slice of life novel. Sadly, it doesn't really give what I was hoping for. 100 chapters in and all the mc "invents" is a really good solar panel. It's about building a business empire. The technological system and inventing cool stuff play a minimal role. That's not necessarily a bad thing per se, but I was looking for sci fy stuff.
300+ch in and its boring. There character has its moments of problems but everything is solved easily by using money and luck. His ability is not that he develops or learn thing but rather grinding “books” and gaining xp to lvl up and unlock full finished products. There is no sense of development and the romance is kinda not flourished but it’s there. Overall it stops being interesting and becomes monotonous.
The biggest issue for me is everything is calculated in Philippine Pesos. The problem is the story doesn't make much sense, because the tiny amounts the MC makes. It's a 60 to 1 conversion, for pesos to usd I wish the author fixed the values.
I read up to the 300+ chapter and can say it's one of best reads for me at least. I can easily recomend if you are interested in similar things.
I like the technological aspect but this MC sucks in every way possible. such poor business decisions and life decisions. there's nothing relatable or admirable about his character except for his care for his mother. definitely a let down.
En términos sencillos.....es inovador, porque este libro oh novela te está dando las instrucciones para que veas de como se crea una empresa y las dificultades que tiene. Hay cosas que ni sabía y este libro me mostró un mundo totalmente nuevo, me cambio la percepción de la realidad....un poquito.
Incredibly similar premise to Scholar's Advanced Technological System. The latter goes more in-depth regarding the specifics of the technology and build-up to produce them. Other than that there are some incredibly cringe moments where mc acts like he's a 5yr old shouting. I can't even definitively call that a face-slapping tag, it's 100% cringe.
Read up to ch 78 and this will be a blunt review. This story is obviously inspired by the “Scholar’s Advanced Technological System.” However the difference in quality and understanding of why that story succeeds is not the same. A major issue in this tech type stories is that the author can easily be bogged down writing jargon or a lot of inessential details that do not move the story forward and just make you scroll through the chapter because as a reader you know it’s not important. This is a failure in any book in my opinion. Readers should not feel that they are reading filler and that their time is wasted reading. However, I felt that way so many times reading this story. There were chapters where more than half of it was wasted on a list of inconsequential information that would not even matter one chapter over. The reason SATS succeeded is because the author understood how to temper the info dumps, in that story they are reserved only for techno jargon where there is some competition or tension in the story, making you be invested in the jargon, even if all of it did not make sense to a normal person. Here is just wasted on the specs of a truck, properties, or employee listings. Now onto the story aspects. The system and its inception is super cookie cutter, some generic Goddess™️ finds pity on this generic dude is “struggling oh so much” with the most generic issues. Honestly, the background of the main character would not be that important if it wasn’t so bland. Now the story progress is suffering from the same issue of the info dumps, bogged down by inconsequential content. Oh he has to file for business permits, oh he has to spend four chapters buying a truck to stroke his bruised ego because some guy looked at him funny, oh he has to spend multiple chapters getting a drivers license. It’s all just so banal and honestly not interesting to read. Which is the worst thing a book can do, bore you. Which is funny considering the most interesting part of this novel are the two female side characters who are investors in his business. They are interesting. I feel like the story would be so much better if a lot of the “filler” is cut down and the author focuses on moving the story forward instead of meandering on the most mundane aspects of the story.
Good and smart writing. As realistic as it can be. Only concern are the time skips that the story might look too rush. Overall a better read. Good job author. Cheers. Ps. Can you put some more action on the story as the MC might encounter dangerous plots or enemies as he grow his business empire.
this story is interesting. it is slow paced with Mc getting better in society, and it my first time reading a novel like this and its has potential to be best in future.
I will give the bluntest review possible. If you like technology, business, and entrepreneurship/innovation - you may find reading this enjoyable. However, for those who don’t, I do not recommend this novel. The reason? The main character acquires a technology system from an ethereal being (a god) for a reason like “You interest me because you struggle a lot.” This reason is quite absurd to say the least and there are billions of others that are in his exact situation - nothing made him very special or standout. There was also very little character introduction prior to the question of the system. This system also theoretically gives him the knowledge and ability to create inventions decades ahead of when they’re supposed to be introduced. However, the main character claims these inventions are his and through his own volition, even going as far as getting mad when “his” solar panel invention is stolen. It’s quite infuriating because the MC is basically joyriding and overcomes his “struggles” in 5 chapters by proceeding to win 15 million pesos through gambling. An absurd story that you should only read if you’re a tech fanatic, and even then I wouldn’t recommend it.
The problem is that almost all technology stories are in a hurry to use advanced technology. Before this MC was average to the bottom of the class, you can improve your studies, but you cannot become an inventor within 1 month. He makes something that is 4.5 times better than the whole world, which is not compatible with reason. There is also a young rich girl who comes to invest in your card. Among all the technological novels that I have read so far, there was one that did not progress all at once, but slowly progressed, but I have not found another one like it. (Google Translate)
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Отличное произведение советую всем людям прочесть это чудо!! Ажажажажажажажажжажажажажжажажажажажзанщэщнвнщышэеешыэщынээешыщэылпдыднвнындлплыеюлеыюлпфюлфпюоафюоафюоефлюыеюлпыюплыюпллплплпынщыефэшжешфжокф
As of chapter 57 I’m enjoying the book. I had to stop writing though because of the pay wall. Hoping to pick it back up again next week when I can buy more coins
I enjoyed the story quite a bit until I couldn't read it anymore due to requiring the app. I think that was around chapter 30 or 32. If this is a translation, I couldn't tell. The characters feel relatively real though it has the undertone of the young master feel to it. The system plays an important part but so far it doesn't feel like the driving force. I would definitely continue reading this and recommend the story if I could.
It was good at first but man does this get draged out. I mean 70 chapters in and still he hasnt produced anything. And why does he even need to produce stuff if he could just sit back and let his super advanced Ai do stock trading for him?
Revelar spoiler I liked this novel but I didn't like mc because he explains everything to people 1 example is when he was buying a car why would he tell them like he's starting a company or that he wanna show of to a guys I'm mean I can come up with other things he did but yeah overall it was good except how the mc behaves
Revelar spoiler Good writing. I know that there’s a lot of this kind of trope here in webnovel but stil the writing is splendid. Can’t wait for more chapters.
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